Talk:Kosovo at the 2024 Summer Olympics
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Nominator: History6042 (talk · contribs) 02:22, 31 March 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 03:04, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this article, expect the initial remarks soon! Vestrian24Bio 03:04, 17 April 2025 (UTC)
Comments
- EARWIG shows 4.8% - violations unlikely.
- According to Link-dispenser,
3 links that could be down are missing archive links.37 refs need an archive link.Except Marca doesn't work when it gets archived, the whole thing glitches, and some are not allowed to be archived.
There's a a duplicated citation - ref 24 & 25.Should link publishers in citations wherever possible.Refs 1, 2, 3, 10, 11, 16, 27, 33, 36, 38, 42, 44, 45, 48, 49 & 50 aren't formatted properly.Check the dates on citations..Also, in the citations publishers such as Olympics, Olympics.com, International Judo Federation, Olympic.org etc. shouldn't be italicized. Used the|Publisher=parameter on the CS1 templates to do so.- Add a language variant template.
Not done, I don't know how. - In the infobox,
Add caption to the flag.Just say Paris, no need for France to be there.- Don't have to put the year twice.
Not done, it is mandatory by the template I think. - Not sure if the "Other related appearances" is necessary...
Not done, it is mandatory by the template I think.
Could mention the medalists as well in the lead.Isn't there a work-around to avoid the whitespace before the medalists table... It could be done by adjusting widths, but also consider "Background" and "Competitors" section before the "Medalists" as that is a more proper order.Can't the background section be expanded a bit more..Link closing ceremony in the background section.Add sources to the Competitors section.Each table should have seperate "Key" or "Legend" lists below them, if applicable.- Isn't there an Olympics page on Wikipedia which could be linked to "universality places"..?
Not done, I don't think there is one. "He finished the race in 2:13.29 minutes" - he?On 2 August was round 1 from which she advanced to the Repechage; no mention of "round 1" anywhere..Don't have to mention other medalists from different countries here.Should mention what the rank is in the Athletics prose. Also, what is "TR17.2.3"?No need for abbreviations / Screen tips, instead use the Key / Legend for that.Also not necessary to link Athletics abbreviations#Disqualifications.First sentence of the "Judo" section should be, "Kosovo qualified five judokas for the Olympics: Akil Gjakova,[6] Distria Krasniqi,[7] Nora Gjakova,[8] Laura Fazliu,[9] and Loriana Kuka;[10] all of whom qualified through International Judo Federation (IJF) World Ranking List.[11]" - remove qualification from the subsequent paragraphs.Mention the full form IJF and link it on the first mention.Link Daniel Cargnin (judoka) in the prose.In the prose, women's –78 kg is linked to Judo at the 2024 Summer Olympics – Women's 57 kg instead of Judo at the 2024 Summer Olympics – Women's 78 kg.Should add the universality place note in the swimming section as well.In the swimming section, both athlete's debut and qualification can be mentioned together in the same sentence. Also, both of them could be said in the same paragraph.Add an alt text for the image.Qualification articles seem unnecessary for the hatnote. Could just link them in the prose wherever necessary.
Ping me when done. Vestrian24Bio 14:10, 19 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Vestrian24Bio History6042😊 (Contact me) 19:25, 19 April 2025 (UTC)
- @History6042:
- Take a look at United States at the 2008 Summer Paralympics's infobox (which is a GA); having the parameters doesn't make it mandatory I think.
- Don't have to repeat "Kosovo became an IOC member in August 2014" as it's already said in the previous sentence.
- Link 2024 Summer Olympics and Paris in the background section.
- Yugoslavia at the Olympics is linked twice in the background section.
- Key should only include the ones used in respective tables.
- That's all. Vestrian24Bio 12:38, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Vestrian24Bio, that is because the USA has no other related appearances at the Paralympics. Otherwise
Done. History6042😊 (Contact me) 13:22, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
- @Vestrian24Bio, that is because the USA has no other related appearances at the Paralympics. Otherwise
- @History6042:
- Source spot-check: pass
All else good, passing for GA. Vestrian24Bio 13:30, 20 April 2025 (UTC)
Final review
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