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Good article reassessment
Good article reassessment

Good article reassessment (GAR) is a process used to review and improve good articles (GAs) that may no longer meet the good article criteria (GACR). GAs are held to the current standards regardless of when they were promoted. All users are welcome to contribute to the process, regardless of whether they were involved with the initial nomination. Editors should prioritize bringing an article up to standard above delisting. Reassessments are listed for discussion below and are concluded according to consensus. The GAR Coordinators — Lee Vilenski, Iazyges, Chipmunkdavis, and Trainsandotherthings — work to organize these efforts, as well as to resolve contentious reviews. To quickly bring issues to their notice, or make a query, use the {{@GAR}} notification template, or make a comment on the talk page.

Good article reassessment is not a peer review process; for that use peer review. Content disputes on GAs should be resolved through normal dispute resolution processes. Good article reassessment only assesses whether the article meets the six good article criteria. Many common problems (including not meeting the general notability guideline, the presence of dead URLs, inconsistently formatted citations, and compliance with all aspects of the Manual of Style) are not covered by the GA criteria and therefore are not grounds for delisting. Instability in itself is not a reason to delist an article. Potential candidates for reassessment can be found on the cleanup listing. Delisted good articles can be renominated as good articles if editors believe they have resolved the issues that led to the delist.

Good article reassessment
Good article reassessment
Good article reassessment instructions

Before opening a reassessment

  1. Consider whether the article meets the good article criteria.
  2. Check that the article is stable. Requesting reassessment during a content dispute or edit war is usually inappropriate.
  3. Consider raising issues at the talk page of the article or requesting assistance from major contributors.
  4. If there are many similar articles already nominated at GAR, consider delaying the reassessment request. If an editor notices that many similar GARs are open and requests a hold, such requests should generally be granted.

Opening a reassessment

  1. To open a good article reassessment, use the GAR-helper script on the article. Detail your reasons for reassessing the article and submit. Your rationale must specify how you believe the article does not meet the good article criteria. GARs whose rationale does not include the GACR may be speedily closed.
  2. The user script does not notify major contributors or relevant WikiProjects. Notify these manually. You may use {{subst:GARMessage|ArticleName|page=n}} ~~~~ to do so, replacing ArticleName with the name of the article and n with the number of the reassessment page (1 if this is the first reassessment).
  3. Consider commenting on another reassessment (or several) to help with any backlog.
Manual opening steps
  1. Paste {{subst:GAR}} to the top of the article talk page. Do not place it inside another template. Save the page.
  2. Follow the bold link in the template to create a reassessment page.
  3. Detail your reasons for reassessing the article and save the page. Your rationale must specify how you believe the article does not meet the good article criteria. GARs whose rationale does not include the GACR may be speedily closed.
  4. The page will automatically be transcluded to this page via a bot, so there is no need to add it here manually.
  5. Transclude the assessment on the article talk page as follows: Edit the article talk page and paste {{Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/''ArticleName''/''n''}} at the bottom of the page. Replace ArticleName with the name of the article and n with the subpage number of the reassessment page you just created. This will display a new section named "GA Reassessment" followed by the individual reassessment discussion.
  6. Notify major contributing editors, including the nominator and the reviewer. Also consider notifying relevant active WikiProjects related to the article. The {{GARMessage}} template may be used for notifications by placing {{subst:GARMessage|ArticleName|GARpage=n}} ~~~~ on user talk pages. Replace ArticleName with the name of the article and n with the subpage number of the reassessment page you just created.

Reassessment process

  1. Editors should discuss the article's issues with reference to the good article criteria, and work cooperatively to resolve them. Comments should focus on the article's contents and adherence to the good article criteria.
  2. The priority should be to improve articles and retain them as GAs rather than to delist them, wherever reasonably possible.
  3. Interested editors can indicate their intention to fix the article and give updates on their progress in the GAR. Commentators should periodically check the GAR and give additional comments when necessary. Wikipedia is not compulsory and editors should not insist that commentators, interested editors, or past GAN nominators make the suggested changes, nor should they state that edits should have been completed before the GAR was opened.
  4. If discussion has stalled and there is no obvious consensus, uninvolved editors are strongly encouraged to add a new comment rather than closing the discussion.
  5. If discussion becomes contentious, participants may request the assistance of GAR coordinators at Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations. The coordinators may attempt to steer the discussion towards resolution or make a decisive close.

Closing a reassessment

To close a discussion, use the GANReviewTool script on the reassessment page of the article and explain the outcome of the discussion (whether there was consensus and what action was taken).

  1. GARs typically remain open for at least one month.
  2. Anyone may close a GAR, although discussions which have become controversial should be left for closure by experienced users or GAR coordinators.
  3. If a clear consensus develops among participants that the issues have been resolved and the article meets GACR, the reassessment may be closed as keep at any time.
    • If there is no consensus, the reassessment may also be closed as keep.
  4. After at least one month, if the article's issues are unresolved and there are no objections to delisting, the discussion may be closed as delist. Reassessments should not be closed as delist while editors are making good-faith improvements to the article.
    • If there have been no responses to the reassessment and no improvements to the article, the editor who opened the reassessment may presume a silent consensus and close as delist.
  5. If the article has been kept, consider awarding the Good Article Rescue Barnstar to the editor(s) who contributed significantly to bringing it up to standard.
Manual closing steps
  1. Locate {{GAR/current}} at the the reassessment page of the article. Replace it with {{subst:GAR/result|result=outcome}} ~~~~. Replace outcome with the outcome of the discussion (whether there was consensus and what action was taken) and explain how the consensus and action was determined from the comments. A bot will remove the assessment from the GA reassessment page.
  2. The article either meets or does not meet the good article criteria:
    • If the article now meets the criteria, you can keep the article listed as GA. To do this:
      • remove the {{GAR/link}} template from the article talk page
      • remove the {{GAR request}} template from the article talk page, if present
      • add or update the {{Article history}} template on the article talk page (example)
    • If the article still does not meet the criteria, you can delist it. To do this,
      • remove the {{GAR/link}} template from the article talk page
      • remove the {{GAR request}} template from the article talk page, if present
      • add or update the {{Article history}} template on the article talk page, setting currentstatus to DGA (delisted good article). (example)
      • blank the class parameter of the WikiProject templates on talk, or replace it with a new assessment
      • remove the {{good article}} template from the article page (example)
      • remove the article from the relevant list at good articles (example)
  3. Add the GAR to the most recent GAR archive page. (example)

Disputing a reassessment

  1. A GAR closure should only be contested if the closure was obviously against consensus or otherwise procedurally incorrect. A closure should only be disputed within the first seven days following the close.
  2. Before disputing a GAR closure, first discuss your concerns with the closing editor on their talk page.
  3. If discussing does not resolve concerns, editors should post at Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations and ask for review from uninvolved editors and the coordinators.

Articles needing possible reassessment

Good article reassessment

Talk notices given
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  4. The Chariot (band) 2025-02-12
  5. Battle of Marion 2025-02-22
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Find more: 2023 GA Sweeps Project

The Good articles listed below would benefit from the attention of reviewers as to whether they need to be reassessed. In cases where they do, please open a community reassessment and remove the {{GAR request}} template from the article talk page. In cases where they do not, remove the template from the article talk page.

The intention is to keep the above list empty most of the time. If an article is currently a featured article candidate, please do not open a reassessment until the FAC has been closed.

Articles listed for reassessment

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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There is uncited prose throughout the article. The article has too many small sections, some of which are only a sentence long. This doesn't follow criteria 2 regarding the article layout. (MOS:PARA) I also do not think the article meets WP:NPOV. It seems like this article is written to highlight the politician's adherance to popular Democratic policies in 2025. I think most of the prose about their political career needs to be removed, while his most important initiatives (not just votes on issues) are highlighted. Z1720 (talk) 15:26, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Uncited statements, especially in the "Gameplay" section. Z1720 (talk) 15:16, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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The article has uncited statements. It is also quite long, at over 10,000 words: I think some information can be spun out or removed because it is too much detail. The article has many block quotes, which are not needed for the reader to understand the context and contributes to its long length. Z1720 (talk) 15:14, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This is an important subject. I'll at least take a look. Hog Farm talk 04:13, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Honestly this article appears quite notable, rated as high importance for US history, in that context I don't think I find its length objectionable or unmanageable.
Some quote could be removed and summarised;
"We ... find that a part of your Majesty' s subjects, in the Province of the Massachusetts Bay, have proceeded so far to resist the authority of the supreme Legislature..."
"Whenever the army under command of General Gage, or any part thereof to the number of five hundred..."
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Where as I would oppose the removal of the quote from participates in the battle that seems more relevant to the article at hand, so without some other reason to suggest they represent a POV that should not be included I think they are fine.
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I am unable to find any statements in the article that are not cited at least at the paragraph level some uncited paragraphs exist but these appear entirely unobjectionable at least to me and the GA criteria are
> reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose); LeChatiliers Pupper (talk) 12:51, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There is some touching-up that could be done here. I'm busy with work but I'll try to make a library run either this weekend or next weekend. Some of the tags confuse me - I don't know what needs further explanation about "Nearly a hundred barrels of flour and salted food were thrown into the millpond". I have doubts about the free license status of the Franklin Mint medal and have nominated it for deletion on Commons. Hog Farm talk 16:07, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment page • GAN review not found
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Uncited text, including entire paragraphs. The lead does not summarise all major aspects of the article. Z1720 (talk) 13:56, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment page • GAN review not found
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs and quotations. Z1720 (talk) 13:45, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs and the entire "Film and television" section. Unresolved "citation needed" tags since June 2024. Z1720 (talk) 13:37, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Agree OrangeLolipopSnail (talk) 16:02, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment page • GAN review not found
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Uncited statements throughout the article, and some unresolved "why" and "by whom" tags. Z1720 (talk) 17:08, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Uncited statements. The lead's organisation is also unusual with several small paragraphs, and doesn't mention the subject's death. Z1720 (talk) 17:02, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 17:00, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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The second half of the third paragraph of the lead is not mentioned in the body. There is no explanation as to why this drug was withdrawn in the United States.

There are also several sections of the body which are not cited. Steelkamp (talk) 05:54, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Steelkamp Did you mention these issues on the talkpage, as is suggested on Wikipedia:Good article reassessment? IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 03:19, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No, that is only a suggestion after all. Steelkamp (talk) 03:21, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  1. The second half of the third paragraph does not need to be mentioned in the body as it is cited in the lead. I do not believe this is against any of the GA criteria, please let me know which GA criteria that violates.
  2. I don't believe that the lack of explanation is a violation of any GA criteria. However it could easily be added to the history.
  3. I'll take a go at finding citations for the unsourced parts. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 03:24, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I'd say the lack of explanation fails the broad in its coverage criteria. It leaves the reader with questions that aren't answered by the article. The good article criteria also mentions Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section, which means the lack of explanation in the body and only the lead is an issue under the criteria as well. Steelkamp (talk) 03:28, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, where in WP:MOSLEAD does it say that all text in the lead must be in the body, I'm having a hard time finding that. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 06:13, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    @Steelkamp I have fixed all the issues that were against GA criteria. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 06:29, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Per WP:CREATELEAD, There should not be anything in the lead that does not refer to specific content in the [body of the] article. Hence, I have added a Legal status section that now supports the second half of the third paragraph in the lead. Boghog (talk) 08:23, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you boghog for adding that, as I belive that all of the nominators issues are addressed now. However for future cases, the GA criteria do not require this, it is just preferred, as WP:MOSLEAD does not require this. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 15:41, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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A 2006 GA that has a number of uncited claims and citation needed tags. It's also pretty reliant on primary sources. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:11, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Article has prose issues, particularly the active templates. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 13:33, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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This article has lots of uncited prose, including entire paragraphs. The "Return to Impact Wrestling (2021)" section is after the "The Patriarchy (2023–present)" section, and the article is not concise. Z1720 (talk) 03:27, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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There are some uncited statements in the article. There is a "One source" orange banner at the top of the "Populism" section. Z1720 (talk) 16:36, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Uncited statements in the article, and the "Music video" section has an orange "additional citations needed" banner at the top since May 2013. Z1720 (talk) 16:29, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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There's a lot of uncited text: while some of it describes plot, others (especially in the "Blu-ray and DVD" section) does need a citation. Z1720 (talk) 16:19, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Strange that this reassessment hasn't turned into a long list of things that could be fixed or improved, maybe the reviewing editor got distracted and will get back to it? My two cents. I feel like the article has accumulated lots of bits of pieces and needs cleanup and refocus. Imagine an article that would explain and introduce the show to an encyclopedia reader who was not familiar with the show and had never heard about it before at all. The third paragraph of the lead section is also a cluttered unfocussed mess. This article is supposed to be about Friends, I would summarize more and reduce the details about the Joey spin-off to only one paragraph if possible (definitely remove the long quote from Bright). The international broadcast section feels a lot like boring list, editors might need to read MOS:TVINTL again. Rather than downgrading the article for failing reassessment, editors might better think of this as an opportunity to bring this up to Featured article quality. -- 109.77.194.177 (talk) 14:00, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • A reviewer does not have to list a whole bunch of problems in a GAR, and I think being succinct is more effective than an overwhelming list. Editors can address concerns, add concerns and fix up anything they feel they need. Z1720 (talk) 22:30, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Some uncited statements. IMDB is used as a source and needs to be replaced or the information cited to it removed. Z1720 (talk) 16:17, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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The "Route description" is not sourced. Is this information correct, and can it be sourced? The lead does not provide an overview of all aspects of the article, and is missing the history of the route, realignments, and suffixed routes. Z1720 (talk) 16:11, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

That was something I noticed as well, but I didn't bother opening a GAR. Wow, the route description really isn't sourced. NoobThreePointOh (talk) 16:24, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps we can use a mapping software as a source such as Google Maps? I know it should be used with caution, but it would be a good source if we can't find any others. ToThAc (talk) 00:50, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Well, the best-case scenario would probably be to use the USGS maps as well, since they are official maps which were licensed from USGS and can be trusted easily. This is just a suggestion, so I'm not sure. NoobThreePointOh (talk) 01:59, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · WatchWatch article reassessment pageMost recent review
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Claims of massive WP:NPOV violations were made at Template:Did you know nominations/Transgender health care misinformation. Courtesy pings to @Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist, Starship.paint, WhatamIdoing, Colin, and Void if removed:. Launchballer 11:57, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

1) Wrt the peer-reviewed claim: Colin removed it from the Cass Review article, was reverted, then went to @Snokalok's page who pointed him towards the p[ast talk page consensus at Cass Review to include the note it wasn't peer reviewed[1] It's been noted at the Cass Review article for months now.
2) Void if Removed claimed the article had NPOV violations, nobody on talk agreed (he was not part of the DYK conversation btw, Colin just cited him)
3) This article was also reviewed by @LoomCreek and @Dan Leonard, and partially by @IntentionallyDense who should also be pinged
4) WP:GAR says Consider raising issues at the talk page of the article or requesting assistance from major contributors. This has not been done. Colin did not raise specific NPOV issues apart from the peer-reviewed claim (which is silly per point 1), he just repeatedly insulted me at DYK (and had other editors warn him for that behavior - Snokalok, @LokiTheLiar, and @Generalrelative)[2][3]
I'm a little unsure how GAR works, if a user goes onto DYK and posts some walls of text insulting another, and brings up only one issue that nobody agrees with and has been talk page consensus for a while, and never goes to talk to improve things (even after being asked to), does that really justify a GAR? Are they normally opened with claims of massive WP:NPOV violations were made without identifying them? Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 21:05, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Most GARs are not opened with claims of massive NPOV violations. However, having a genuine concern that there seem to be such violations is a valid reason for GAR. Any non-trivial level of non-compliance with any one (or more) of the Wikipedia:Good article criteria is a valid reason for GAR. WhatamIdoing (talk) 21:33, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I may be old fashioned, but I was under the impression that if somebody claimed an article (with a few dozen contributors and talk page discussions agreeing it's neutral) was full of NPOV violations, they were expected to provide at least some evidence that's true. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 21:42, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
In my experience, and specifically considering the behavior around trans-related articles during the last ~15 years, I have found that editors frequently do not operate according to the usual principle that "whatever the game, whatever the rules, the rules are the same for both sides". I find that people who already agree with an article insist upon unimpeachable proof of error, and that people who already disagree with it do not require any at all. There is, in my experience, no comfortable middle ground.
If the article is going to be tagged with {{POV}}, then someone has to start a discussion "identifying specific issues that are actionable within Wikipedia's content policies", or the tag can be removed. This is probably lower than your goal of "some evidence that's true", and it only applies for the specific and exclusive purpose of slapping a POV banner across the article. There are no such requirements for accusations made in any other venue or through any other form. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:38, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"Genuine" isn't really the issue here. I fully believe that Colin's concern is *genuine*, but also his role in discussions about the Cass Review for a while has been to, and I'm trying to be as polite as possible about this, make very strong accusations about other editors ignoring science or being "conspiracy theorists" because they doubt the reliability of the Cass Review. He's already been warned about this at AE once and seems intent on continuing.
I call attention to this dynamic to point out that Colin's opinion is not the consensus even if he is in general a well-respected editor who generally knows what he's talking about. Loki (talk) 22:33, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"Genuine" is the issue here, in the sense that GARs don't get closed just because other editors think the concern is misplaced. We have deleted GARs, e.g., for being outright vandalism, but if there's a genuine concern, the path forward is to address is. That could mean explaining why the article is correct as it is, in which case the GAR will close as affirming the GA status. It could mean editors reaching a consensus that it does not meet the GA critieria, in which case the GAR will close with delisting the article. It could also mean improving the article. For example, this:
The KID-team at Sweden's Karolinska University Hospital in Stockholm, the second-largest hospital system in the country, announced that from May 2021 it would discontinue providing puberty blockers or cross-sex hormones to children under 16. Additionally, Karolinska changed its policy to cease providing puberty blockers or cross-sex hormones to teenagers 16–18, outside of approved clinical trials.
is rather more news style than is really appropriate (focusing on what was "announced" is news style). That could be re-written this way:
In May 2021, Sweden's Karolinska University Hospital discontinued puberty blockers and cross-sex hormones for everyone under 16. Teenagers age 16 to 18 could obtain them through clinical trials.
Frankly, the three-sentence-long review at Talk:Transgender health care misinformation/GA2 does not do a good job of convincing me that the review was adequate. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:53, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Void if Removed claimed the article had NPOV violations, nobody on talk agreed
Anyone can read the talk and see this is not true. Multiple editors were raising POV issues starting last December, long before I commented in mid/late January. Void if removed (talk) 22:55, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The Cass Review—a non-peer-reviewed independent evaluation of trans healthcare within NHS England - the non-peer-reviewed claim fails verification with the provided source. On the Cass Review article, the non-peer-reviewed claim is sourced to this pdf, where it can be found on page 10, TABLE 2.1, after which this fact is never mentioned again. Indeed, I cannot find this mentioned again in any other reliable source, only Reddit communities and suchlike. So, if nobody else seems to care about this, why should we?  Tewdar  18:17, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

At the DYK, the "ALT1" proposal says that it's a myth that trans kids tend to desist. This is 100% verifiable in reliable sources. However, I've been wondering whether that's entirely true – not that we're after Wikipedia:The Truth exactly, but that a simple "it's misinformation" might be misleading.
So let me tell a different story, with a claim that is equally verifiable as misinformation, but perhaps you'll find it's a bit more complicated than that.
Once upon a time, 300 18-year-old females went to college. In their first year, 200 of them got pregnant. Half of the pregnant ones had abortions or miscarriages during the first trimester. The other half gave birth.
  • The ones who didn't get pregnant until after university have a lifetime risk of breast cancer of 8.1%.
  • The ones whose pregnancies ended in births have a lifetime risk of breast cancer of 5.3%.
  • The ones whose pregnancies ended in abortions or miscarriages have a lifetime risk of breast cancer of 8.1%.
(These are real lifetime risk numbers for US residents, assuming ordinary risk factors.)
Now we could say that if you get pregnant at the age of 18, then having an abortion will cause your lifetime risk of breast cancer increases by 50%, compared to the alternative of giving birth. We could also say that if you get pregnant at the age of 18, then having an abortion will cause your lifetime risk of breast cancer to be exactly the same as if you hadn't gotten pregnant in the first place. Whether the risk is higher depends on the baseline you're choosing.
It is misinformation to say that abortions and miscarriages cause breast cancer. But it is also misinformation to tell pregnant 18 year olds that the decision about whether to get an abortion will make no difference to their lifetime cancer risks.
The reason I have told this long story is because I was reminded of it when I read the ALT1 proposal, which aligns with the sentence in the lead "Common false claims include...that most pre-pubertal transgender children "desist" and cease desiring transition after puberty" and the section Transgender health care misinformation#Desistance myth.
Some of this section seems more overtly POV push-y but still interesting to me personally, like the sentences talking about the etymology of the word desistance and the connection to criminal recidivism. "He took the word from this other psychiatric condition, and that other psychiatric condition took the word from criminology" isn't relevant to misinformation (so it shouldn't be in this article), and it feels like a way to smear the concept. I am fascinated by this factoid, but this is probably a violation of 3b: "it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style)".
Of more importance, and also harder to fix, I wonder whether we've done a good job of explaining reality here. There's ~375 words in this section, and – if I've understood it correctly, which I'm not sure about – it may be failing 1a: "the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct".
If I'm correct, reality looks something like this:
  • In the 1980s, gender clinics saw mostly young AMABs, of which a very large fraction were gender non-conforming (e.g., little boys who liked wearing princess dresses but who didn't verbally express a "consistent, persistent, and insistent" desire to be girls) and who mostly grew up to be fabulous gay men, plus a small fraction of "actually trans" kids, who grew up to be trans women.
  • Almost every bit of research on the subject (ever) uses a different definition and therefore gets a different result.
  • When we look back at those studies, we say "Eh, those kids weren't really trans. The real trans kids want to transition."
So it seems to be true that:
  • "Actually trans" kids always grow up to be trans, but
  • Most of the time, if the parents think their kid might be trans as a result of their gender non-conforming behavior, the parents are wrong, and the kid is going to grow up to be gay but cisgender.
If that's correct, then the article isn't IMO communicating it in an understandable fashion. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:31, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Your summary isn't *very* wrong, but I feel like the emphasis is wrong, because you're using the actual definition of "actually trans" in one place but in other places you're phrasing it as though the way we know kids are actually trans is whether they end up transitioning. That's not true. How this actually works is that generally gender non-conforming behavior is not a good indication that a kid will be trans as an adult, but the same sort of questions that would detect transness in an adult, such as directly asking a kid if they want to be a girl, do work, and kids who consistently say "yes I want to be a girl" end up growing up to be trans women.
I agree this could be clearer in the article, which probably should explain the full situation. But I don't think that it's a failure to be clear, because the statement as phrased really is true. You wouldn't need to say "scientists used to think small amounts of alcohol are good for you" to be able to say "scientists currently think no amount of alcohol is better for you than not drinking". Loki (talk) 22:45, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
And the statement is true "as phrased" that if you're 18 and pregnant and obtain an abortion, your lifetime risk of breast cancer just went up 50%. But it's not clear.
I agree that you don't have to explain past beliefs. If you agree with me, then perhaps you'd like to blank the ~third of Transgender health care misinformation#Desistance myth that is all about past beliefs, and perhaps add a clear statement that "generally gender non-conforming behavior is not a good indication that a kid" is actually trans. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:58, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This is all stuff that can/should be in Gender dysphoria in children. It doesn't belong on a page about "misinformation" without strong independent sources that it actually is "misinformation" and not just hyperbolically expressed differences of opinion. Void if removed (talk) 23:20, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The answer to "will most kids today desist" is "we don't know".
It used to be the case that they did, but clinics in the 80s then were as much about stopping prepubescent boys from growing up gay as growing up trans, so unpicking the more coercive/homophobic methods used in the past is difficult.
However, once blockers and came onto the scene, GIDS found 99.5% persisted.
This also coincided with an exponential increase in the number of teenage girls presenting at GIDS in gender distress, to the point they now outnumber boys 2 or 3 to 1.
So the open question is: do blockers (and to a lesser extent social transition) cause a persistence of gender incongruence that would otherwise have resolved during/after adolescence? Are the factors that affected pre-teen boys in the 80s the same as those affecting adolescent girls in the 2010s?
We have multiple unknowns, and I think it is RGW to present any of this as misinformation. The only MEDRS in the "desistance myth" section is a systematic review that says best quantitative estimates are that 83% desist - which means it isn't a myth. Void if removed (talk) 23:16, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
VIR is misquoting the source. As was discussed on the talk page (here) the MEDRS explicitly describes the sources of the 83% desistance as poor quality. Relm (talk) 03:44, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Misquoting? The abstract says "Quantitative studies were all poor quality, with 83% of 251 participants reported as desisting". Or are you saying that since the studies are "poor quality", they can't also be the "best quantitative estimates" actually available? Sometimes "the best" is also pretty bad (and not just for trans-related research. For example, our best treatments for chronic low back pain are mostly ineffective, and the research on Back labor, which affects about 100 million women each year, is worse than than the research on trans people). WhatamIdoing (talk) 04:52, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I am saying that VIR is quoting the MEDRS as if the MEDRS shows 83% desistance as its own claim:

We have multiple unknowns, and I think it is RGW to present any of this as misinformation. The only MEDRS in the "desistance myth" section is a systematic review that says best quantitative estimates are that 83% desist - which means it isn't a myth.

This is not a truthful depiction of the MEDRS's view of this source who's conclusion is quoted by YFNS below. It is WP:CHERRYPICKING at best. Relm (talk) 19:44, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It looks to me like the review calculated that 83% itself, and does not disavow it.
What they present in their conclusions is a (non-scientific/human-values) recommendation that nobody actually care whether desistance happens. They recommend a short-term focus: Fix today's distress today, and iff today's fix results in distress tomorrow, then fix tomorrow's distress tomorrow. Do not worry about tomorrow, for sufficient unto the day is the evil thereof – poetic advice, but not science. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:06, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That is not what the review is stating, and the way that the 83% number is being employed without the context from the MEDRS which is critical of the definitions used to get to that number and other specifics of the study involved is cherry-picking and tendentious. The characterization of it being stated here seems poetic, but is far from scientific. Relm (talk) 02:14, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Do you think this is a fair description?
"Five quantitative studies that cumulatively found 83% of 251 people desisting, but the review described these quantitative studies as 'all poor quality'." WhatamIdoing (talk) 02:43, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No, a better one would be "A statistic that ~80% desist after puberty emerged from five studies of a total of 251 children from the late 2000s that used DSM-3, DSM-4, and DSM-4-TR diagnoses of gender identity disorder of childhood and included participants who lacked even those diagnoses. None of these studies explicitly defined desistance and even when definitions could be inferred, they used different ones. The studies had poor methodological quality, relied on outdated understandings of gender and outdated diagnoses, likely misclassified non-binary individuals, and some employed gender identity change efforts".
Summarizing an article whose point is that this 80% number people keep throwing around is ridiculously flawed - these studies don't even talk about the same thing they just use the same word for different phenomenon as saying the best quantitative estimates are that 83% desist is silly. What definition of desistance is that 83% figure using? None, because the review explains where the 80% figure comes from (From all of these collections of studies emerged the commonly used statistic stating that ∼80% of TGE youth will desist after puberty) but it does not claim this number is accurate or meaningful. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 04:03, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Note that I didn't ask about anything involving the word "best". Is this reply just more of your disagreement with Void?
What I asked about is a sentence along the lines of "Five quantitative studies that cumulatively found 83% of 251 people desisting, but the review described these quantitative studies as 'all poor quality'."
I was actually asking Relm, but feel free to answer. Let me be more specific about the question: Do you think that if such a sentence were in the article, that it would be a {{POV}} problem? WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:20, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
My response was primarily to you as that sentence would be a POV problem. As the review pointed out: these studies all used different definitions of desistance. If a review says "Studies 1-5 used different definitions of X. Collectively, they are used to say that the rate of X is Y. This is problematic due to issues ABC, including the different definitions of X. We recommend people don't even use X anymore." - then translating that into wikivoice as "a review found on average the rate of X is Y" leaves out the most important part, what actually is "X" in this situation?
From the review: From all of these collections of studies emerged the commonly used statistic stating that ∼80% of TGE youth will desist after puberty, a statistic that has been critiqued by other works based on poor methodologic quality, the evolving understanding of gender and probable misclassification of nonbinary individuals, and the practice of attempting to dissuade youth from identifying as transgender in some of these studies ... None of the quantitative studies explicitly defined desistance.31,33,51–53 Three of the quantitative studies had similar inferred definitions based on the disappearance of GD.51,52,53 The other two studies had inferred definitions relating to distress concerning gender identity and desire for medical intervention. ... all the articles conflated these two ideas, implying that the disappearance of GD also meant that the TGE child identified as cisgender after puberty.
Taking your suggested sentence, Five quantitative studies that cumulatively found 83% of 251 people desisting, but the review described these quantitative studies as 'all poor quality and modifying it to Five quantitative studies that cumulatively found 83% of 251 people <definition of desistance>, ..., what <definition of desistance> would be there?
To stick to the review, it would have to be something like Five quantitative studies that didn't explicitly define desistance cumulatively found 83% of 251 people desisted, inferrably defined as either the disappearance of "gender identity disorder in children" or "relating to distress concerning gender identity and desire for medical intervention.". The review described these all as "poor quality" and noted critiques of their methodologic quality, outdated understandings of gender, misclassifications of nonbinary individuals, and usage of gender identity change efforts. It also noted they erroneously conflated disappearance of GD with cessation of transgender identity. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 22:48, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm getting "desistance reviews based on poor quality studies are extremely X, but puberty blocker reviews based on poor quality studies are extremely Y" vibes.  Tewdar  23:02, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
YFNS, that sentence has been in the article for over a month. If you think that sentence is a POV problem, then this GAR is probably justified, and it fails Wikipedia:Did you know/Guidelines#External policy compliance, so you should withdraw the DYK nomination. WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:16, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
YFNS, that sentence has been in the article for over a month
The text in the article has been A systematic review of research relating to the topic in 2022 found it was poorly defined: studies sometimes did not define it or equally defined it as desistance of transgender identity or desistance of gender dysphoria. They also found none of the definitions allowed for dynamic or nonbinary gender identities and the majority of articles published were editorial pieces. In total, thirty definitions for desistance were found from 35 pieces of literature. This included 5 quantitative studies that cumulatively found 83% of 251 people desisting, but the review described these quantitative studies as "all poor quality", with none of them having "explicitly defined desistance".[4] (bolded, is what I said it would be a POV issue to leave out)
That's a decent summary of the article without NPOV problems. Your quotation Five quantitative studies that cumulatively found 83% of 251 people desisting, but the review described these quantitative studies as 'all poor quality' would have POV issues if the surrounding paragraph, particularly the bolded bit, wasn't included. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 23:34, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That just means the number and all its flaws need to be placed in context (as it is now) not omitted entirely (as it was when this article received GA).
It also means the only systematic review that actually puts a number on desistance, contradicts the idea it is a "myth", so the existence of this section at all is highly questionable.
Things have changed a lot in the last 30 years. Crudely, the field has shifted from:
  • We mostly see male pre-teens who will mostly desist in adolescence, and some think its a good idea to withhold "girls" toys and "girls" clothes to "help that along"
To
  • We mostly see female teenagers with a lot of comorbid conditions like depression and eating disorders, and if we give them puberty blockers 99.5% of them don't desist
With no adequate study of the non-intervention case, no explanation of the sex-ratio shift and virtually nonexistant followup.
What we should do here is convey this uncertainty and the limitations to the reader on the relevant article (Gender dysphoria in children), not remove the information from there and present an incomplete and overly-certain picture on an article dedicated to calling it "misinformation". Void if removed (talk) 15:09, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
From the review: Of the hypothesis- driven research articles pertaining to desistance found in this literature review, most were ranked as having significant risk of bias. A significantly disproportionate number of these articles were not driven by an original hypothesis. The definitions of desistance, while diverse, were all used to say that TGE children who desist will identify as cisgender after puberty, a concept based on biased research from the 1960s to 1980s and poor-quality research in the 2000s. Therefore, desistance is suggested to be removed from clinical and research discourse to focus instead on supporting TGE youth rather than attempting to predict their future gender identity.[5]
The answer to "will most kids today desist" is "we don't know". - so therefore the claim we do know they will is a myth
Things have changed a lot in the last 30 years. Crudely, the field has shifted from: We mostly see male pre-teens who will mostly desist in adolescence, and some think its a good idea to withhold "girls" toys and "girls" clothes to "help that along" - As you know, and has been repeatedly pointed out to you, the majority of those kids did not say they were trans, or that they wanted to transition, and so the to claim they "desisted" is nonsensical.
I hope whoever looks over this takes note of the fact this was already discussed at the talk page and consensus was against Void's issues with the section[6] Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 16:17, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Also, wrt Some of this section seems more overtly POV push-y but still interesting to me personally, like the sentences talking about the etymology of the word desistance and the connection to criminal recidivism. "He took the word from this other psychiatric condition, and that other psychiatric condition took the word from criminology" isn't relevant to misinformation (so it shouldn't be in this article), and it feels like a way to smear the concept.
Our systematic review of desistance makes clear it is necessary context, stating Desistance as a word has its origins in criminal research,28 and Zucker explains that he was the first person to use desistance in relation to the TGE pre-pubertal youth population in 2003 after seeing it being used for oppositional defiant disorder (ODD).29 In either case, desistance is considered a good outcome in criminal research and ODD. Acknowledging this history of the term is important as it reflects the pathologizing of gender identity (in relation to ODD) and the negative perspectives that have been associated with being TGE (in relation to crime).[7] Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 04:07, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That may be appropriate context for an article on desistance, but it says nothing about misinformation. WhatamIdoing (talk) 21:53, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thing is, we've made it so desistance myth redirects to this article on misinformation and is thus bolded. So, as of now, this is the "primary article" on desistance. Aaron Liu (talk) 22:47, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • I appreciate the ping Launchballer, I will say that I am likely not knowledgeable enough about the entire topic to identify WP:NPOV violations that are not also WP:V or WP:SYNTH violations. For that I defer to more knowledgeable editors. If I have the time I may weigh in on whether I found any WP:V or WP:SYNTH violations. starship.paint (talk / cont) 01:34, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay as someone who got pinged here and has only partially read through everything, I'm wondering if, at this point, it is best that someone, I am volunteering myself here, does a fresh GA review (or at least a partial review of the areas in question), and then invites others to weigh in. I have never done a GA reassessment before so I'm not exactly sure how this works. Since it may be relevant here, I consider myself unbiased in a sense, as I don't usually edit in transgender/sex/sexuality/political/gender-related topics. This may also come as a disadvantage with some of the finer details of WP:NPOV but I'm welcoming feedback here. I've done quite a few GAN reviews and especially like to help with technical wording which I see has been brought up as an issue here. Is this something others are interested in trying as a way to figure this out? relevant pings: @Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist, Starship.paint, WhatamIdoing, Colin, Void if removed, and Launchballer: (sorry for any double pings) IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 04:49, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    A GA reassessment is what we're doing right here, in this discussion. It works like everyone telling everyone else what we think. The most helpful thing to do is to read the article and the Wikipedia:Good article criteria and point out any significant problems you see. (Minor problems should be ignored for GAR purposes, or boldly fixed.) Use a ====Level 4==== subsection if you want to separate out discussion of a particular point.
    I would expect one of the GAR coordinators to write the closing summary and make the final decision. Generally, discussions are kept open for 30 days, and if there's no consensus, it typically remains listed as GA. WhatamIdoing (talk) 05:05, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I see, I'll take a look at the article and see if anything jumps out at me then. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 17:38, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I'd support you doing a GA review - but the chaoticness of this section seems to be the goal. Rather than raising NPOV concerns at talk, we've gone straight into a free-for-all unstructured GA reassessment (where things like the desistance myth, already discussed at talk, are being rehashed) that I think is more liable to give the closer a headache than anything else. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 16:41, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
A. That PDF is a RAND corp report, which tend to be considered pretty thoroughly reliable.
B. We should care because the Cass Report makes claims and conclusions separate from those of its peer reviewed sources, and thus we need to make clear the distinction between the two with regards to peer review.
C. Does everything need to be plastered across CNN for it to be relevant to a good wikipedia article? Snokalok (talk) 12:43, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

YFNS wrote "I'm a little unsure how GAR works". Well it sure doesn't work by smearing the person who complained about NPOV violations. Personal attacks earn topic bans, not GAs. Further, they just make everyone else here think: "is that the best you've got?" Same goes for citing our article on the Cass review for backup on the "non peer-reviewed" claim. Wikipedia is not a reliable source. What editors have pushed elsewhere on Wikipedia does not influence whether this article is a GA. Is that the best you've got? Tewdar mentions that the best source said editors have found is a table where a column heading identifies it as non peer reviewed, and elsewhere the internet shows only activist social media and blogs repeat that claim. If that source had instead listed the half a dozen systematic reviews that are very much "the Cass Review" the column heading would be different. Is that the best you've got?

The Oxford English dictionary isn't peer reviewed. They don't send their word definitions over to Collins to be double-checked. The NHS health website isn't peer reviewed. They don't ask Kaiser Permanente to offer their opinions. It suits an activist agenda to conflate the Cass Review as a whole with the Final Report as a document, and claim it isn't peer reviewed, because people who don't know much about academic publishing or healthcare reviews think that if you tell someone this feature is missing, they might believe it was typically present and important and clearly not done this time because bigotry. But anyone who actually knows about the Cass Review knows it contains many peer reviewed publications supporting the evidence base. Saying it, as a whole, isn't peer reviewed, is a whopper. No neutral or reliable source says that. Saying the Final Report isn't peer reviewed is as dumb ass as saying a menu isn't peer reviewed. That isn't how an Independent Review chaired by an esteemed paediatrician and former president of the Royal College of Paediatrics and Child Health, works. It is an activist trope and itself an example of misinformation.

Let me give an example from recent current affairs. Zelenskyy was described as a "dictator" by someone I'm sure we all regard as an unreliable source, but more than half the US voting population personally and specifically voted for to be their president. If you or I read a paragraph that said something like "After being expelled by the US president, the dictator Volodymyr Zelenskyy flew to the UK to meet their prime minister and king...." what would your reaction be? Would you think this was a neutral source reporting on world current affairs. Or would you think you'd accidentally clicked on some link to a right wing MAGA blog? Would you think the authors of that sentence had fact checking and accuracy as values, or were more of the say anything that pushes The Truth, facts are inconvenient, approach? It is a MAGA activist trope. This article is full of this kind of writing. The NPOV alarm isn't just flashing read. It is going "honk" "honk" "honk".

The approach from the get-go on this article is that misinformation in the trans debate is entirely one-sided and that it is influential, vs a neutral approach and exploring the far far the more obvious explanations for healthcare decisions that don't require an assumption that all those healthcare or legal professionals are clearly stupid and gullible. The opinion of activist authors is cited in Wiki voice throughout. For example, the claim "Misinformation has affected the decision of the United Kingdom to reduce use of puberty blockers for transgender individuals" is an extraordinary claim. We cite an opinion piece (it is clearly labelled "Perspective" in the journal). The same opinion piece is used for "Misinformation and disinformation have led to proposed and successful legislative restrictions on gender-affirming care across the United States". There's no room in the mindset of this article, that puberty blocker restrictions in the UK were a decision made after a four year independent review of the most thorough degree ever attempted, based on multiple systematic reviews, including those commissioned by the review but also every single systematic review published previously or since. The mindset of this article is that NHS Scotland are fools when their experts spent four months considering the implications of the Cass Review and carefully worked out which recommendations to adopt, including also restrictions on puberty blockers. That these professionals should have just read some American blogs and their eyes would have been opened to the "misinformation". It is an extraordinary claim. Or the more obvious explanation for why Florida went the way it did: good old fashioned conservative bigotry.

As Void and others have noted, the desistence debate is framed one-sidedly in this article. There's an equal myth that desistence doesn't exist or is vanishingly rare. The truth is we don't know and in fact when Cass' research team tried to find out, they were actively blocked from accessing adult care information that might have shed some light. There are activists who even cite the Cass Review final report as evidence that desistence is vanishingly rare, despite the report explicitly saying the evidence and the audit they discuss does not support that (or any other conclusion). The level of statistical incompetence shown by those citing the Cass Review for this purpose is frankly mind boggling. There is misuse of statistics and applying low-quality data for population group X to population group Y going on by both sides. Perhaps in 20 years time, universities will teach statistical misinformation courses citing the arguments coming from both sides in this debate.

I'm sceptical a NPOV article on trans healthcare misinformation can be written right now, what with US politics and all that. There's been a concerted effort at FRINGE and RS/N boards to ban any source that is negative of US trans activist positions or supportive of the Cass Review. Largely done by smearing the authors, rather than addressing whether they have a point. When the debate is at the level of claiming Dr Cass is a puppet of transphobic organisations, and all of NHS England and NHS Scotland have been "captured" by an anti-trans ideologically driven government of Putin levels of evil manipulation, one has to wonder where we're at. -- Colin°Talk 11:52, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The only NPOV violation you identified is whether we say the Cass Review wasn't peer-reviewed - we have an RS saying it wasn't, consensus at the Cass Review article to note that, and consensus at this article to note that.
The medical establishment in the UK has, at best, been skeptical of the government's ban on puberty blockers.[8]
As Void and others have noted, the desistence debate is framed one-sidedly in this article. There's an equal myth that desistence doesn't exist or is vanishingly rare. - Can you find sources backing that up? There are sources saying "most desist" is a myth going back years, I've seen none claiming there's an equal myth that desistence doesn't exist or is vanishingly rare
I'm sceptical a NPOV article on trans healthcare misinformation can be written right now, what with US politics and all that. - this is classic WP:RGW, we can write a NPOV article on any topic, it just depends on setting aside our own convictions and following the sources. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 16:34, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The medical establishment in the UK has, at best, been skeptical of the government's ban on puberty blockers. I'm looking at Table 2 in the source you linked. It says that most pharmacists (e.g., General Pharmaceutical Council) support the ban and clinicians ("doctors"; e.g., General Medical Council) are split 50–50. The main opposition comes from a group called "Charities and voluntary and community organisations" (e.g., Mermaids (charity)), which is not "the medical establishment". WhatamIdoing (talk) 21:56, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It is also not a question of whether they support the ban, but To what extent do you agree or disagree with making the arrangements in the emergency order permanent. An important difference. Void if removed (talk) 09:51, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That sounds like a distinction without difference to me. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:49, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The context is interpretation of a permanent ban, vs banning pending the outcome of clinical trials. The CHM ultimately recommended the latter, ie a ban with periodic review, until the evidence base improves. Void if removed (talk) 08:47, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The context is a legislative action, which can be undone at any time in the future, for any reason or no reason. "Permanent" isn't permanent in this context. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:24, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Also, wrt Well it sure doesn't work by smearing the person who complained about NPOV violations. Personal attacks earn topic bans, not GAs. - I have not done a single personal attack here, merely pointed out, as others have, your DYK comments were full of personal attacks. Your first comment there included Readers of this sorry wiki article would be forgiven for thinking it was written by a really enthusiastic teenager who nobody had told NPOV was a core pillar, nor explained the difference between opinion and fact. ... this is an article clearly written by a US activist viewpoint. Ironically, it itself is an example of transgender misinformation., while your second was As I said, this article reads like a teenager wrote it as an activist pamphlet to address problems they only see from a US perspective, fighting a certain kind of US bigot and thinking the rest of the world is like that too ... This sort of subject needs to be written by editors with a commitment to NPOV, not a commitment to The Cause., and your third, after I asked you to strike your personal attacks, was YFNS, I call out this article for the one-sided activist screed it is. And you are an activist single-purpose account.[9] - you have yet to strike any of the multiple personal attacks you left there. You have also yet to raise NPOV issues on the talk page for the article itself. I quote your comments for the closer to consider in deciding who has made personal attacks. I do agree, and think you should consider, that Personal attacks earn topic bans Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 19:25, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The NHS health website isn't peer reviewed.

Their clinical guidelines and position statements very much are. It is MedRS policy that we should not use non–peer-reviewed sources for biomedical information. The Cass Review is supposed to be an academic source on biomedical information; it needs to be peer-reviewed to be cited. Aaron Liu (talk) 23:03, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Um, technically, MEDRS says no such thing (because textbooks aren't peer-reviewed either, and they're one of MEDRS's favorite sources). WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:19, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
My textbook's long list of reviewers misled me into thinking it was peer-reviewed...
In any case, books with academic editorial policies are the only acceptable MedRSes that aren't peer-reviewed, and the Cass Review doesn't appear to fall under these categories. Aaron Liu (talk) 23:30, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's a little more complicated than that. WP:MEDRS wants "high-quality textbooks" and reference works with "good editorial oversight". This is a little different from "academic editorial policies", as anybody can write an editorial policy. (MEDRS itself is an example of an editorial policy.)
MEDRS also accepts "Guidelines and position statements provided by major medical and scientific organizations", which may (or might not) be peer reviewed if they are "formal scientific reports" but can also be "public guides and service announcements", which are not.
MEDRS also accepts, for uncontroversial claims, non-peer-reviewed websites such as WebMD.
"The Cass Review" seems to mean different things to different people. If you see it as "a 388-page-long pdf called 'the final report' ", then it did not undergo a pre-publication, external peer review. OTOH, neither did most of the sources published by the World Health Organization. Or that RAND Corporation pdf that keeps being recommended (which discloses that they used "internal peer review", meaning that it was written by Employee A, reviewed by Employee B, and published by their joint employer).
If "the Cass Review" instead means to you the whole thing – the people, the interviews, the multiple publications, the whole process, perhaps like the United States House Select Committee on the January 6 Attack isn't just its 845-page final report – then parts of the whole thing were peer reviewed (the commissioned reviews), and other parts (e.g., the people) can't be, and some of the rest theoretically could have been, but wasn't (or was only internally peer reviewed). WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:31, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with this. The final report was unreliable for MedRS as it's not peer-reviewed, but that doesn't mean nothing from the project is MedRS; the peer-reviewed parts are. Aaron Liu (talk) 01:14, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't notice that this recently became a GA. Good job! Aaron Liu (talk) 13:51, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This article is nowhere near GA status and contains misinformation. Its central idea is that gender-affirming care, including placing children on puberty blockers, is the only acceptable treatment for gender dysphoria, while almost any critical perspective is presented as disinformation. One example, the article states: "Proponents of bans on gender-affirming care in the United States have argued that youth should receive psychotherapy, including gender exploratory therapy (GET), a form of conversion therapy, instead of medical treatments." The lead has a similar statement. However, psychotherapy and particularly exploratory therapy, is recommended as the first-line treatment by health authorities and medical organizations in several developed countries, such as the UK [10], Finland [11] and Sweden [12] Swedish guidelines recommend "offering psychosocial support for the unconditional exploration of gender identity during the diagnostic assessment." Additionally, major MEDORGs have clearly stated that exploratory therapy is not the same as conversion therapy. For example, the United Kingdom Council for Psychotherapy (UKCP) states: "Exploratory therapy should not in any circumstances be confused with conversion therapy, which seeks to change or deny a person’s sexual orientation and/or gender identity." [13] The Royal Australian and New Zealand College of Psychiatrists (RANZCP) recommends "offering psychosocial support to explore gender identity during the diagnostic assessment." [14] The article presents only one point of view, that supports medical transition, as the correct one, while dismissing gender exploratory therapy as conversion therapy, despite its endorsement by numerous medical organizations. The article lacks balance, disregarding the growing global shift toward banning or limiting puberty blockers and prioritizing psychotherapy.JonJ937 (talk) 17:28, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Jonj has been repeating this claim at the Fringe Theories Noticeboard where multiple editors have pointed out his sources don't support his claims (among many other claims, such that the Society for Evidence-Based Gender Medicine isn't FRINGE, or that we can't say it's FRINGE to say being trans is frequently a symptom of mental illness). Our article on Conversion therapy discusses gender exploratory therapy (and has for over a year).
WPATH itself supports exploration [Health Care Providers] working with adolescents should promote supportive environments that simultaneously respect an adolescent’s affirmed gender identity and also allows the adolescent to openly explore gender needs - none of these sources are claiming, as proponents of gender exploratory therapy do, that identifying as trans is usually a symptom of a mental illness. All lay out in what situations gender-affirming care will be provided. Almost none even use the term "exploratory therapy" or "gender exploratory therapy".
The only one to use the term "exploratory therapy/"gender exploratory therapy" is the UKCP - the only organization to withdraw from the Memorandum of Understanding on Conversion Therapy signed by all other MEDORGs in the UK, who promptly criticized them for that decision (as did a sizeable chunk of their own membership).
The article presents only one point of view, that supports medical transition, as the correct one, while dismissing gender exploratory therapy as conversion therapy, despite its endorsement by numerous medical organizations - in short, JonJ has cited a bunch of MEDORGs that support medical transition, and don't mention "gender exploratory therapy", as evidence they support gender exploratory therapy over medical transition - this is silly at best and tendentious at worst. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 17:50, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The sources I cited mention gender exploratory therapy. While there is no universally agreed definition of this practice, it is recommended by MEDORGs and health authorities worldwide, albeit under slightly different terms. For example, the RANZCP recommends "psychosocial support to explore gender identity", while the Swedish National Board of Health and Welfare advises for "psychosocial support for the unconditional exploration of gender identity". In the UK, the UKCP, a major MEDORG, holds a position aligned with general UK health policies, which prioritize psychological support over medical interventions. Only a small proportion of UKCP members have opposed their stance on gender exploratory therapy. Can we seriously claim that all these countries and MEDORGs support conversion therapy? It is not true that proponents of gender exploratory therapy claim that "identifying as trans is usually a symptom of a mental illness". None of the sources I quoted state this and I am not aware of SEGM or any MEDORG supporting exploratory therapy making such a claim. Our Wikipedia article on conversion therapy has the same NPOV issues, falsely equating gender exploratory therapy with conversion therapy and presenting the views of partisan sources as the only valid perspective, while failing to acknowledge alternative perspectives. The article under discussion here has significant neutrality problems that should not be present in a GA article. JonJ937 (talk) 11:35, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
We should not confuse "psychosocial support to explore gender identity" or "psychosocial support for the unconditional exploration of gender identity" (generic terms) with gender exploratory therapy (a specific term for a specific kind of therapy). The reason they use "slightly different terms" is that they're not recommending GET. If they wanted to recommend it, they would use its name. Lewisguile (talk) 13:34, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I wonder if we could source a paragraph about misinformation, along the lines of "therapy to explore gender is not necessarily gender exploratory therapy". WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:27, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I suspect so. On the flip side, there are definitely papers that say exploration doesn't necessarily exclude GAC or that exploration is not always GET. E.g., Florence Ashley says "gender-affirmative approaches [...] often hold space for gender exploration and encourage individuals to explore what gender means to them", and: "Gender-exploratory therapy does not include every clinical approach that facilitates gender exploration."[1] I'm fairly sure this is an issue that has come up in other places in the literature, so there are likely other sources, and I think addressing that particular piece of misinformation would be very sensible. Lewisguile (talk) 15:20, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Indeed, how is "psychosocial support to explore gender identity" different from gender exploratory therapy? There are different terms to refer to the same practice, but there is no common definition. It is also called psychodynamic psychotherapy and according to sources, they all refer to the same practice:
Other countries are realizing this and making psychosocial treatments and/or exploratory psychotherapy a first line of treatment for gender related distress in young patients. Psychodynamic (exploratory) psychotherapy has established efficacy for a range of conditions, and has been used in youth and adults with gender dysphoria. -- Systematic reviews have consistently found that the evidence that hormonal treatment for GD leads to improved mental health is low quality. Based on these reviews, national health agencies in Sweden and Finland have adopted treatment guidelines which make psychosocial interventions such as psychodynamic psychotherapy (PP) the first line of treatment for GD. [15]
The RANZCP also states that "Psychotherapy is not conversion therapy," referring to all forms of psychotherapy they recommend. If UK's leading MEDORG such as Council for Psychotherapy does not agree that gender exploratory therapy is conversion therapy, and such therapy is recommended by heath policies in some European countries, then there is clearly no global consensus on this issue. It is not acceptable to equate GET to conversion therapy in a wiki voice while ignoring alternative viewpoints.--JonJ937 (talk) 11:25, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That still doesn't say "gender exploratory therapy", though. Aaron Liu (talk) 12:49, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Is there a reliable source which states that "exploratory psychotherapy for gender related distress" is not the same as "gender exploratory therapy"? This question was asked above by another user and no such source has been presented. JonJ937 (talk) 16:50, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
You are the one trying to say they are the same thing, you are the one who has to present a source agreeing that is not an editorial from quacks (here is Joanna Sinai, the author with no experience in trans healthcare, providing a webinar with Therapy First[16])
I and others have repeatedly quoted to you sources that note that GAC supports exploration. From gender exploratory therapy the gender-affirming model of care already promotes gender identity exploration without favoring any particular identity, and individualized care. GET proponents deny this. From WPATH: [Health Care Providers] working with adolescents should promote supportive environments that simultaneously respect an adolescent’s affirmed gender identity and also allows the adolescent to openly explore gender needs Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 17:54, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Exactly. Unless there are RSes that say "GET = all these other things which aren't called GET", it's WP:OR. Lewisguile (talk) 18:30, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think it's more complicated than that.
If someone turns up tomorrow talking about how their new Exploratoryyay EnderGay ErapyThay (EEGET®) was totally different from Gender Exploratory Therapy (GET), even though it had all the key features (whatever reliable sources claim those features to be), then we'd still correctly call it a type of GET. We don't need an exact word-for-word match when words are synonyms.
More generally, I feel like every time this question is asked, we get a different answer. For example, editors have claimed that the Cass Review is directly promoting conversion therapy in the form of GET, even though the Cass Review does not use the name of gender exploratory therapy (or conversion therapy) to describe what they want to see happen. Then it was okay to have gender exploratory therapy (i.e., 'a therapy in which gender is explored', not GET™ itself) as long as it was client-led and non-judgmental. Now we're told that if you don't have the exact words 'gender exploratory therapy' in the source, then it's not gender exploratory therapy and the claim would be WP:OR. I don't think that our editors are being dishonest. So: Are we seeing a transition in the real world (e.g., greater differentiation between ethical and unethical approaches to talk therapy)? Are editors getting better informed about the details as time goes on? What's causing the story to change over time? WhatamIdoing (talk) 03:13, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There are some major differences between the two cases. Firstly, subject experts and international medical organisations have said the requirement for exploratory psychosocial approaches is tantamount to GET, and we have quoted them with attribution. Secondly, many of these RSes say that it's the requirement to undergo explorative psychotherapy as the main treatment while also denying GAC that is the problem.
E.g., this is from the section on GET at the Cass Review: the denial of gender-affirming treatment under the guise of 'exploratory therapy' has caused enormous harm to the transgender and gender diverse community and is tantamount to 'conversion' or 'reparative' therapy under another name. We attribute this and it's clear what distinguishing features they're talking about here. If RSes say similar things about these treatments, then we can certainly say so, as we have here (with attribution). There's also a difference between psychosocial support provided while exploring gender (this could include "soft" interventions like having someone to talk to, letting a child experiment with gender without judgment, as well as more involved "therapies") and mandatory psychosocial therapy as an approach to exploration (which is a treatment in itself). Both "psychosocial support to explore gender identity" and "psychosocial support for the unconditional exploration of gender identity" are subtly different uses of language. In both cases, it's psychosocial support (i.e., adjunct therapies, as well as softer forms of social support) while a person is exploring their gender and potentially receiving other treatments, as needed. Without seeing a protocol or statements otherwise, I couldn't confidently say GAC is forbidden with this approach or that these interventions are mandatory; it could be an agnostic approach that allows for all of the above. In GET, it's a primary treatment that replaces other interventions—it's not agnostic because it assumes psychosocial therapy is the first-line treatment, which makes inherent assumptions in spite of the patient's own wishes or their individual needs. Lewisguile (talk) 09:15, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Who claims that GET replaces other forms of treatment? Supporters of therapy, whether they call it "gender exploratory therapy," "exploratory therapy," or "psychosocial support for the unconditional exploration of gender identity", suggest it be the first-line treatment, not a complete replacement for other methods. For example, Therapy First states that "Psychological approaches should be the first-line treatment for gender dysphoria", and that they oppose any form of conversion therapy. [17] First line is not the same as a compete replacement of any other treatment. The UKCP, a leading MEDORG in the UK in its field of activity, explicitly states that exploratory therapy is not conversion therapy. How can we claim the opposite in a wiki voice when there is clearly no international consensus on such a claim? JonJ937 (talk) 11:15, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Lewisguile, in the statement "while also denying GAC", is "GAC" (gender-affirming care) effectively synonymous with "prescribing medications"? As in, there are no forms of caring for someone and affirming their identity that don't involve prescribing drugs? WhatamIdoing (talk) 04:10, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@WhatamIdoing, I'm not sure why you made that assumption from "while also denying GAC". GAC, as I understand it, does not mandate medication either as a first-line treatment or as the end result. You can always consult the RSes if you're personally unsure. Lewisguile (talk) 13:41, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
GAC does not mandate medical interventions, but what it does mandate is no significant barrier to those interventions. Likewise exploratory approaches do not mandate no medical interventions, but they do mandate some level of exploratory psychotherapy as a first line treatment. Hyperbole about "denying" care is a misrepresentation, and it is one borne of different clinical perspectives on the same patient group.
When you say undergo explorative psychotherapy as the main treatment while also denying GAC this is essentially describing the level of psychotherapeutic assessment as undertaken in the Dutch Protocol. The whole point was to restrict access to puberty blockers to those that the clinicians were most sure would benefit, until they reached an age where CSH were permitted - because historically most desisted and clinicians were never able to predict which.
When adopted in the US at Boston, this was dropped, and dropping this "gatekeeping" at GIDS once the puberty blockers trial was underway was one of the reasons they were subjected to criticism - they deviated from the protocol they were attempting to reproduce.
The affirmative model which emerged at this time is an "informed consent" model, without the gatekeeping of the Dutch Protocol. That's the chief distinction. As described by its originator, Diane Ehrensaft:
Prior treatment models have included a “wait and see if these behaviors desist” approach; prohibition of starting adolescents on cross-sex hormones until age 16 (Netherlands model)[...]. Central to the GAM is the evidence-based idea that attempting to change or contort a person’s gender does harm. Instead, the GAM defines gender health as follows: the opportunity for a child to live in the gender that feels most real and/or comfortable for the child and the ability for children to express gender without experiencing restriction, criticism, or ostracism. In the model, the role of the mental health professional is a facilitator in helping a child discover and live in their authentic gender with adequate social supports.
Proponents view stringent assessment and age barriers as attempts to "contort" or "change" an authentic expression of gender identity, but this is not a universally accepted position.
It is messy and contentious and spans lots of different clinical positions with weak and contested evidence, and introducing accusations that anything other than the affirmative approach is "conversion" is inflammatory and unhelpful. Void if removed (talk) 16:59, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Lewisguile, I asked because of what you wrote: it's the requirement to undergo explorative psychotherapy as the main treatment while also denying GAC that is the problem.
As a simple matter of logic, if it is possible to "undergo explorative psychotherapy...while also denying GAC", then that psychotherapy can't be GAC, right? Because if that psychotherapy were GAC, then it would be impossible to undergo that therapy while denying GAC.
So: Is it possible for that therapy to be GAC, and your statement was just a little confusing? Or did you mean that GAC requires prescription drugs? WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:02, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Void if removed, firstly, you're still conflating vaguely defined "exploratory approaches" with GET, as the majority of RSes describe it. Secondly, your reading of what's above seems rather bad faith to me—"without restriction" doesn't mean "no assessment or exploration". The language about "facilitation" is pretty standard for modern psychological treatments, as is the stuff about avoiding "criticism or ostracism". Crucially, it says it's about "helping the child discover...their gender". How do you suppose the discovery occurs without any exploration? It doesn't say that exploration is forbidden, only that attempts to "change or contort" are.
@WhatamIdoing, you're still missing the therapy distinction of what I wrote. If someone gets CBT while being treated for MS, the CBT isn't a curative treatment for MS—it's a treatment that can be offered alongside treatment for MS and can augment that treatment. But it doesn't replace the immune therapies the person is taking. Moreover, the person with MS isn't required to undergo CBT before they get immune modifying treatments.
As part of GAC, psychological support can be offered and therapies can be offered to treat any psychological issues that need addressing. But there isn't an assumption that the treatment is curative, or the only option. It's also not a hoop you have to jump through—even if you don't need it—before exploring other options. Psychological assessment is not the same thing as psychological treatment, so not requiring psychotherapy doesn't mean not giving psychosocial support or not assessing someone. And clinicians are more than experienced enough at investigating differential diagnoses and comorbidities. It's a key part of their job. That isn't superceded by not forcing people to undergo therapies they don't need. And receiving treatments that aren't needed can be a form of iatrogenic harm—that applies equally to psychological as well as medical treatments. This will probably be my last reply on this topic, because it seems we're just not understanding each other, and it comes down to a fundemantal difference on how we're viewing even the basics of this issue, so I don't think anyone can convince the other and it's just wasting all our time.Lewisguile (talk) 22:02, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
you're still conflating vaguely defined "exploratory approaches" with GET, as the majority of RSes describe it.
No, you are repeatedly ignoring that this is not true. As I said here WPATH refer to "exploratory therapy" with reference to the Cass Review, which says "exploratory approaches" referencing Spiliadis 2019, which says "gender exploratory model", which was critiqued by Florence Ashley in 2023 as "gender exploratory therapy".
These are all the same thing. There is no such thing as "gender exploratory therapy" that is not the "exploratory approaches" described in the Cass Review. There is no source that makes this distinction, and if there was, it would not carry the weight of WPATH, which explicitly considers them the same. Void if removed (talk) 22:29, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Therapy First is the conversion therapy advocacy group that lobbies in favor of conversion therapy, and that's things explicitly called "conversion therapy". They're also established by the SEGM can of worms, currently the topic of an unclosed FTN RfC debating whether or not they're a hate group.
This view of UKCP is fringe. The page you linked says Case law has confirmed that gender-critical beliefs are protected under the Equality Act 2010., and hopefully we can agree here that gender-critical views are fringe:

The Council of Europe has condemned gender-critical ideology, among other ideologies, and linked it to "virulent attacks on the rights of LGBTQ people" in Hungary, Poland, Russia, Turkey, the United Kingdom, and other countries.[24] UN Women has described the gender-critical movement, among other movements, as extreme anti-rights movements that employ hate propaganda and disinformation.[25][26]

As mentioned above, UKCP followed this guidance by withdrawing from the Memorandum of Understanding (MoU) on Conversion Therapy just because it also applied to children, and was promptly criticized for both actions by every major MedOrg in the UK and the MoU's organization. The MoU is signed by 29 associations of psychiatrists including the entire NHS. I don't see how that can't be fringe. You have no other source that claims GET is not conversion therapy, and I do not see what basis you have to put one British MedOrg's opinion over that of so many plus the World Professional Association for Transgender Health and universal agreement in systematic reviews to conclude that there is no international consensus, Aaron Liu (talk) 18:02, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Therapy First is not a conversion group, no matter what the activists say. TF oppose conversion therapy, and simply support the therapy as the first line treatment, like it is done in many developed countries. It is a mainstream view, shared by the health authorizes of Finland, Sweden and the UK which also advise for therapy as the first line of treatment. US's HHS has recently stated that: The United Kingdom, Sweden, and Finland have recently issued restrictions on the medical interventions for children, including the use of puberty blockers and hormone treatments, and now recommend exploratory psychotherapy as a first line of treatment and reserve hormonal interventions only for exceptional cases. [18] HHS is hardly a fringe opinion. I have not seen a single reliable source stating that Sweden and Finland do not advise exploratory therapy, but something else. UKCP withdrew from the MoU due to concerns that its overly restrictive definition of conversion therapy would complicate providing appropriate therapy for children, not because they support conversion therapy. The opposition within the organization was too weak to change its position. UKCP is not alone in in their stance that exploratory psychotherapy is not conversion therapy. RANZCP also says that psychotherapy is not conversion therapy. The Australian National Association of Practising Psychiatrists (NAPP) states the same. [19] Together with health authorities in Scandinavia recommending exploration therapy as first line treatment, this shows that there is no consensus to consider exploratory therapy a conversion therapy. Otherwise, that would mean claiming health authorities in Sweden and Finland, along with other major MEDORGs, support conversion therapy, which is too far-fetched. JonJ937 (talk) 11:04, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
You're yet again dismissing sources that overwhelmingly say TF is a conversion group, skipping past the largest human rights organizations and various straight-news sources. TF says that transitioning should be avoided whenever possible, which is way beyond simply recommending therapy first. (And AFAIK the idea that hormone treatments for children should be reserved for exceptional cases is quite widespread and accepted.) You can't claim that the article has major sourcing issues if you provide no reason to dismiss the sources. Aaron Liu (talk) 23:36, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No, we cannot. The very first source on the Gender exploratory therapy section is WPATH describing the NHS' interim service specification which uses language like careful therapeutic exploration and psychosocial (including psychoeducation) and psychological support and intervention as "exploratory therapy" which is tantamount to “conversion” or “reparative” therapy under another name. There is essentially no coherent thing as "gender exploratory therapy" which is not also referred to synonymously as "exploratory approaches" or "psychotherapy".Void if removed (talk) 16:13, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ Ashley F. Interrogating Gender-Exploratory Therapy. Perspect Psychol Sci. 2023 Mar;18(2):472-481. doi: 10.1177/17456916221102325. Epub 2022 Sep 6. PMID: 36068009; PMCID: PMC10018052.

General sourcing issues

A significant amount of the article depends on a handful of non-independent non-MEDRS, but these are ultimately making MEDRS claims, or at least claims about the validity of MEDRS.

These sources are:

  • "A thematic analysis of disinformation in gender-affirming healthcare bans in the United States" (McNamara, Meredithe; McLamore, Quinnehtukqut; Meade, Nicolas; Olgun, Melisa; Robinson, Henry; Alstott, Anne) - 16 citations, a social science paper, lead author engaged as expert witness in litigating against gender-affirming healthcare bans, so is not an independent source.
  • Southern Poverty Law Centre's CAPTAIN report (Cravens, R. G.; McLamore, Quinnehtukqut; Leveille, Lee; Hodges, Emerson; Wunderlich, Sophie; Bates, Lydia) - 11 citations. This is a partisan lobby group who is plaintiff in the cases mentioned above, with no noted reliability in this area and who is supposed to be used with attribution per WP:SPLC. So, again, not independent.
  • ""Demons and Imps": Misinformation and Religious Pseudoscience in State Anti-Transgender Laws" (Alstott, Anne; Olgun, Melisa; Robinson, Henry; McNamara, Meredithe) - 9 citations, a law & feminism paper, same authors as first source.

So a total of 34 citations on this article - many of which are key to the themes of misinformation and disinformation regarding medical matters - are derived from the same non-MEDRS sources, which are all non-independent.

An example of claims:

  • It relied on studies that had serious methodological flaws such as low sample sizes, outdated diagnostic frameworks that conflated gender non-conformity with transgender identity, usage of conversion therapy on the sample population, and poor definitions of desistance - these are strong claims about desistance and prior studies which require MEDRS, and the citations are all three of the above.
  • Most youth sampled in them never identified as transgender nor desired to transition, but were counted as desisting. - the sole citation for this is SPLC, unattributed, and I can't find what it refers to in the text.
  • Though every major medical organization endorses gender-affirming care, proponents of gender-affirming care bans in the United States argue the mainstream medical community is untrustworthy, ignores the evidence, and that doctors are pushing transgender youth into transition due to political ideology and disregard for their well-being. This extends to claims that standards of care and guidelines from reputable medical organizations do not reflect clinical consensus - this cites the two McNamara papers. Given that a systematic review of guidelines found eg. WPATH's SOC8 to be of low quality, and obvious differences of clinical opinion across the world, presenting criticism of alleged "clinical consensus" as "misinformation" is a strong claim indeed, and requires much better sourcing than this.
  • This has included arguments transgender youth are incapable of providing informed consent to medical transition though scientific literature demonstrates that transgender youth, including those with mental health conditions, can competently participate in decision-making - again, cites the two McNamara papers, again these are medical claims, and obviously competence is complicated, varies greatly by age and other factors, and cannot be presented in this blanket manner.
  • Though transgender people have higher rates of mental illness, there is no evidence these cause gender dysphoria and evidence suggests this is due to minority stress and discrimination experienced by transgender people. - again, cites the two McNamara papers, and this is a strong MEDRS claim, at odds with entirely valid concerns about diagnostic overshadowing. If we read the first source, it gives as an example of "misinformation" the statement: Many of the children who undergo these procedures have other psychological problems, like attention deficit hyperactivity disorder and autism. This is as true a statement as is possible to make in this area, backed up by systematic review. It isn't even controversial. The high rates of ADHD and autism in this cohort is by now well-established.

I think this article is better understood as "the strong opinions of those fighting trans healthcare bans in court in the US", and to have those presented as definitive - and globally applicable - while other opinions are "misinformation" is not really indicative of a GA. This is all based on WP:PRIMARY, non-independent sources, often expressing opinions at odds with MEDRS, and producing their own definitions of "misinformation", which this article renders into wikivoice, making strong claims with no caveats and no balancing perspectives. Void if removed (talk) 11:44, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

For the detransition and desistence sections, I was extremely surprised to find that Care pathways of children and adolescents referred to specialist gender services: a systematic review was not used as a source.  Tewdar  12:13, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Seven citations, if you're interested in the numbers...  Tewdar  12:20, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's more interesting that it isn't cited in Detransition (we do have 3 other reviews cited there though). In this article it could be construed as coatracking or OR to include it as it doesn't mention misinformation whatsoever (unless a source discussing misinformation used it). LunaHasArrived (talk) 12:42, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Well, one of the other companion articles is cited in the 'European nations are banning gender-affirming care' section, despite also not mentioning misinformation whatsoever. Is that OR/coatracking, then?  Tewdar  18:48, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
In this case it's a miscitation. That source says nothing whatsoever about the 2023 Norwegian health investigation board and therefore shouldn't be used there. Thank you for pointing this out. LunaHasArrived (talk) 19:02, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
1) It seems doubtful we need to cite that article so no issues with it being removed, it does indeed seem extraneous
2.1) That systematic review was discussed on talk - it did not actually report on desistance or even define it so it seemed useless for the desistance section
2.2) If we were going to cite it for detransition statistics, we have better sources at Detransition, but this source itself points to detransition being very rare Discontinuation of medical treatments was similar across reviewed studies. In the seven studies reporting data for puberty suppression, discontinuation ranged from no patients to 8%. ... For masculinising/feminising hormones, six studies reported discontinuation, with very low rates (0–2 individuals) reported.
So the article cited for Norway's treatment can be removed without issue, and it's unclear how/why we would cite the review as the statement Data suggests that regret and detransitioning are rare is so accepted among MEDRS (nobody's even argued it's an incorrect summary of the field) it seems superflous - though, I think there's a case for citing that review and the others at detransition to note the detransition rate is rare in this article just to avoid argument over how accepted that is Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 19:17, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
And how about The American Academy of Pediatrics, the American College of Obstetricians and Gynecologists, the American Urological Association, the American Society for Reproductive Medicine, the American College of Physicians, the American Association of Clinical Endocrinology, GLMA: Health Professionals Advancing LGBTQ+ Equality, the American Medical Association (AMA), AMA's Medical Student Section cosponsored an Endocrine Society resolution "opposing any criminal and legal penalties against patients seeking gender-affirming care, family members or guardians who support them in seeking medical care, and health care facilities and clinicians who provide gender-affirming care."? What does this add to an article about Transgender health care misinformation, exactly?  Tewdar  19:31, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Because it's cited to an Endocrine Society statement that includes Due to widespread misinformation about medical care for transgender and gender-diverse teens, 18 states have passed laws or instituted policies banning gender-affirming care. More than 30 percent of the nation’s transgender and gender-diverse youth now live in states with gender-affirming care bans, according to the Human Rights Campaign. Some policies are even restricting transgender and gender-diverse adults’ access to care. These policies do not reflect the research landscape. and lists the major medical organizations opposing these bans (which are stated to be based on misinformation) [20] A statement on "widespread misinformation about medical care for transgender and gender-diverse teens" and the contrasting positions of MEDORGs seems fairly obviously relevant for an article about "Transgender health care misinformation" Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 19:37, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think Tewdar is correct about the laundry list paragraph being off topic. (For avoidance of doubt, I think the one before it seems more related to the article's subject.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:57, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"Thematic" is a review paper submitted to the highly prominent Social Science & Medicine journal, published by Elsevier. (Note the "& Medicine". This is, in fact, a MedRS journal.) If I recall correctly, such review articles published in highly prominent journals are usually pretty much commissioned/invited by the journal. Regardless of that, I don't find McNamara's credentials a problem, while the journal and its peer review did not find it a problem,
Opinions (e.g. labeling, non-surveyed evaluation of importance) that were only cited to SPLC were attributed. The only time SPLC was cited alone and not attributed was for the factual information Most youth sampled in them never identified as transgender nor desired to transition, but were counted as desisting.; factual information does not fall under RSOpinion as mentioned at RSP, and thus does not need attribution (and especially not in the example I mentioned, which directly follows a sentence cited to academic consensus on certain studies having serious methodological issues).
"Demons" is indeed a problem, but it's never cited alone in the article. It can be removed if needed. Aaron Liu (talk) 14:07, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The about page says it is social science research on health, which means it is not a biomedical source, it is social sciences. The journal publishes material relevant to any aspect of health from a wide range of social science disciplines and and material relevant to the social sciences from any of the professions concerned with physical and mental health. It is peer-reviewed in a high quality journal for sure, but I don't believe it meets WP:MEDRS. I could be wrong, but that's my reading of it anyway. And my concern is not McNamara's credentials, it is non-independence. Relying so heavily on 3 interrelated primary sources with a vested legal interest in the subject is a problem for a GA because we should be favouring independent secondary sources.
factual information
If this is factual information, then find a better source. As it is, I can't even find where this even is in the SPLC source given. SPLC are a biased and opinionated source with no track record for reliability on biomedical subjects. You cannot use a report from the SPLC to make factual claims aimed at critiquing or "debunking" biomedical research, as is the case here.
The section on the "desistance myth" consists of:
  • A paragraph almost entirely based on these three primary sources
  • A paragraph which makes BLP claims of spreading misinformation, based on these three sources
  • A paragraph on the systematic review which found most actually desisted
Meanwhile other relevant sources which do not support this framing are omitted. Void if removed (talk) 15:47, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Just for note I've just added sources which confirm the comment about children being included that never identified as transgender. This and here both talk about the problem. LunaHasArrived (talk) 16:25, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The first source is an editorial, from a special issue of clinical perspectives, so is WP:RSOPINION.
The second is a critical commentary, so it is also WP:RSOPINION. It also appears in the same issue as two critical responses to the commentary which question its position:
https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/15532739.2018.1468292
https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/15532739.2018.1468293
So - again - you can't establish this as "fact" in wikivoice, but actually have to explain (with attribution) the different perspectives, at which point presenting this as a definitive "myth" is no longer appropriate.
I think this is the danger of assembling a particular overly-certain POV from primary sources like this. Void if removed (talk) 17:54, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That first response notes Although we do not believe that many of our non-responders are in fact persisters, we do agree with the authors that the persistence rates may increase in studies with different inclusion criteria. The classification of GD in the Wallien and Cohen-Kettenis (Citation2008) study was indeed based on diagnostic criteria prior to DSM-5, with the possibility that some children were only gender variant in behavior. We have clearly described the characteristics of the included children (clinically referred and fulfilling childhood DSM criteria) and did not draw conclusions beyond this group, as has wrongly been done by others. The broadness of the earlier DSM criteria was also acknowledged by the American Psychiatric Association and World Health Organization. This was, among other things, a reason to tighten the diagnostic childhood criteria for DSM-5 and the proposed criteria for ICD-11. As we have stated elsewhere (Hembree et al., Citation2017; Steensma, Citation2013), we expect that future follow-up studies using the new diagnostic criteria may find higher persistence rates and hopefully shed more light on developmental routes of gender variant and transgender children. and Unlike what is suggested, we have not studied the gender identities of the children. Instead we have studied the persistence and desistence of children's distress caused by the gender incongruence they experience to the point that they seek clinical assistance.
  • So the authors of the study would in fact agree that not everyone they tracked identified as transgender
The second response linked is by conversion therapist Kenneth Zucker
The desistance review notes in Table 4 that none of the studies tracked DSM-5 diagnoses, many of the youth didn't even meet the DSM-4 threshold for diagnosis[21] Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 18:14, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's an interdisciplinary journal that does social science research on health. Unless they have had some scandal, I would say that they are MedRS. And regardless of that, the journal already has enough confidence in this review article's indepndence.

Relying so heavily on 3 interrelated primary sources

This is a review, a secondary source. I also don't see the relation to SPLC.

As it is, I can't even find where this even is in the SPLC source given.

it is notable that many participants in these studies were never actually diagnosed as such in the first place, being as they were “sub-threshold” (and desistance was higher among subthreshold participants)

with no track record for reliability on biomedical subjects

Fair enough.

A paragraph on the systematic review which found most actually desisted

That's an extremely poor summary of it by omission...

Meanwhile other relevant sources which do not support this framing are omitted.

What are some post-2013 sources that support your framing? Aaron Liu (talk) 00:29, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Social Science & Medicine is a quite good journal.[22] WhatamIdoing (talk) 02:03, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It absolutely is a good journal but, genuine question, is this source MEDRS? This paper is a Reflexive Thematic Analysis of Five legal filings published in a journal for social science research on health. Maybe I'm being too specific and others agree it is MEDRS, but my understanding was that social science papers like this were not. Void if removed (talk) 14:18, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Instead of asking whether it's MEDRS, I think the first question to ask is whether it's supporting Wikipedia:Biomedical information. For example:
  • "Misinformation and disinformation about transgender health care sometimes relies on biased journalism in popular media" – not biomedical information
  • "Data suggests that regret and detransitioning are rare, with detransition often caused by factors such as societal or familiar pressure, community stigma or financial difficulties" – probably not biomedical information
  • "States in the United States have primarily relied on anecdotes to argue detransition is cause for bans on gender affirming care" – not biomedical information
  • "Detransitioner Chloe Cole has supported several such state bans as a member of the advocacy group Do No Harm" – not biomedical information
  • "It relied on studies that had serious methodological flaws such as low sample sizes, outdated diagnostic frameworks that conflated gender non-conformity with transgender identity, usage of conversion therapy on the sample population, and poor definitions of desistance" – probably biomedical information
  • "The myth was primarily popularized in a commentary by James Cantor in 2020, who argued based on the outdated studies that most children diagnosed with gender dysphoria will grow up to be gay and lesbian adults if denied such care" – not biomedical information
and so forth. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:32, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That supplement says causes of conditions are biomedical information. It doesn't say psychological conditions are any different. I think №2 is BioMed and "outdated" in the last one is BioMed.
That said, I see no reason social science papers on health are not MedRS. Aaron Liu (talk) 22:40, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree that classifying some statements is subjective, and that different details might be classified differently. For example, "The myth was primarily popularized" is not biomedical, but "the studies were outdated" might be.
I also would not want to interpret MEDRS as saying that no other field has any relevance or right to speak to health-related subjects at all. A good economics journal may be more capable of reviewing (e.g.,) a question of short-term vs long-term costs and benefits than a biology-focused journal. WhatamIdoing (talk) 23:27, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think we should be using articles from Social Science & Medicine to support biomedical claims.  Tewdar  08:50, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
As well as a shared co-author between the first two sources, the lead author is expert witness for plaintiffs (SPLC) in eg. Boe vs Marshall. Again this is about independence, and such legal/professional relationships between sources need to be taken into account.
What are some post-2013 sources that support your framing?
I am not the one suggesting a framing that the historic data showing that most desist is now misinformation. I am suggesting it is nuanced and we don't really know, with some legitimate differences of opinion in the literature, and I think the removal of discussion of this from Gender dysphoria in children was a bad precedent that facilitated a stronger framing here than the evidence supports. As WPATH's SOC8 says The research literature on continuity versus discontinuity of gender-affirming medical care needs/requests is complex and somewhat difficult to interpret., and I think trying to fashion definitive statements from a paucity of data has veered into WP:RGW.
The best systematic review in 2024 does not support this (it barely supports anything) and a 2024 German analysis of insurance data found high rates of desistance, heavily biased towards female teenagers. Singh et al. 2021, a retrospective study put desistance at >85% for the group who were threshold for GD, and this 2018 review says it is around 80%, citing Ristori & Steensma's 2016 review. YFNS does not like these sources, and I agree we should not fashion a definitive statement that desistance is high from primary sources, but they are peer-reviewed publications that haven't been retracted or corrected and pointing in good faith to what they say cannot be "misinformation". If the best we can do is show the different perspectives then we should do that.
If we focus only on the Karrington and Taylor et al. systematic reviews, we get:
  • Historically the rates were high but the methodology was bad and the numbers were tiny
  • Current rates are confounded by poor and inconsistent data, lack of followup, and use of puberty blockers and social transition from a young age
  • We should either stop trying to track this (Karrington), or track this better with more consistency (Taylor et al)
This entire section of this article is misplaced. It should not be on a page with this title, and in its current form serves mostly to advance as factual the opinions of SPLC and their expert witness.
On the SPLC citation, what the article says is:
  • Most youth sampled in them never identified as transgender nor desired to transition, but were counted as desisting.
And what you pulled from the source is:
  • it is notable that many participants in these studies were never actually diagnosed as such in the first place, being as they were “sub-threshold” (and desistance was higher among subthreshold participants)
Which does not support the text. Many is not most, and sub-threshold GD diagnosis is not "never identified as transgender nor desired to transition".
So the article misrepresents the source substantially.
As for the SPLC source, consider the Singh et al study above which is specifically mentioned in the SPLC report. Only a third were subthreshold for GD (so that fits with "many" but not "most"), and the difference between threshold vs subthreshold desistance was 90.2% vs 86.4%. So yes, desistance was technically higher in the threshold group, but the marginal degree of difference here is misleading the reader by omission. SPLC aren't a RS for facts on biomedical topics. Void if removed (talk) 10:09, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I understand what you were saying about the independence now. That does make a little bit of sense, but 1. out of eleven unique authors, just one author who was also accepted by an impartial judge does not seem like it would affect intellectual independence much 2. the SPLC sources can be removed now anyways (though IMO it's better for them to stay).
The 2016 review cited just aggregates the same qualitative studies—including the Singh study—that Karrington aggregates as "of all poor quality", as they did not consider outside factors (such as if participants were in supportive homes and communities) and followed up too early (instead of following up post-adolescence). These are two of the three essential criteria in the National Institutes of Health (NIH) Quality Assessment Tool for Observational Cohort and Cross-Sectional Studies, which was chosen for its focus on reporting and methodology. The German insurance-data analysis similarly does not account for how much support the desisters received.
The three bullet points you have seem mostly correct. (though I do not see where you got "use of puberty blockers and social transition from a young age") While I would've asked to condense and restructure the paragraph in our WP article if I had reviewed this article for GAN, I fail to see how our WP article's paragraph misrepresents these points. Besides the doubtfully weightful indeed part about nonbinary and dynamic identities, our paragraph just restates the review's conclusion section and adds some details for your first bullet point. I also don't get your SPLC comment, as I found no association between Karrington and SPLC.
w.r.t. WPATH's difficult to interpret continuity of gender-affirming medical care needs requests: this is where the Taylor review is useful, as it talks about continuity:

Six studies reported whether hormones were continued or discontinued, all reporting either no discontinuations or one or two individuals discontinuing. [...]

In the seven studies reporting data for puberty suppression, discontinuation ranged from no patients to 8%. [...] The lack of reporting on reasons for discontinuation makes drawing conclusions problematic. Longer-term follow-up into adulthood is necessary to understand trajectories more comprehensively.

I think this clearly evinces that continuance is high while stating that the rare discontinuance is hard to interpret.
Note that this is not about discontinuance, not desistance. (Taylor strangely avoids discussing "desistance" despite mentioning it in the introduction.) Discontinuance is squarely excluded by the plurality desistance definition of "ceasing to be diagnosed w/ gender dysphoria" as not all diagnoses provide treatment. Therefore I feel like it's erroneous for you to lump Taylor or the WPATH quote under desistance discussion.
I concede that SPLC cannot cite the "most" claim. Aaron Liu (talk) 22:33, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
A discontinuation rate with no time period attached is a strange thing. If the study period is short, that could be essentially meaningless. (Imagine if a new drug claimed 100% adherence, but when you looked into it, it 100% meant "for the first day", and everyone stopped on the second day.) WhatamIdoing (talk) 00:03, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The summarized studies for discontinuation all had different follow-up durations. (Plus the full text of the paragraph that I ellipsisfied did include the follow-up duration of one of the studies.) Aaron Liu (talk) 01:17, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No, it doesn't. Taylor says "In one study, a single person stopped treatment after 4 months", but knowing when a single person dropped out is not the same as "The median follow-up time for all patients was ____ years (range: xy)".
I looked at the underlying studies. They do not provide statements about follow-up times. I didn't see numbers on patients being lost to follow-up, either. "We know for certain that one person stopped treatment after 4 months" is not the same as "We know for certain that the other 37 people continued treatment". That makes sense for the particular source (which is primarily trying to describe incoming referrals, not the patients' outcomes) but it would be important not to misrepresent this as proof that 97% of patients in this study had a lifelong trans identity. 40% of them took some form of puberty blocker, almost all of whom did so too late (i.e., after puberty was nearly or completely over). What happened to the other 57%? Did they stay on puberty blockers forever? Do the authors even know? WhatamIdoing (talk) 01:40, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I don't see how you got to that conclusion. The relevant sources are No. 56--59; 56: The median duration of follow-up of people starting GnRHa and GAH at the VUmc was 4.6 years (IQR, 2.8-8.5; range, 0.7-18.9) 57 specifies a data collection range with a median start date of 14.1/16.0 AMAB/AFAB and end date of 20.2/19.2 AMAB/AFAB. 58 is the only one without a clear follow-up duration, and the review paragraph mentions that. 59's follow-up duration is quoted in the review paragraph as average 3.2 years for birth-registered females, 6.1 years for birth-registered males. Aaron Liu (talk) 18:53, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I was looking at the sources in https://adc.bmj.com/content/109/Suppl_2/s57, in the "Six studies reported whether hormones were continued or discontinued" paragraph you quoted above. Now I wish I'd added links/quotations, because I no longer remember which one I spent the most time on. WhatamIdoing (talk) 19:49, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Welp, I was looking at the second paragraph I quoted: the "In the seven studies..." one. As for the paragraph you were talking about, I don't have time to check all the sources right now, but the first one I checked (№32) says Our follow-up experience for adolescents undergoing hormone treatment for GID is 20.7 person-years (range 0–8.2 years) (however that could make sense...) Aaron Liu (talk) 03:07, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I do find Karrington's cut-off for "post-adolescence" a bit weird, though. They define the the cutoff as 24 years-old as this age is the maximum age to be considered a young adult by the Federal Interagency Forum on Children and Family Statistics in the United States. Would be nice to have studies with mean follow-up past 24, but in their review, they make this seem as a criterion for discarding IMO, one of the studies having a cutoff of 23.86 years-old. The only remain failed criterion (for Davenport, Drummond et al., and Singh, at least) is the one about outside factors, and I guess there is an argument to be had about whether Karrington's position is a bit fringe since the qualitative studies on continuance weren't discounted based on that. I also feel like we should incorporate what's currently source [19] "A critical commentary on follow-up studies and “desistance” theories about transgender and gender-nonconforming children" a bit more. Aaron Liu (talk) 19:47, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Addressing sources
  • As Aaron pointed out, that's a review in a MEDRS journal. You keep bringing up the testifying argument but, to be clear, on one side you have every medical organization in the country and their representatives, on another you have Christian fundamentalist organizations. You are trying to impugn a source for opposing bans on trans healthcare, which every medical organization in the country says should be done.
  • You have, any time the SPLC has been cited about the anti-trans movement, argued vociferously to remove it. Consensus has always found against you and that WP:PARITY applies. The SPLC is WP:GREL on hate groups, like it or not.
  • Demons could be removed, but it is an academic RS by subject matter experts and the field of disinformation studies is sociological as well as medical
Addressing issues:
  • The systematic review of desistance says the same - I added the citation to the paragraph
  • That systematic review of guidelines found that most agreed with or were based on WPATH. They did not like this fact, but it nevertheless remains a fact. And it is true that every single MEDORG supports gender-affirming care, and opponents claim these organizations are ideologically captured.
  • MEDRS are overwhelmingly clear that trans youth can provide informed consent - find a source backing up and obviously competence is complicated, varies greatly by age and other factors, and cannot be presented in this blanket manner.
  • That statement is obviously true, there is in fact an RFC on it's way to a snowclose about this[23] That thing you quoted about "diagnostic overshadowing" is about "depressed trans kids are given hormones but no therapy for their depression" not "XYZ causes gender dysphoria" - it is not at all at odds with the claim Though transgender people have higher rates of mental illness, there is no evidence these cause gender dysphoria. That second part is a selective quotation, the text actually says Three documents (the Arkansas, Alabama, and Florida briefs) specifically highlight ADHD and autism as “psychological problems” or “mental health disorders.” The Alabama Brief claims that “many, if not most gender dysphoric children suffer from” these “neurocognitive difficulties” (p. 16). These documents insinuate that autism and ADHD act as “underlying causes” of gender dysphoria. However, higher diagnosis rates among TGE people do not imply that “most” TGE people are neurodivergent or that autism causes gender dysphoria. - You statement that The high rates of ADHD and autism in this cohort is by now well-established. - is not something the paper disagreed with
I think this article is better understood as "the strong opinions of those fighting trans healthcare bans in court in the US", and to have those presented as definitive - and globally applicable - while other opinions are "misinformation" is not really indicative of a GA. - Are there RS saying other things are misinformation / not misinformation?
This is all based on WP:PRIMARY, non-independent sources, often expressing opinions at odds with MEDRS, and producing their own definitions of "misinformation", which this article renders into wikivoice, making strong claims with no caveats and no balancing perspectives. - apart from all the other dubious claims here, this bit specifically: often expressing opinions at odds with MEDRS - is BS. No MEDRS have been presented contradicting any of these. I'm not sure what balancing perspectives you're referring to, if you can find RS saying "this isn't misinfo" present them. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 17:08, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The systematic review of desistance says the same - I added the citation to the paragraph
The only mention of "myth" in that systematic review is a citation to Zucker's "The persistence myth".
What you are doing is taking this review's criticism of poor data and applying it to the idea desistance is therefore a "myth", which this source does not say at all. So this is WP:SYNTH. You can't just combine multiple sources like this, and use the MEDRS status of this source to bolster the "myth" claims of another source. Void if removed (talk) 18:08, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The sentence it's cited to is It relied on studies that had serious methodological flaws such as low sample sizes, outdated diagnostic frameworks that conflated gender non-conformity with transgender identity, usage of conversion therapy on the sample population, and poor definitions of desistance
From the review: From all of these collections of studies emerged the commonly used statistic stating that ∼80% of TGE youth will desist after puberty, a statistic that has been critiqued by other works based on poor methodologic quality, the evolving understanding of gender and probable misclassification of nonbinary individuals, and the practice of attempting to dissuade youth from identifying as transgender in some of these studies. and Disappearance of GD and a change in gender identity are two concepts that, while occasionally connected, remain distinct. GD is associated with significant distress at the differences between gender and body, whereas a TGE gender identity does not require that distress. Therefore, a TGE child could still identify as TGE even if they do not experience GD. Despite having stated difference in these definitions, all the articles conflated these two ideas[24]
You said regarding the quoted article text these are strong claims about desistance and prior studies which require MEDRS and when presented with a MEDRS saying exactly that, you've shifted the goalpost
You can't have it both ways, you repeatedly argue "we don't know if most kids desist" but also that we can't say it's a myth that "we know most kids desist". Unless MEDRS actually agree "we know that most kids desist", the claim that "most kids desist" is in fact FRINGE. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 18:23, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I very much dont see the credibility of such NPOV claims. Its well accepted by highly respected medical orgs that trans affirming care has an astounding success rates, with 99% satisfaction rate for gender affirming surgery and HRT. And detransition is rare, according to many credible studies. Most commonly due to social pressures, not due to a changing of identities. Its highly rare phenonom when external pressures, ie discrimination, are excluded. (one such study is Turbin, Jack et al. 2021) Treating this challenge as anything but a fringe and bigotry based challenge i think would be frankly ridiculous. And I wont entertain such false equivalency/credibility when there is no such basis. -LoomCreek (talk) 01:34, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Puberty blockers were banned or limited to trials in many European countries [25] and the WHO refused to issue a guideline for children because they find that: "the evidence base for children and adolescents is limited and variable regarding the longer-term outcomes of gender affirming care for children and adolescents". That is hardly a success story. JonJ937 (talk) 11:43, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

It is stated in wikivoice that Detransition refers to the cessation of gender-affirming care, sourced to McNamara et al. (2024) and Wuest & Last (2023). While Wuest & Last say detransitioners (i.e., individuals who have halted GAC), and McNamara et al. write Discontinuation of GAC is sometimes called “detransition,”, the McNamara source makes clear that this is not the only definition (e.g. Most studies suggest that however detransition is defined, the percentage of people who report actual regret for GAC is very low and spend some time discussing how different definitions affect the stats. The source used in the Detransition article lede says Detransitioning refers to the process whereby people who have undergone gender transition later identify or present as the gender that was assigned to them at birth.  Tewdar  10:00, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

For the record, I fixed the definition to clarify the more expansive one.[26] Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 15:58, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Coord comment

I'm going to ask everyone in this discussion to avoid further increasing the temperature, and step away if they cannot. The subject is a hot button political issue, but that doesn't make it ok to throw attacks and insults at other editors. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 23:24, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I noticed the DYK nom a while back and thought of commenting on it but chose not to. My first thought was the objections to the DYK did not appear to be made in good faith even if they were intended to be. You can't cite policy and say you merely want to see a neutral take on the arguments of both sides, then belittle one side as "teenagers" who have no idea what they're writing about and likewise label the nominator and reviewer as such. The objections only needed to touch on the coverage and sources cited, but instead it devolved into a thinly veiled attack on other editors that nobody else wanted to touch with a six-foot pole. Yue🌙 02:17, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This has also put me off from really engaging with this thread, too. There's lots I feel I could say, but it just eats up so much time and effort. I'd rather deal with articles in the (much more civil, if no less passionately debated) WP:PIA topic area. Lewisguile (talk) 14:25, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This discussion is waaay more civil and calm than the GENSEX topic used to be just a couple of years ago.  Tewdar  15:03, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That's more of a statement of how awful general conduct in GENSEX used to be than a ringing endorsement of how it is now. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 00:07, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Actionable items

Creating this section for the GAR coordinators to highlight which, if any, issues need to be addressed before this can be closed. Courtesy pings to @Lee Vilenski, @Iazyges, @Chipmunkdavis, @Trainsandotherthings. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 22:56, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not going to put my thumb on the scale right now, especially with the new rule that these are required to be open 1 month (which I disagree with strongly but will respect). Please let the discussion develop for now. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 23:18, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds good to me! 2 quick notes though
  1. ) WP:GAR should be updated as it currently says GARs typically remain open for at least one month. (typically -> should/must, the page hasn't been updated in almost a year)
  2. ) WP:GAR does say If discussion becomes contentious, participants may request the assistance of GAR coordinators at Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations. The coordinators may attempt to steer the discussion towards resolution or make a decisive close.
Best, Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 23:42, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
While I am not a coord, the most critical issue here is that the original review was clearly improper by any reading of the reviewing instructions; as far as I am concerned, the article has not passed a proper GA review. The easiest solution would simply be closing this discussion as delist and renominating at GA; I suppose the original place in the GAN queue would be reinstated. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:20, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Amen, and I apologise for not stating such in my original nomination statement.--Launchballer 13:25, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That was not the original review... That was the second GA review, after the original GA review failed due to some long quotes failing copvio and raised some other issues I addressed. As WP:GAN/I#N5 says If your nomination has failed, you can take the reviewer's suggestions into account and renominate the article, which I did. That is not evidence of NPOV violations, which is supposedly the premise of this GA reassessment. If the coordinators think a fresh GA review is necessary, then User:IntentionallyDense has offered to do so above. I do not think that is necessary. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 15:57, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist I do see what others are saying, the second review shows no evidence of source spot checks or really any review. That doesn't mean the article is or isn't up to GA criteria, it just means the reviewer didn't do their job in reviewing the article. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 16:37, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@LoomCreek, your review has a green tick next to "source spot check", so I'm assuming you did actually perform one, even if you didn't elucidate on it?
On the basis of WP:AGF, I don't think not giving enough detail is in itself evidence of an invalid review.
A new review may be the fastest route, but LoomCreek should also have a chance to defend their review here for the record, whatever else happens. Lewisguile (talk) 10:08, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Over the years, we as a community have come to expect that GA reviews are more than just a brief glance and speedy promotion to GA status. There can be no more waving people through with a cursory check in a post-Coldwell enWiki. At minimum there should be some evidence that all the GA criteria were checked. Had I been aware of how poor the GA review was, I wouldn't have stated the creation of this GAR was improper (though the nom has already stated that they should have included that in the nomination). As a nominator, I would ask for a second opinion if someone passed one of my nominations with that little feedback.
As far as I'm concerned, if someone wants to take on a full GA3, we can keep this open until that concludes, assuming a consensus to delist doesn't develop here. I'm deliberately not digging into content discussions in this article because I think someone needs to act independently here when tensions are high. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 00:06, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm guess neither I nor anyone else here can take on the GA3? Aaron Liu (talk) 00:52, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There's no formal rule against it, but if you think that other people might feel you were WP:INVOLVED, even to a small degree, it would probably be better to let someone else do that. WhatamIdoing (talk) 02:58, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Trainsandotherthings Would I be able to just start this on the talkpage? I have purposely not given any input here and have just barely skim read this to stay neutral. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 04:27, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Support this being put on hold/closed as keep and IntentionallyDense starting a GA3: Frankly, I think it is ridiculous, if not insulting or even farcical, that this was opened claiming NPOV violations without any evidence of them, based off a user leaving multiple insults at a DYK without engaging on talk like requested, and used to try and re-litigate settled content disputes where consensus was clear, and now it must procedurally stay open for 30 days where it'll evidently be a venue for forumshopping content disputes that no coordinator wants to touch with a 39.5 foot pole. The only valid reason this GAR could exist is the procedural issue the GA2 could have been too speedy (if one ignores that it was a follow-up of a thorough GA1), a factor that wasn't mentioned until a week into this GAR. I want to short-circuit this nonsense and support @IntentionallyDense's offer of a thorough and independent GA review to put this to rest. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 21:00, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I also think that just doing another, more thorough, GAR is probably the best way to go here if there are concerns that the second GAR wasn't thorough enough. Loki (talk) 21:04, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Another GA sounds good to me. Aaron Liu (talk) 23:39, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Surely it would be inappropriate for IntentionallyDense to do a GA review? He has declared himself to be not neutral by offering to do a review on the basis that someone else might fail it – implying that he won’t? [27] Sweet6970 (talk) 00:07, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This is a stunning misrepresentation of what he said... Frankly you should apologize for it and impugning him like that
I wouldn’t be shocked if someone takes the nomination with the intent of failing it
Nowhere does he say he wouldn't fail it, or that his motivation is somehow, as you put it, offering to do a review on the basis that someone else might fail it.
He has previously offered to do the GA2 and Loomcreek beat him to it, that's why he's offering to do a GA3. Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ (talk) 01:42, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Sweet6970 When did I declare myself as not neutral? I think everything considered, it is completely reasonable for me to suggest that someone may go into this review with the intention to fail or pass it. I did not imply anything, do not imply things for me. If I had something to say I would have, I wouldn't have left it for someone else to imply. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 02:21, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
To add: I have purposely stayed out of this conversation to stay neutral. I have no history with GENSEX. I have no skin in this game. I do not take kindly to baseless accusations of bias, especially when I have gone the extra mile to remain unbiased. I showed interest in this article before it was even a GA. I haven't even read it all the way through, I just thought it was well sourced. I also have done quite a few GAN reviews, many of which overlap with medical topics and I have an extensive history of editing medical content which means I am more likely to pick up on sourcing issues that non-medical editors overlook. If you want to dig up some dirt on me, feel free to take a look at some of my past reviews. I am very thorough, sometimes to a fault, with my reviews. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 02:26, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
someone takes the nomination with the intent of failing it means someone else taking the review with a preconceived outcome in mind, which is what Dense is trying to avoid. Aaron Liu (talk) 03:02, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Your Friendly Neighborhood Sociologist ⚧ Ⓐ Agreed, the conduct of this so-called GA3 thus far has been increadibly disrespectful of other contributors. If there are issues to be raised, then fair enough, but as you said it certainly appears as though some are seeking to insult rather than improve or propperly engage. I can understand the issues with GA2 that some have mentioend but only to the extent that they seem to not mention, perhaps by accident, GA1. Bejakyo (talk) 01:26, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure what you meant in your last sentence. A thorough GA1 doesn't mean GA2 has no need to spot-check. Aaron Liu (talk) 03:03, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That might not have been clear to the GA2 reviewer, who was doing their first-ever GA review. I don't think we should blame them, even if the review is not very similar to what we usually see, and even if it gets delisted (I make no judgment either way about whether that will eventually be deemed necessary). WhatamIdoing (talk) 04:25, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah this article is a tricky one to review, let alone as someone not familiar with GAN reviews. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 18:04, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed -- this GAR seems to have been inappropriately raised and conducted. I'd support this proposal. Srey Srostalk 17:31, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@IntentionallyDense: You said on YFNS’s Talk page: I wouldn’t be shocked if someone takes the nomination with the intent of failing it. whilst offering to do the review yourself. You have pre-emptively smeared anyone who takes on the review, and fails the article, as not only being biased, but as having deliberately taken on the review with the intent of failing it. This is an extraordinary accusation. Even now, you have provided no explanation for your extraordinary comment. You are assuming that anyone who fails the article in the review must be biased. The inescapable logical conclusion is that you think an ’unbiased’ reviewer must pass the article. I don’t understand how you can think you are unbiased, and a suitable editor to perform the review. Sweet6970 (talk) 13:25, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Whatever other assumptions we might make here, let's also remember to assume good faith. I don't think ID's edit history supports an assumption that they would treat the article particularly favourably. Lewisguile (talk) 14:09, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
AGF is a rebuttable assumption which is overridden by IntentionallyDense’s extraordinary comment, which, in itself, assumes bad faith in others, and for which he has not provided any explanation. Sweet6970 (talk) 15:23, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
You believing that I did not AGF does not mean that you no longer have to AGF. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 18:05, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Sweet6970 Please stop twisting my words and putting words into my mouth. I know what I said and I have given further explanation. The only people I have "smeared" (using your words not mine) are those that would go into the review with the intent of failing it. I am not accusing anyone of anything. I am simply saying that is a possibility. I have provided further explanations but I will explain it again for you: many people have expressed their opinions of this article, I have not, having reestablished strong opinions of an article may effect a review. Your inescapable logical conclusion is both very not logical and easy to escape. Not to mention, not a single person has agreed with it. Both of your comments thus far towards me have been assuming bad faith.
It would have been different if I had named names or made actual accusations about specific users, but I have not, nor did I make that comment thinking of any particular editor. I am going to advise you to drop this as I don't think you are getting anywhere with your accusations. If you have any constructive feedback about my review, feel free to mention it on the review page. 16:12, 8 March 2025 (UTC) IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 16:12, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
You've already said the same thing above and you seem to be ignoring the comments that claim a different meaning to the phrase. Aaron Liu (talk) 19:31, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There are some uncited statements in the article, including entire paragraphs. When the article was first promoted to GA status, it was about 6200 words. It is now over 10,000 words, and WP:TOOBIG recommends spinning out articles of that size. Is there any information in the article that can be spun out or stated with less words, to make this article more concise? The "Demographics" section seems to end at 2016. Are there more up-to-date statistics? Z1720 (talk) 04:01, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Oppose: The article already makes abundant use of WP:SUMMARYSTYLE, and I am impressed that such a general article comes in at only 10,425 words, which is perfectly in accord with WP:TOOBIG. I have reviewed the article and tagged every instance of a missing citation. Since none of the statements are controversial, I expect editors will fill them in now that they have been flagged. Demotion seems unwarranted and nonproductive. Patrick (talk) 17:32, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Patrick Welsh: I have added additional citation needed tags. The GA criteria states "All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph". The numerous citation needed tags (including for entire paragraphs and quotes) and the "additional citations needed" orange banners will need to be resolved before I can recommend that this article keeps its GA status. Z1720 (talk) 18:03, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Not sure why you would add those redundant tags, which make the article look messier that it is.
    As long as the unsupported content is uncontroversial, which it is, I will remain opposed.
    Placing an artificial deadline on editors to make these improvements seems counter-productive. Patrick (talk) 18:10, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • WP:TOOBIG isn't a hard rule; note that it says "> 9,000 words – Probably should be divided or trimmed, though the scope of a topic can sometimes justify the added reading material." (emphasis mine) I think a general article about feminism should be on the larger side, and 10,000ish words isn't an exhausting length. The citation issues aren't major and can be remedied easily, eventually. Yue🌙 08:55, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Earth, one of the biggest scopes on Wikipedia, is under 9,000 words, so spinning off prose can be done. In my opinion, an article should be concise and spin out material into daughter articles instead of long, hard to load on slow internet connections, and have too much detail that distracts from the most important information. None of this negates the citation concerns which still exist in the article. Z1720 (talk) 13:38, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
80% of the feminist theory content of the page could be removed, and the page would lose nothing in terms of detailing what exactly feminism is. After a talk page discussion, I once removed an entire subsection on "architectural feminism" that was based on a single article from a feminist journal. If you Googled the subject, all that it returned was the Wikipedia page and the article itself. This is what I'm talking about: this article has chronic issues with detailed descriptions of incredibly minor topics, in this case one so minor it couldn't even warrant its own article. Pernicious.Editor (talk) 00:27, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support: The article has had serious length and POV problems for years now. The article received GA status in 2011, just before the advent of "4th wave" feminism, when feminism itself was significantly narrower in scope. The anachronistic issues that once plagued this article have mostly been addressed, but length issues are still present.
Feminism today has become something personal for many people, which I think is the source of the POV and length issues. I honestly believe the only reason this article has maintained GA status for so long despite its glaring issues is that feminist editors see delisting it as an attack on feminism itself. Because of that, I doubt it will ever be delisted, even though it hasn't deserved GA status for nearly ten years. Pernicious.Editor (talk) 00:12, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
What are the POV issues? Patrick (talk) 16:40, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 19:27, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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There is lots of unencyclopedic language throughout the article. The "School visits" section seems quite promotional and unencyclopedic: perhaps it can be removed. There is uncited text throughout the article, and not much information about his more recent work: he won an Emmy in 2021 for "Journey" but the article doesn't have much information about this. Z1720 (talk) 13:14, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Lots of uncited statements in the "2020-2021" and the "2022" sections. Z1720 (talk) 14:04, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This is hard for me to do anything with because I don't understand tennis at all. Here's some sources though.
Should be an easy one for a tennis fan. Good luck folks. MediaKyle (talk) 15:30, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There are uncited statements, including an entire paragraph. The lead is quite long and I think it can be more concise. Z1720 (talk) 14:01, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited text, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 13:47, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Besides the issue detected by Z1720, the table is not complying with WP:COLOR. Rpo.castro (talk) 22:34, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements and overreliance on block quotes. Z1720 (talk) 22:02, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Lots of uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 22:00, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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There is a lot of uncited text. The article uses lots of block quotes, when Wikipedia recommends a summary style. The article is quite long: removing some of the block quotes might help with this, but there might also be places where the prose could be shorter. Z1720 (talk) 21:54, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'd be interested in helping, although the timeline of GARs may be on the fast side relative to what I can contribute. I've put this and the article on my watchlist, and I'll see what I can do. CaptainEek Edits Ho Cap'n!03:16, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm interested in helping also. Remsense ‥  07:18, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@CaptainEek: GARs now typically stay open for a month (or will be closed as "keep" early if concerns are resolved). If there's ongoing improvements it will remain open past that one month. Z1720 (talk) 13:45, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Some uncited statements, and a Trivia section that needs to be integrated into the rest of the article. Z1720 (talk) 21:32, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Not see anything wrong here. I guess I contest the assessment with no real points being made. The demotion request is based on a few sentences in a trivia section?Moxy🍁 00:39, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Moxy: The good article criteria 2b states: "All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)" There is lots of uncited text in the article, including a citation needed tag from November 2016. Z1720 (talk) 00:56, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I've Source the one tag....but can you help out and at least tag what you think needs sourcing..you're basically asking us to Source every sentence because this is the most vague thing I've ever heard. Moxy🍁 01:06, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
(edit conflict) I think this looks fixable - although the archived kronoskaf source looks like some wiki variant and I don't know that we'd consider britishbattles.com a RS anymore. When I saw this go to GAR, I was hopeful that I'd be able to help, but I own very little source material about the French & Indian War and it looks like my local libraries don't have a whole lot either. Hog Farm Talk 01:15, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I can provide many sources I just don't know for what as every paragraph has sources? [1]Moxy🍁 01:17, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Moxy. I cleaned up the cites, with the exception of one problem. Aside from the order of battle which needs better cites, an editor (I can't figure out who) added cites to MacLeod in the first section. Now there is a book by MacLeod in the further reading section, but I cannot tell if they used the French or English versions for the cite. I do not have that book, so I am hoping you might. Thanks. Llammakey (talk) 13:19, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Moxy and Llammakey: It looks like most of the citation concerns have been resolved: I have only added one citation needed tag to be resolved. Z1720 (talk) 13:36, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
order of battle ---- some differences?[2][3] Moxy🍁 17:32, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Info[4] Moxy🍁 17:46, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Moxy! I will incorporate this stuff. Llammakey (talk) 19:25, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
All done and replaced all citations using Britishbattles.com. I hope this helps the review. Llammakey (talk) 20:08, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Several uncited paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 21:25, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I would agree lacks its citation especially critically in the final section where significant claims are made in terms of historical sources interpretation.
A source is cited (Zuckerman 2000) I have done my best to try and find an online accessible version but all I am turning up is book reviews.
Perhaps Zuckerman provides information that would cite the whole paragraph but the editor who wrote that section cited only the first sentence - this is a mistake I have made myself so I would not be surprised. But I think someone would have to access the source to check and amend the citation.
And thus the article fails the verifiable criteria;
"reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose);" LeChatiliers Pupper (talk) 19:59, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Unreferenced section in the "Acting" and "Professional wrestling" sections. Z1720 (talk) 21:18, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Some statements have been uncited since 2023. Z1720 (talk) 20:40, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

It goes back a lot farther, the version kept at GAR in 2011 was full of uncited statements. By today's standards, it should not have been kept. I try and check the state of the article when it was last reviewed to see if the problems can be fixed by removing unsourced content, but that won't work very well here. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 00:19, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 20:33, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Worth noting there are ongoing talkpage discussions on the veracity of some of the article's information. CMD (talk) 02:08, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited statements, including entire sections. Z1720 (talk) 20:30, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

To clarify that, there are exactly two (rather small) sections that have no refs. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 20:54, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Nihonjoe: The GA criteria states, "All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph." I see lots of places that don't have citations. Would you like me to add citation needed templates to those places? Z1720 (talk) 23:18, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
If there are statements you think need a citation, then yes, you should mark every one of them. It's impossible to know which ones are potentially problematic otherwise. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 16:24, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Nihonjoe: Citation needed tags have been added. The "Twin cities" section also needs expansion. Z1720 (talk) 16:59, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, I've added a bunch. I'll let someone else work on it for a bit. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 01:20, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Z1720: I believe all of the "citation needed" items have been sourced now. I removed one sentence that I couldn't source from the end of the "Anime and manga" section:

In contrast to K-Pop, J-Pop is less popular in Germany and is mainly listened to by anime fans.

I've tried every which way of finding a source, and can't find anything outside of discussion forums (which aren't considered reliable sources). Any other items needing sources? ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 16:22, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Also removed the following from the same paragraph as I can't find a source:

Several hundred anime films and series have been dubbed into German and, since the 2010s, have increasingly been marketed with German subtitles on video-on-demand services.

Anyone who can find a source can add it back. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 19:51, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Z1720: I've added refs for the additional tags. There are no others at this time. ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 19:53, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Nihonjoe: Citation concerns have been resolved. I am a little concerned about the length, at 10,000 words. If possible, can some of this information be spun out or the block quotes summarised? This would help the article comply with the concise requirement of 1a. I think just a once-over readthrough with a focus of summarising overly detailed information should fulfil this requirement. Z1720 (talk) 16:58, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see a problem with the length and detail in the article. Would you mind taking a stab at it, or making a note here of sections you think are overly verbose? ···日本穣 · 投稿 · Talk to Nihonjoe · Join WP Japan! 17:21, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There is uncited content, including the entire Hurricane Katrina section. Additionally, there are a number of citations to Global Security, which is no longer considered reliable. Hog Farm Talk 01:43, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Wildly out of date in terms of scholarship. Essentially wrong about the organisation of curiae, the nature of the lex curiata, age of the centuriate assembly, nature of the centuries (strange anachronisms like "means test"), nature of Sulla's reforms to the centuries. Anachronistically thinks the thirty-five tribes existed throughout the republic.

Heavily reliant on Abbott 1901 (incorrectly cited, contrary to modern policy, to a 1960s reprint) which is not a reliable source due to the number of discredited claims it presents uncritically. Writing fails to comply with modern style standards (strange italics and capitalisation everywhere). Fails to cover 20th century research on the topic entirely. Ifly6 (talk) 09:20, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Delist. The article dates from the early years of Wikipedia (2008). User Romanhistorian made a lot of contributions at the time using Abbott, but it's now not considered a reliable source. T8612 (talk) 12:41, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Article has 11 citation needed tags (at the time of posting) , so probably passes meets the quick-fail criteria. The good article review was also around 16 years ago. TNM101 (chat) 05:35, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Surprisingly enough for a promotion this old, I don't see any glaring issues in the version that was reviewed and given GA status. But that was over 1,000 revisions ago, and the current article does not meet our standards. The CN tags appear valid, and honestly the article's organization isn't great either with excessive sectioning and very short paragraphs. If this doesn't get improved, it should be delisted. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 22:56, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Lots of uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 01:30, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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The "Demographics" section focuses too much on the 2010 census, and should instead be updated with the 2020 information. The "Economy" section is just a list of businesses: since the first sentence of the article describes this as a resort town, I think there needs to be more information about the tourism economy. There is some uncited prose. Z1720 (talk) 01:27, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements in the article, including entire paragraphs. Source quality concerns have been raised on the talk page. Z1720 (talk) 01:23, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like to try improving this – please ping me if I haven't gotten around to it within a week. Toadspike [Talk] 07:25, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Z1720 I've gone through and added a few tags. Could you please check if all issues that should be addressed in this GAR are tagged? This would help structure my work. Toadspike [Talk] 09:32, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Undue weight/tone issues

I see a few instances of undue weight or an unnecessarily editorializing tone in the article and wanted to check with others if my view makes sense:

  • "In the French language, the word orientale includes both the meaning of "eastern" related to compass direction and the meaning of "oriental", the Asiatic region. The same ambiguity is present in the Russian language, with both "eastern" and "oriental" indicated by one word." – This part is uncited, though I have no doubt that it's true. However, it seems completely irrelevant. I have yet to check the sources to see if it is mentioned, if it isn't I would like to remove these two sentences.
  • "Thus, the Japanese side argues that the South Koreans misunderstand the history of the name." – This may be accurate, but it should be made clear from the examples earlier in the section and not tacked on to the end of the section. I would like to remove this sentence.
  • "As a result, the international name of the sea changed from no name to the Sea of Japan, on the maps drawn by countries other than Japan or Korea during the 17th to 20th centuries." – This is very poor wording, verging on POV.
  • "Contrary to the position of a few major countries..." – This whole paragraph is uncited and reads very POV. I would like to remove it, since the point it makes should be covered by a list of examples (which this section is) instead of evidence-free editorializing.

I haven't checked the referenced parts of the article yet, I assume there are more POV issues to come. Given the topic, I am not surprised. Toadspike [Talk] 09:40, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

"comparison of surveys" table

I had to look at this table several times to understand what it is trying to say. It is extremely wide (going far off of my screen in Vector 2022) and the important trend it tries to show, the switch from "East Sea" to "Sea of Japan" from the 18th to 19th centuries, is hidden in a sea of irrelevant details. To fix this, at the very least the US, FR, and DE columns should be removed. Perhaps the table should be removed altogether and replaced with a graph. The citation (to an extremely partial Japanese government webpage – not ideal) needs to be reformatted to actually link to the data, not just to the main page of the report. Toadspike [Talk] 09:49, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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There are uncited statements, including almost the entire alumni section. The "History" section seems to stop at 1990. I am skeptical that there has been nothing of historical note for 35 years. Z1720 (talk) 03:45, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements throughout the article. Z1720 (talk) 02:38, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

FYI the relevant criteria is "reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged.... must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose)". IMO concerns should be expressed in that context. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 17:15, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@North8000: Content in good articles need to be cited. I am happy to add citation needed templates if requested, but there are some citation needed tags from 2018 that are unresolved. Z1720 (talk) 01:16, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I was not arguing either way, just for a clearly expressed-concern that uses the criteria as a guide. And so an uncited statement per se is not a violation. On another note, an unresolved CN tag is a whole different different thing than the general thoughts expressed here. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 03:44, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'll see what I can do in terms of sourcing, but no promises. Regards, Grumpylawnchair (talk) 17:04, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Found one source that partially supports the statement but I don't know about the rest. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 16:17, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Pinging @Piotrus and @HełmPolski: Can either of you help? I'm sorry, I'm kind of grasping at straws here. Thanks, Grumpylawnchair (talk) 21:59, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'll ping folks more familiar with that history period active on en wiki: @Merangs @Volunteer Marek @Orczar Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:24, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Piotrus: &@Grumpylawnchair: – I can try to fill the sections where the 'citations needed' notes are present in the text. Is there anything else that requires addressing? On a personal note, I think the footnotes/citations in the lead section make it very untidy and any referenced information there should already be in the body of the article. Merangs (talk) 16:51, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The uncited statements are the entire basis of this GAR. I could help you tidy up the lead if you deem it necessary. Thanks, Grumpylawnchair (talk) 20:35, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Merangs: On that note, the notes should probably be put in their own notelist instead of the reflist since it is unwieldy. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 20:37, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, notes and refs should not be mixed, good point. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:39, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Piotrus: & @Grumpylawnchair: – Just wanted to let you know that I was able to locate and place sources for the uncited passages in the article. Merangs (talk) 22:53, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Merangs: Thank you very much! I'll take care of separating the notes from the refs. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 22:57, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Piotrus: The article probably needs a good copyedit (maybe someone should place a request to the Guild of Copyeditors), especially the footnotes, and a lot of the info in the footnotes can be moved into the prose. Grumpylawnchair (talk) 23:32, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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The article contains many uncited statements, including an orange banner asking for more citations that was posted in 2016. There is also no information about the subject's retirement. Z1720 (talk) 03:21, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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There are a lot of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs, and not a lot of information about his later career. Z1720 (talk) 03:17, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Contains sections of uncited text:

such significant amounts of text uncited makes this no longer a GA. LibStar (talk) 06:27, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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I've been considering this nomination for a while. This is a 2013 promotion that underwent a peer review in 2016. My most pressing concern is the failure of criterion 2b (reliable sources), with multiple self-published sources, primary sources, and other problematic material used. I've added inline or banner tags for all of these issues (though some of these have gone unresolved for over a year). I also doubt the article clears criterion 3a (addresses main aspects) with the number of high-quality scholarly sources left unused in § Further reading. Delist. TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 23:18, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Having worked as one of the major contributors to the article, I've also notified the relevant WikiProjects of this reassessment. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 23:49, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
i concur, i'm surprised that the article doesn't even source napier's anime from akira to howl's moving castle. i see sources from travel websites and amazon (twice), and it seems as though the accolades section has been flagged as requiring attention for over a year. unless all of these issues are fixed quickly, i (regrettably) call to delist. Plifal (talk) 11:30, 26 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I don't see how this article can claim to meet current {{Good article}} standards when the Awards/Accolades table is not properly referenced. WP:VERIFY is fundamental. Unless there is an editor actively working to fix it soon then the article should be downgraded for failing to meet the necessary standard. -- 109.76.129.14 (talk) 18:06, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Impressive cleanup, thanks. (I would also recommend removing any Navbox for any awards that are no longer mentioned directly on this page. Relevance matters, WP:INDISCRIMINATE and WP:NAVBOX "The subject of the template should be mentioned in every article.") -- 109.77.194.73 (talk) 17:00, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your work on § Accolades, EzrealChen! That section is now in much better shape. For the purposes of this reassessment, however, my !vote stays the same due to the other issues I mentioned in my nomination statement. TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 00:42, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 04:21, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Could you be more specific - I see one overtly problematic paragraph (second paragraph of Sovietization), what other ones are of concern? Regards, Goldsztajn (talk) 03:25, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Goldsztajn: I have added citation needed tags where they are needed. Z1720 (talk) 03:38, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I'm making some progress with the uncited sections, will keep working on it, I'll need four or five days. Regards, Goldsztajn (talk) 06:10, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm concerned with the broadness of this page. This is a polity of 70 years, but little is covered outside of History. I don't think a Geography section is needed given it would likely replicate current Armenia, but there should be coverage of the population and culture. Perhaps the article could have more on the raions and cities, and more on the economy and infrastructure. This was surely a time of huge change. Lastly, should there be an extended paragraph on the flag based only on the Memoirs of Nikita Khrushchev? CMD (talk) 06:27, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I think the point is this is a page that will predominantly need to reflect a specific historical period and politics, population and culture will to a large extent be subsumed into that (for example, note the religious aspects discussed during the Thaw section). However, will try to address some of these issues. Regards, Goldsztajn (talk) 23:01, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Other aspects should not be subsumed under History on this article, that would only be the case for a dedicated History article (currently there is not one). As a comparison, consider East Germany. A much broader coverage of politics, administration, economics, demographics, and culture, as well as a Legacy section, possibly relevant here too. CMD (talk) 02:22, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    FWIW WP:SIZERULE; the DDR article is somewhat bloated. Regards, Goldsztajn (talk) 20:19, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    I think we may need to quick fail/delist this. I'm seeing some sections which appear to be close paraphrasing of "A concise history of the Armenian people: (from ancient times to the present)" by George A Bournoutian. The text previously referenced was the 5th edition, however I accessed the 2nd edition at the archive.org library, and this shows sections which have been simply reordered. I'll need to do a full check. Regards, Goldsztajn (talk) 23:00, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    The DDR article is long because of its 4,000 word History section, this has little bearing on the rest of the sections. That's also more GACR3b, not GACR3a, which is the issue here. Thanks for the copyvio note, that's a rough find. I don't seem to have access at archive.org. Looking at early revisions, the 2006 version was initially cited[28]. CMD (talk) 02:42, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Apologies, RL has delayed me on this, will be able to review the close paraphrasing within 48 hours. Regards, Goldsztajn (talk) 02:33, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I did a pass wielding the "Armenian concise history" book—added citation, expanded, shuffled info, etc. Only one citation-less paragraph remains, a list of Armenian people from 20th century who defined certain period of Soviet Armenia, but I have a feeling it's just a list of successful people from 20th century Armenia who have a wiki pages, and a wiki editor loosely connected them. Since they are popular and sucessful figures, it can be assumed that they are a part of Soviet Armenia zeitgeist, but the concise history and google didn't produce anything remotely useful to prove it. I would delete it. LastJabberwocky (talk) 12:11, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 04:19, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Numerous uncited statements, including the entire "Weight standards" section. Z1720 (talk) 04:17, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 04:13, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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The article has uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. There are a lot of block quotes in the article, which would be better summarised. The article is not concise, and some sections are very long which would benefit from being broken up by headings. Z1720 (talk) 04:08, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited text, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 04:01, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Lots of uncited statements including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 03:58, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 03:56, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I am puzzled by your nomination, as I see only one CN tag in the article, and I will fix that cite. If you could be so kind as to note the other "entire paragraphs" or problematic sections where WP:POPE does not apply, I will take a look at those and see what can be done. Montanabw(talk) 05:56, 16 February 2025 (UTC) Follow up Spotted a couple area where a cite could be added, so I did. Flag anything else you really think must be addressed. I hope we are done here. Montanabw(talk) 07:07, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Montanabw: I have added citation needed tags to the places that need citations. Per WP:POPE, that is an essay, which "...contains the advice or opinions of one or more Wikipedia contributors" and "has not been thoroughly vetted by the community." (per the box at the top of the page). Meanwhile, the GA criteria 2b states that the content of good articles must be cited no later than at the end of the paragraph. The prose there I added cn tags needs to be cited. Z1720 (talk) 14:28, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with Montanabw that the article is adequately sourced and still meets the spirit of WP:GA?; IMO, a one-sentence "paragraph" does not require a citation. The only fixes I see needed are a couple to citation templates. Miniapolis 16:43, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Miniapolis: WP:GA? 2b states, "All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose);" Yes, that one sentence paragraph needs a citation. Z1720 (talk) 18:01, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
That's your opinion. I disagree. Miniapolis 15:09, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs, some of which have been labelled as uncited since 2024. Z1720 (talk) 03:54, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Paragraph 3, states: "Since the creation of the Plant Patent Act of 1930[8] the naming of cultivars has been complicated by the use of statutory patents[9] for plants and recognition of plant breeders' rights" – this is of course, of highly localised relevance, and does not affect the situation generally (not relevant to 194 of 195 countries). Delete. - MPF (talk) 12:01, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Plant breeders' rights (UPOV) has a much wider scope than just the US. Even plant patents are not unique to the US. I think that an equivalent statement should be retained, but perhaps placed in the Cultivar Names or Legal Protection sections. Lavateraguy (talk) 17:39, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    @Lavateraguy @Z1720 - yes, something worded generally without being specific to any one country would be good - MPF (talk) 21:03, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Thinking further, that sentence is only of highly localised relevance if you read it that way. I suspect that the US Plant Patent Act of 1930 was the first instance worldwide of extending the intellectual property regime to plant varieties and as such is the starting point whether you take a US or global view. The rest of the sentence doesn't have an explicitly restricted scope.
    It remains that the best way of meeting the challenge of providing a clear concise and accurate statement in the lede might just be to defer the topic to the IPR section. On the other hand "Since the extension of the concept of intellectual property to plant varieties in the US in 1930 and subsequently in much of the world complications have been introduced to the naming of cultivars" may do the trick.
    I note that references 9 and 10 have the same archive link. I suspect that the one for reference 9 is incorrect. Lavateraguy (talk) 21:22, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • a change was made from "known cultivar" to "named cultivar". This had led to me thinking about edge cases to the definition of cultivars. For example, while taking a distinctive variant from a wild population into cultivation establishes a cultivar (named or otherwise), taking a typical variant from a wild population doesn't. I expect that there's some language requiring cultivars to be distinctive not just from other cultivars, but also from the wild type. But I also wouldn't be surprised if someone has introduced a trade designation for a wild type. (Wild types in cultivation are usually known either by the botanical name, or the collection number.) Lavateraguy (talk) 21:51, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
"taking a typical variant from a wild population doesn't" This has happened many times and I do not know how one would be able to prevent someone from giving such plants a cultivar name. As long as the plants are propagated in a way that all the resulting plants grown in cultivation maintain the same charteristics it is a "good" cultivar.Hardyplants (talk) 04:16, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Lavateraguy @Hardyplants - the change from 'known' to 'named' was me, I just thought it read better like that; change it back if you think 'known' was better. But yes, there are plenty of named cultivars that wouldn't stand out as obvious in their wild species populations, like Abies procera 'Glauca' or Cupressus nootkatensis 'Pendula'. And of Chamaecyparis spp., "... three are very variable and have given rise to a ridiculous flood of selected seedlings and mutations, many of which are so similar to others as to be just not worth perpetuating. Unfortunately this flow still continues. Very great restraint should now be exercised in introducing fresh forms that will add more names to our listings but no more beauty to our gardens." [followed by a list of over 500 named cultivars of Ch. lawsoniana!] (Welch & Haddow 1993, The World Checklist of Conifers p.54 ISBN 0-900513-09-8). - MPF (talk) 23:13, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed. I think many cultivars are also vanity affairs. I am not that versed in what occurs with woody plant names, but with Hosta, Iris, and daylilies, a lot of plants are named, though there is no intention of introducing them into wide cultivation. Ideally, a cultivar should be distinctive and produced in enough quantities that its distribution is not confined to a limited location But, that is not what happens.Hardyplants (talk) 04:58, 4 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Lots of uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 03:50, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Am willing to try and fix concerns --Iztwoz (talk) 16:34, 25 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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The article is not concise, with almost 18,000 words of text. There is no post-2008 information. The citations rely upon the book that the article is about, instead of secondary sources. There are a couple of uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 03:45, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, the article ended up being very long. But I disagree with one assertion. The citations do include extensive quotations from the book. But everything, or nearly everything, is fully backed up by secondary sources. If in a couple of cases, that was overlooked, please point out those cases, and they could probably be fixed.--Alan W (talk) 03:59, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
For example, in Falstaff (Henry IV and The Merry Wives of Windsor), yes, all the quotations have numerous footnotes citing the primary source. But any assertions about the meaning of that source are backed up by citations of Bloom, Kinnaird, and Eastman.--Alan W (talk) 04:09, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
As for the size of the article, according to Wikipedia:Article size: "There are times when a long or very long article is unavoidable, though its complexity should be minimized. Readability is a key criterion: an article should have clear scope, be well organized, stay on topic, and have a good narrative flow." The article, in my opinion, does meet those criteria. --Alan W (talk) 04:14, 16 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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The article has a lot of unsourced statements and 2 active orange banners. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 23:53, 14 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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This article was promoted to GA status in 2007 and previously kept at GAR in 2008. Unfortunately, I do not think this article meets modern WP:GACR standards and will need significant amounts of work in order to retain its GA status.

  • There are large swathes of unsourced information. Examples of this are the last three paragraphs of the Mission section and nearly the entirety of the Workers and residents section. In my view, the article fails WP:GACR criterion 3a as a result.
  • Parts of the article may be excessively detailed to WP:COATRACK content. The article is already tagged as not being written in an encyclopedic style. As such, it fails WP:GACR criteria 1b and 4.
    • The Mission section is an example of this; half of the section isn't even about the settlement house itself.
    • While the Hull House neighborhood section is not as severely bloated, it also has a lot of minutiae. An example of this is the first paragraph, which gives three very detailed examples of women whom the association helped.
  • Conversely, although the article also talks about the Hull House building, there is very little detail about the actual architecture. There is also very little detail about the house's use as a museum after 1930. While I understand that there may not have been any major news about Hull House after 2012, this is not a matter of the article being out of date; it's that the article's history sections predominantly focus on pre-1930 history. The article thus fails WP:GACR criterion 3a.

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Whilst it past GA review in 2013, the article has not been updated to reflect organization history since 2014. There's a few uncited statements and number of staff is not verified. Also article says it's based in San Francisco, when this says Chicago. https://www.iabc.com/about/contact. Also although an organization, it would benefit for example with a photo of its activities or leaders to meet GA criterion 6. LibStar (talk) 05:26, 11 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I did some cleanup of spammy, trivial, and/or uncited content. It would be great to have some history covering the 2013-2025, but I didn't find anything we could cite for this at-a-glance. CorporateM (Talk) 00:27, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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2009 listing; has several unsourced paragraphs (including one whole section). The lead is also likely too long relative to the size of the article. charlotte 👸♥ 06:10, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure this is sufficient address. However, it is worth noting that the original promotion did have a reference for the first section - to The Washington Post. I generally do not edit in politics and do not wish to start now - I really would have little idea what I was doing beyond the basics - but I did observe that the one source that cited the section (which in itself could be a problem) had been removed. From reading one thing or another, I thought I heard rumblings that there were situations where the Post was unacceptable in articles regarding politics. Would this be such a case? If not, it might be better than nothing at all. mftp dan oops 16:02, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@MFTP Dan: If the Washington Post was the only reference for that section, and it has been removed, then I do not think this article would meet the GA criteria. I think for this to meet the criteria other sources would need to be found and referenced for that section. Z1720 (talk) 15:30, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
To be fair, I'm not sure the source being removed was the correct decision. Regardless, there should be more than one for an entire section in a GA. Either way with one source I'm doubtful it meets the criteria. mftp dan oops 16:42, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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This page has a decent bit of missing, fundamental information and poor sourcing. At the time of writing this, the page names sources from Amazon and J. W. Pepper (an online music retailer) instead of the actual publications. And while properly formatted citations are not required for a GA, this page is remarkably bad to the point that dates and authors are missing, simple bare links point to incorrect places, and shortened footnote templates are broken. There are a few statements that need sourcing in general.

In terms of missing information, the coverage of his music is poor, being a simple listing of his work. The section needs to cover how he composed, his compositional techniques, and his musical legacy. All of this is standard information in any of the dozen books covering him (which the page only uses two of). Another major facet missing is in-depth coverage of his bands. His career section is under 500 words. (Why is his hobby section longer?) The Sousa Band (his civilian ensemble) lasted nearly forty years and does not even receive a full paragraph in the article. I can point out some more specifics as needed (and I have access to several books), but this page needs a major overhaul, not just some light editing. Why? I Ask (talk) 06:49, 8 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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There are uncited statements in the article, including entire sections. I think this happened when articles were merged together after this article received its GA designation. Z1720 (talk) 15:39, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll go through it tomorrow, I believe I can add most/all of the refs- bcs Doctor Who Magaizne has a lot of info about the series. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 20:16, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I have started fixing the issues, and have added refs to a whole heading. The other citations might be slower in coming- the uncited statementsare the only issue, right? DWF91 (talk) 20:34, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There are uncited statements, including the entire "Filipinization of the university" section and several paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 15:29, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

thanks for reminding, will update in the coming days. I hope youll give me a sufficient time to overhaul the article. just a bit busy. KingTiger1611 (talk) 17:27, 9 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I've added some temporary references to that section; please read the edit summary. Queen Douglas DC-3 (talk) 15:49, 14 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There are lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. There is a "promotional tone" orange banner at the top of the "Sports" section: is this banner still valid? Z1720 (talk) 15:26, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

There doesn't seem to be any discussion here related to the 'promotional tone' banner, and the section seems to be a pretty straightforward description of the facilities. It looks like there was some puffery in there when the banner was added, but although this was removed the banner was left in place. I've now removed it.
Overall, though, this gives the impression of an article that hasn't been curated since it reached GA status. There are dated statements that were current in 2007 when it was listed, such as "There is also a plan to significantly redevelop the centre of the University Precinct in the coming years" (reference from 2007), the list of six faculties (also from 2007 – there are only three faculties now on the university webpage), the inclusion of Sutton 13 in affiliations (never an affiliation, and not used by the Sutton Trust since 2011), and the mention of an "Erasmus Charter" in the lead (the UK left the Erasmus scheme after Brexit, and participating in it wasn't particularly notable before that giving this the appearance of puffery). There is definite promotional content elsewhere, such as the statement in the "Admissions" section that "Competition for places is high with an average 7.7 applications per place according to the 2014 Sunday Times League Tables, making it the joint 11th most competitive university in the UK" – not only is this over a decade out of date, but this appears to be editorial use of number of applications as a proxy for competitiveness, falsely presenting Bristol admissions as more competitive than Oxford or Cambridge.
In summary, the article as it stands is quite a long way short of GA standard and it will take a lot of work to reach that standard. Robminchin (talk) 18:40, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Delist - as noted above, the list of faculties is outdated (the university's website suggests that among other changes science and engineering have been combined); with something that serious oudate and per Robminchin's comments above, I suspect there are deeper issues lurking here. 16:33, 8 March 2025 (UTC)

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This article has several uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 01:12, 6 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Delist no progress to address concerns. Z1720 (talk) 15:32, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delist, I guess. I'm not entirely sold on some of the CN tags - "partly to defend claims to the Caratal goldfield of the region's Yuruari basin, which was within Venezuelan territory but claimed by the British" was sourced at the time of the original promotion - has somebody actually determined this isn't in the source or is it a drive-by tag. But the unsourced aftermath content is post-promotion additions but seems relevant so I don't think outright removal of content is the answer. With nobody familiar with the subject stepping up to work on it, I reckon this will need to be delisted. Hog Farm talk 16:54, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Looks like it was rubber-stamped by an inexperienced reviewer. It seems good at a glance, but given that it documents a contentious, ongoing issue, I think a full review would be needed to verify that it is (or ever was) eligible for GA. — Anonymous 01:50, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry if I was bad at the review, it was my first time Personisinsterest (talk) 01:53, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Personisinsterest, no worries. I was similarly unfamiliar with the system at GA when I attempted my first review. Generally, there are at least a few issues that can be found in even the best looking articles, so it's helpful to look carefully for them, even if they aren't huge. For a topic as contentious as this, I'd say that goes double. — Anonymous 02:13, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

An anonymous username, not my real name - The first requirement for raising a GAR states, "your rationale must specify how you believe the article does not meet the good article criteria". I don't think that a vague sense of an article being "rubber-stamped by an inexperienced reviewer" meets that requirement. You've not given the nominator, or indeed the reviewer, anything to respond to. On my initial read through, I'm not seeing any of the criteria which aren't being met. KJP1 (talk) 09:19, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@KJP1, my intention was to treat this like a fresh GA review, with the goal of finding someone who would be interested in reviewing it in more detail. If you would like a more specific critique, I see no evidence that a spot check was ever done in the original review. — Anonymous 13:07, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Why, beyond your feeling the initial review was inadequate? That is itself inadequate. You need to set out your rationale for why you believe the criteria are not met. KJP1 (talk) 14:35, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@KJP1, I've read through the article more carefully, and I have the following specific concerns (in approximate order of significance):
  • The timeline of events does not go past July 2024. That means it's missing information on close to a third of the war.
  • The summary of destruction (which feels out of place at the start of the events section) is dated to January and February of last year. That means more than half of the war has since passed.
  • On various points about being up-to-date, the bulk of coverage dates from early 2024. Heritage for Peace's November 2023 report is still their most recent. Librarian's and Archivists with Palestine's February report is their most up-to-date (unless I've missed something). These maps from the BBC indicates that the greatest impact was early in the war. By Jan 2024, more than half of the buildings in the Gaza Strip were damaged and by Jan 2025 this had increased to "almost 60% of buildings across the Gaza Strip". It's not straightforward, but this indicates the majority of the damage was in the first few months and after that there were fewer undamaged cultural heritage sites remaining. ICOMOS looks to have some more recent publications which I'll look over. Richard Nevell (talk) 21:25, 9 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Follow up: The December 2024 UNOSAT assessment is that 69% of buildings in the Gaza Strip destroyed or damaged. Presumably this the the source the BBC piece referred to, and is closer to the recent statement in this BBC piece which says "About two-thirds of Gaza's buildings have been damaged or destroyed by Israel's attacks, the UN says". Richard Nevell (talk)
  • The international reactions section has a single sentence dated to this year but nothing else past early 2024. Seems like another case of not fully updated information.
  • The background section contains a lot of MOS:FLOWERY content about why cultural heritage is important and why destroying it is bad, but it doesn't really explain if/how Israel has negatively impacted such heritage before this war. The only part specifically mentioning Israeli violence in previous wars is The United Nations Fact Finding Mission on the Gaza Conflict into the Gaza War (2008–2009) concluded that the "disproportionate destruction and violence against civilians were part of a deliberate policy", but this isn't specifically about cultural sites, making it somewhat random and out of places.
  • Cultural heritage embodies the collective and history of the people, who live in the region. This lead sentence is grammatically incoherent plus MOS:PEACOCK.
  • Plenty of small prose tweaks I would make, but I think what I've outlined is sufficient to seriously call into question whether the article is close to GA criteria in its existing state.
Anonymous 17:07, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. For future reference, I’d suggest a careful read through before initiating a GAR. But you have now provided a rationale which others can engage with. KJP1 (talk) 17:24, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Right then, let's crack on. Though the steps to opening a reassessment seem to have got a little muddled, I'm firmly of the belief that having more editors involved in the article will improve its quality. Anonymous, I'll wait until you've finalised a list of comments before replying and implementing changes. Richard Nevell (talk) 19:18, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

In addition to what is already listed, I have some further commentary (again, in rough order of significance):
  • The events section follows an unclear organisation scheme. It opens with an overall (outdated) summary, then provides smaller summaries of specific forms of cultural destruction, then for about the second half is in chronological order. The logical style choice for an events section seems to be strictly chronological. Alternatively, perhaps a summary (an updated one) could be presented at the start, followed by a chronological "timeline" subsection.
  • @Anonymous: The 'events' section was meant to be broadly chronological, with some slightly thematic groupings within that, but as specific dates have been difficult to pin down due to the conflict as different approach is worth trying. To that end, I've reorganised the section into themes with an updated summary at the start. Richard Nevell (talk) 00:07, 18 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Richard Nevell, I think the restructuring looks good. I notice that the last image in this section is creating some whitespace in the desktop version of this page. Perhaps an image could be moved to the left. I also notice that the caption describes Israel's destruction as "demolition", which has more deliberate implications than what is said in the text. — Anonymous 23:24, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Anonymous: You're absolutely right, demolition is more intentional than the broader 'destroyed'. I think that demolition is in line with the source as Ynet describes it as 'toppled' and notes that the unit involved in the event was also involved in the flotilla raid that the monument commemorated. As such, I've adjusted the wording in the body of the article and left the caption as it is. I've shuffled the image up a bit, is it still creating white space? Richard Nevell (talk) 21:36, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    None that I can see now. — Anonymous 22:18, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Al Jazeera is cited several times. As I'm sure most editors are aware, its use as a source for Israel-Palestine conflict articles is controversial. I think it can be agreed that its claims should at least be attributed (which they are not currently).
  • Four Al Jazeera publications are used as references. They cover:
  • The article "A 'cultural genocide': Which of Gaza's heritage sites have been destroyed?" which is used to as a reference to support the statement that some have characterised the destruction as a cultural genocide, and to note the damage to Anthedon, the Ard-al-Moharbeen necropolis, and the Sayed al-Hashim Mosque. The damage to Anthedon and Ard-al-Moharbeen was also supported by other sources, and I have added an additional reference for the Sayed al-Hashim Mosque. The accusation of cultural genocide is controversial, but it is suggested by other sources as well, and there are additional references. Mentioning just Al Jazeera would be disproportionate without mentioning the others, and I'm not sure a list is necessary.
  • The airstrike on the Church of Saint Porphyrius. It is one of three sources (the others are Amnesty International and The Art Newspaper).
  • The destruction of the Israa University main building. This event was widely covered, and an additional reference to the NYT has been added.
  • Reports of IDF soldiers burning a Quran in a Gaza mosque.
  • Where additional sources are available, I don't think it is necessary to mention Al Jazeera in the article text. The one instance where I couldn't find an additional source was the report on the burning of the Quran (a previous incident in May had prompted an IDF investigation) so I have clarified that it was Al Jazeera who reported the incident. Richard Nevell (talk) 22:34, 11 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Middle East Eye is cited twice. It isn't listed at WP:RS/P, but it isn't exactly known for its neutrality (being possibly funded by Qatar). Its two uses are both backed by better sources anyway, so I think it could just be removed.
  • A source can have a political bias and still present factual information, and since other references confirm the information that does not appear to be an issue here. In which case what is to be gained from removing the references? Richard Nevell (talk) 20:40, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I suppose it's fine to keep, then. — Anonymous 22:32, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • There is no consistent usage of US/UK spelling. I see characterized (twice), neighbourhood, defence, defense, and digitise. I also see the expression "First World War", which, while not a spelling per se, is generally more associated with Commonwealth English. Rather shockingly, our article on the Gaza Strip also does not follow a consistent spelling scheme (I had checked in hope that there might be precedence for a particular one).
  • The article now consistently uses UK spelling simply because that's what I default to, but I don't have a strong opinion about which should be used. 'Defense' is used in the context of 'Israel Defense Forces' since that is the organisation's official name. Richard Nevell (talk) 20:17, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • The international response section could be expanded significantly. I have found the following sources, all of which specifically reference cultural destruction (while some are obviously non-neutral, they still represent the reactions of specific groups): [29], [30], [31], [32], [33], [34], [35], [36], [37], [38].
It looks beautiful now. The layout is clear and logical, in my opinion. One very small addition would be adding an ILL for the Iran Public Libraries Foundation ([39]). — Anonymous 23:20, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Good spot, I've added that link. Richard Nevell (talk) 21:36, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Speaking about cultural heritage broadly, the archaeologist Cornelius Holtorf remarked "If heritage is said to contribute to people's identities, the loss of heritage can contribute to people's identities even more." Blatant WP:SYNTH; no connection to Gaza or the Israel-Palestine conflict.
  • An investigation by CNN using satellite imagery identified sixteen cemeteries in Gaza that had been damaged as a result of the conflict. The Israel Defence Force used bulldozers to level cemeteries and dig up bodies. In some cases, the Israel Defense Forces (IDF) had set up fortified positions on top of burial grounds. I highly suspect that this chunk originally consisted of only the first and third sentences, with the second inserted later, as it does not link to the Israel Defense Forces (it also misnames it) or provide the abbreviation IDF, both of which are done in the next sentence (which also gets the name right). While technically supported by the source, the wording of the second sentence is needlessly shocking and without context.
  • I have merged sentences two and three as they are the ways in which the cemeteries were damaged – 'desecration' is the term used by the source and perhaps should be used here rather than 'damaged' which I what I used initially in the article. I do not agree that including the information is needlessly shocking, since the context is the sentence that immediately precedes the information. Richard Nevell (talk) 20:56, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • In 2025 the World Monuments Fund included Gaza' historic fabric in their list of 25 historic places under threat. Insufficient information and context here. It should be mentioned that this is the World Monument Fund's official biennial Watch List and that it is specifically Gaza's "historic urban fabric" under threat. (Also I somehow fully missed the obvious grammatical error until rereading my assessment.)

I also found a source discussing the connection between cultural destruction and "urbicide" ([40]) and another with very recent summaries of destruction post-ceasefire ([41]). Both seem valuable, particularly the second. Anyway, I would say that is essentially my complete assessment for the time being. — Anonymous 22:12, 6 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Anonymous: I've added the Euro-Med Monitor source to the article. Where do we stand with what remains to be done? Richard Nevell (talk) 22:58, 27 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for taking the time to read through the article, and for pointing to additional sources. Responses are likely to be on one issue at a time.
One thought at this stage is with the organisation of the 'Events' section chronological would be my first preference, but in some cases the date at which destruction happened is not documented. We may have a case of a report being made likely some weeks or months after the event. In some instances where the chronology has been unclear I have grouped similar sites, eg. libraries. This may not be the best way of going about it, so I'll reconsider the structure of that section. Richard Nevell (talk) 12:05, 8 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Background SYNTH/PEACCOCK/FLOWERY

@Anonymous: I think this falls within the typical remit of a background section: providing information to help the reader understand the topic. The challenge is in what constitutes sufficient context. I agree that Holtorf's statement was not about Gaza's heritage specifically, so I have moved it from the section 'Cultural heritage in Gaza to the following section, 'Destruction of cultural heritage'. I appreciate that is unlikely to address your core concern but the location of the content is significant.

The background section begins with an explanation of what cultural heritage includes. The source does not mention the 2023-25 war in Gaza as it was published in 2014 and does not mention Gaza, Palestine, or war. That should not be a problem because it provides useful context. The reader may have some understanding of cultural heritage, but we should not assume that and they may bring their own assumptions about what heritage is which could exclude some aspects.

Then follows a summary of some types of heritage in Gaza. The third paragraph links this to identity; this is not synthesis as multiple sources used elsewhere in the article make the link between heritage and identity.[42][43][44][45]

With the subsection on destruction, the why and legal framework are relevant and link to points later in the article. The Hague Convention is mentioned by UNESCO in the context of the conflict as obligations of state parties not to endanger heritage sites. Richard Nevell (talk) 22:59, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@An anonymous username, not my real name: The ping in my last post definitely failed, so here's this post. Richard Nevell (talk) 23:01, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, that seems fair. Were you able to find any information specifically mentioning Gaza's cultural heritage being harmed in previous wars? — Anonymous 23:11, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The 2008 and 2014 wars both led to damage to Gaza's cultural heritage (I'll look for additional/alternative sources). Moshe Dayan's removal of artefacts from Deir al-Balah in the 20th century has been described as looting, though I may focus on the recent past. Richard Nevell (talk) 23:48, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a brief note about previous conflicts. There is more that could be added, including the Second Intifada, but I think that's enough for now. Richard Nevell (talk) 19:38, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I think the article looks great now. While my original rationale for bringing it here might have been weak, I think it can be agreed that there were certainly some significant issues that have since been remedied. This discussion has remained relatively narrow, so I don't think closing it now would be especially controversial, but I'd first like to check if @KJP1: is still interested in spot checking sources as they previously indicated. — Anonymous 23:44, 27 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Very happy to do so. Will pick it up in the next 48 hours. KJP1 (talk) 05:48, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The article has definitely benefitted from a fresh look. Richard Nevell (talk) 19:29, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Spot check of sources

  • Source 1 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 2 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 3 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 4 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 5 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 6 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 7 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 8 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 9 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 10 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 11 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content. Not a point that requires any action, but this is more of a footnote than a reference. Personally, I like to separate them, but as this is the only one, I can see why it's not.
  • Source 12 - an offline book source so I can't check the content but the ISBN takes me to the right place on Worldcat.
  • Source 13 - this is a paywalled WP article. Would it benefit from the "Paid subscription required", {url-access=subscription} icon?
  • Source 14 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 15 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content. I see this also appears under Further reading, but in Arabic. I'm assuming that accounts for the double listing?
  • Source 17 - the original is now giving me a 404 error, but the archived copy is fine. Corrected a typo in the title.
  • Source 23 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 30 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content. For some reason the preceding bluelink, Casualties of the Gaza war, won't give me a preview when I hover over it. Can't work out why.
  • Source 38 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 44 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 57 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 60 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, video (which plays fine) supports content.
  • Source 68 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 77 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 88 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 93 - another offline book source so I can't check the content but the ISBN takes me to the right place on Worldcat.
  • Source 99 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content. I had to download the full document to get to the content as the link only takes me to the abstract. I don't know whether the PDF can be directly linked?
  • Source 102 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 119 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.
  • Source 124 - accurately cited, no copyright issues, supports content.

I checked this [46] version, looking at 30 sources, just under 25% of the total. A few minor issues noted above but everything checks out in terms of accuracy. Let me know if there's anything further needed from me. It's a great article, depressing though the subject matter is. KJP1 (talk) 05:15, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for checking through.
Source 13 - I think it's worth indicating that a subscription is required, so I've added that in
Source 15 - My initial thinking was that linking to the Arabic version of the report in further reading made it more accessible, but with more items now in that section I'm unsure it's needed.
Source 99 - I've now linked directly to the PDF. Richard Nevell (talk) 19:27, 2 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Unreliable sources, sources used in wrong sections, and lots of unsourced statements. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 06:52, 4 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Keep: I was told that MOS:PLOT doesn't apply however since it is not the main subject of the article. So, I've added sources to that section (and the unreliable source was already removed). However, the "sources used in wrong sections" part sounds questionable to me since...well, why can't it be used in other sections? ~ Tails Wx 12:35, 4 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delist for now. There are still sources being used in the wrong places. For example, Apple Music should not be used to assign a genre for the song. Shoot for the Stars (talk) 08:45, 17 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: Taking a quick skim through the article, I am surprised at how little detail there is about the Background of the song's creation. There's also not much information about the song's composition (other than its lyrics). Are there sources that describe this information? Z1720 (talk) 14:28, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 19:28, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Malvoliox - you addressed some of the sourcing issues back in February - do you have any further thoughts on this? There is still some uncited content, including most of the table of highest attendance per seasons. Hog Farm talk 04:38, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited paragraphs, some of which have been tagged with "citation needed" since September 2020. Z1720 (talk) 19:24, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: Thanks, I was actually taking a look at this earlier before you nominated for GAR. I think it's unlikely that we are going to find the exact references used for many of these statements, for example:

The search and rescue (SAR) operation was code-named Operation Persistence and was launched immediately by Joint Rescue Coordination Centre Halifax (JRCC Halifax), which tasked the Air Command, Maritime Command and Land Force Command of the Canadian Forces (CF), Canadian Coast Guard (CCG) and Canadian Coast Guard Auxiliary (CCGA) resources.

I can find quite a few sources for Operation Persistence, but they each reference different agencies, some of which aren't even listed above. I think some re-wording and copy-writing is appropriate for cases like these. FozzieHey (talk) 22:13, 3 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Z1720: I've managed to cite Swissair Flight 111 § Safety recommendations and a sentence of Swissair Flight 111 § Search and recovery operation. I've managed to find a few other sources for the "Post-crash response" that I'll add to later. Aviationwikiflight (talk) 08:59, 4 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Aviationwikiflight: The aircraft details are excessive, tending towards WP:CRUFT, in my opinion. Here is the key paragraph, with my suggested edits.

The aircraft involved was a seven-year-old McDonnell Douglas MD-11, with serial number 48448, and registered as HB-IWF. It was manufactured by McDonnell Douglas in 1991,[3]: 21  and Swissair was its only operator. It bore the title of Vaud, in honor of the Swiss canton of the same name. Until 1992, the aircraft bore the title Schaffhausen, after the canton of Schaffhausen and the town of the same name.

  1. Serial number; as I have recently explained on my Talk page, the link to registration takes you specifically to a full article on aircraft registrations. In contrast, the link to serial number takes you to bank notes, firearms, smartphones, and military aircraft serials, none of which apply to this Swissair MD-11. WP:AIRMOS, and specifically WP:REGISTRATION make it clear that the preference is for the registration wherever possible, not both forms of identification.
  2. Name; it barely matters that this aircraft was named Vaud; it certainly does not matter that it bore a different name before that. These aircraft fleet names are mere decoration, and not in the same league as "The Spirit of St Louis" or "Enola Gay".
  3. Age; I am sure that the remaining words could be straightened out to bring seven-years-old and 1991 together in a concise manner, but that is just fine-tuning.

Hope this helps. WendlingCrusader (talk) 13:05, 11 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the name of the aircraft, whilst I agree it is not the most relevant addition to the article, the name Vaud is included in the infobox. I've shortened the original phrase from It bore the title of Vaud, in honor of the Swiss canton of the same name to It bore the title of Vaud.[5] (previously uncited). If not, I've addressed your points. The section now reads as:

The aircraft involved, manufactured in 1991, was a seven-year-old McDonnell Douglas MD-11 and registered as HB-IWF. The aircraft was powered by three Pratt & Whitney PW4462 turbofan engines and the aircraft had logged 36,041 airframe hours before the accident. It bore the title of Vaud. The cabin was configured with 241 passenger seats. First and business class seats were equipped with in-seat in-flight entertainment (IFE) systems from Interactive Flight Technologies. [...]

Aviationwikiflight (talk) 15:25, 11 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Most excellent! (And yes, I reluctantly accept that Wikipedia quotes these fleet names in every case, but I'm not sure that was the original intention when the Infobox fields were set up; however it's way too late to argue that point) WendlingCrusader (talk) 20:35, 11 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@FozzieHey, Aviationwikiflight, and WendlingCrusader: It looks like the entire article is now cited – are there any objections to closing this as keep? If anyone is looking to improve this further and needs access to Swiss sources, let me know and I'll get them for you. Toadspike [Talk] 08:56, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies, but I have just noticed that three time zones are referenced, two of them very similar in presentation, hence easily confused. As with most/all air crashes, UTC is provided as a datum. After that, we come to the real problem.
  1. Firstly we have 20:18 EDT (00:18 UTC), local time at JFK at take-off.
  2. The main text refers to ADT, which is a variation of AST, neither of which are particularly well-known. Indeed, the United States National Hurricane Center's official advisories typically report AST and UTC when tracking storms in the Caribbean that threaten the U.S., but acknowledge that this may confuse the mainland public not familiar with the time zone designation.
Meanwhile the article on the Atlantic Time Zone states that various Canadian provinces have differing legal or official positions, but generally observe AST in practice, so there is that to consider.
I came across a similar problem with a recent event, Azerbaijan Airlines Flight 8243, which took off in one time-zone, was (allegedly) hit my a missile in a second time zone, but then flew on to crash land in a third time zone. That was a bit of a nightmare too! In that case, once the edit-warring had settled down, in addition to the abbreviations AZT, MSK and AQTT, the names of each of the time zones were added in full, together with a separate table that listed everything together under one specific time zone.
The guidance on time zones MOS:TIMEZONE mentions the Japanese attack on Pearl Harbor as another classic example, with events encompassing the exact timing of the declaration of war (in Washington D.C.) versus the actual timing of the events in Hawaii. Perhaps you should consider how that article deals with the differences, in terms of the events in Washington being ranked incidental to the main action in Hawaii.
In this respect, I would identify the timing of the take off in New York as 20:18 (New York local time), linking it to EDT but avoiding using that specific acronym because of its similarity to ADT. The addition of UTC provides the necessary continuity.
(further apologies for rambling on at length)
WendlingCrusader (talk) 15:09, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think if we clarify what each time zone is relative to UTC (UTC-4 and UTC-3) we can expect the readers to do some of the math in their heads, rather than listing everything in two or three time zones. Only the first use and most important points need side-by-side conversions. In this article, that means nearly everything should be ADT alone, and after the first ADT time we don't need to put the letters "ADT" after each time. Toadspike [Talk] 21:41, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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The article might be well written. However, there are visible issues such as unsourced sentences. Additionally, ref 41 is unnecessary, and it should be cited as Behind the Voice Actors instead of bundling it with primary sources; ref 42's website does not show anything and should probably be removed or replaced. The quotes in the citations are mostly irrelevant, especially when the sources are cited in the reception section, like for example. ref 86. Lastly, most of the sources at reception were from game reviews. It wouldn't hurt to expand some necessary sources on the article's talkpage, particularly these [47] [48] per GA's criteria "Broad in its coverage". 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 02:32, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Just got a start on making those adjustments. Hoping to get more done soon, namely when I get a retool of the Appearances section figured out. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 03:41, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Uncited information in the article, including several very large paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 02:33, 1 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Could you please point to which exact portions need to be sourced? There was some uncited content added to the analysis section back in 2020, which seems to be the only major (uncited) additions to the article since the GA promotion. Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:39, 1 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Drovethrughosts: I have added citation needed tags. Some of the information in the Background section is in-universe, which might be better placed in the "Plot" section. Z1720 (talk) 03:16, 2 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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This article has several uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Unresolved citation needed tags have been present since September 2024. Z1720 (talk) 18:00, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Going to close this as I don't think the issues have been addressed. NoobThreePointOh (talk) 21:46, 19 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Would it be possible to leave this GAR open for a bit longer? I'm currently trying to address the issues brought up as they seem fixable. Aviationwikiflight (talk) 16:11, 23 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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The article contains uncited statements, some tagged with "citation needed" since 2023. Z1720 (talk) 23:29, 23 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This looks like an easy "save". There are a lot of citations. One area that is weak is isotopes, may be @Double sharp or @Nucleus hydro elemon knows sources?
I Looked in to the two citation needed and simply deleted the sentences as unsourced and not notable. Johnjbarton (talk) 02:09, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Johnjbarton: I added cn tags to the places where I think citations are needed. Z1720 (talk) 02:20, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • ...beryllium is, uniquely among all stable elements with an even atomic number, a monoisotopic and mononuclidic element. I'm not sure is CIAAW enough to cite this. It verifies that beryllium is the only monoisotopic element with an even atomic number, but not the only mononuclidic element with an even atomic number. If we list all 21 mononuclidic elements, we can see that beryllium is the only one with an even atomic number, but I'm not sure is that allowed.
  • The shortest-lived known isotope of beryllium is 16Be, which decays through neutron emission with a half-life of 6.5×10−22 s. Is it notable? Even it is, as the half-lives of 15Be and 16Be are 790±270 ys and 650±130 ys, there should be a footnote as in the article technetium to explain why the shortest-lived known isotope cannot be determined based on existing data. It is quite a trouble to me.
  • No beryllium silicide has been identified. I can't verify this. Perhaps it appears somewhere else where I missed, or it adds another [citation needed] into the article.
  • Although Wöhler first used to term "beryllium" in 1828, it is not the first word derived from beryl. The names "beryllina", "beryllerde", "berylline" (all from doi:10.1007/s10698-022-09448-5) were used before "beryllium", and perhaps should be mentioned in the article.
Nucleus hydro elemon (talk) 12:38, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I have some answers (?) to the first and third bullet points.
Reconrabbit 16:52, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There is an Etymology section where I moved come content about "beryllina". Johnjbarton (talk) 04:22, 26 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
There are still 3 "citation needed" tags on this article. They are somewhat hard to find references for:
  • It thus has very high ionization potentials and strong polarization while bonded to other atoms, which is why all of its compounds are covalent. This seems hard to prove - there are no ionic beryllium compounds? What about the fluoroberyllates? It may be better to just find a reference for Beryllium's chemical behavior is largely a result of its small atomic and ionic radii..
  • the attached carbon still bears a negative dipole moment. May be supported by the reference immediately preceding it, but I can't access the work.
  • Naturally occurring beryllium, save for slight contamination by the cosmogenic radioisotopes, is isotopically pure beryllium-9 [...] May be in Chemistry of the Elements or another reference work. Ullmann's Encyclopedia of Industrial Chemistry only touches on its nuclear properties briefly.
Reconrabbit 21:21, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed two of those. Johnjbarton (talk) 22:54, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: Some citation needed tags still remain. Z1720 (talk) 16:33, 1 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    When I looked at the article just now, I found two citation needed tags remained. I added a few sources that should address these specific issues, and one elsewhere (the new Handbook of the Chemical Elements from Springer is a nice reference work, but didn't have much regarding nuclear properties), but the claims seemed at least in one case exaggerated (and in one case definitely based on a preprint, though it's been published by now). Thanks to everyone else working on this and it's appreciated if you could take a look at these additions and see if they're appropriate - I could just be missing something in regards to the nuclear cross section sizes, which is why I didn't go as far as to include numbers, since they appear to change with every publication and there wasn't an obvious recent source I found. Reconrabbit 17:52, 5 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Article does not contain post-2015 information on the subject, and thus does not fulfil WP:GA? 3a in covering all major aspects of the biography. Z1720 (talk) 16:54, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720, what major aspects of the biography are missing that are covered in reliable, secondary sources? Also the article is updated through 2016, not 2015. There is not a lot of post-2016 activity so that will take little time to improve. czar 17:02, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Okay we're up to date with recent exhibitions. Let me know if there's anything more you were expecting. czar 18:42, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Czar: Thanks for doing this. I will also search for sources later, but I will be limited because I do not speak Portuguese. I think the article's formatting can be a little better: the "Early life" is quite short, then there's a long "Career" section, then a short "Personal life" section. Perhaps the "Career" section could be split up with level 3 headings, or some information from Careers can be moved to other sections (maybe change the first heading to "Early life and early career"?). I am also open to other suggestions. I also think the lead is quite short: with the added information, can the lead be expanded a little bit? Z1720 (talk) 21:40, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Expanded the lede, though I think it covered the basics of the article. Fixed the headings, which were changed in a drive-by edit today. czar 02:55, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Z1720, any further gaps or action needed? czar 03:28, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Czar: I removed too much detail of the artist's exhibitions and reception of these as too much detail. If the exhibitions are notable (which I think some are) they can be moved to those articles when created. I think the article is missing critical commentary of Chagas's artistic style or consistent themes in his work: this is different from critical commentary on an exhibition, which only talks about the themes of one work which might not carry over into others. This will add an extra section or two after the biography. Z1720 (talk) 13:55, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    If the Reception is specifically related to his portion of a group show, why would it be off-topic? It's commentary on his career.
    I've included all sources I've found that cover his work. Not all living artists have retrospective assessments of themes across their work. czar 14:13, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    @Czar: I think a general statement about an exhibit's reception is not off-topic, but several comments about the exhibition with quotes is a bit excessive. Totally understand about the retrospective: when I've written about choreographers, sometimes a source about a specific work will say something like "in their typical artistic style, the choreographer added such-and-such theme to the piece". This would be a statement that could be cited in their artistic style, as the source has identified something specific as being part of the artist's overall work, even though it is in the context of comparing a specific piece to their overall work. I'm happy to take a look at some sources if the potential for that information might be in there. Z1720 (talk) 16:30, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Dug up a German-language interview and added a summative statement on his style (though it's not so different from what was already there and in the lede). Feel free to take a look for sources if you see anything major missing. czar 12:31, 27 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    Hi. I approve of Z1720's removal of so much detail on reception of exhibitions. However, regarding Z1720's comment that "If the exhibitions are notable (which I think some are) they can be moved to those articles when created", we're very unlikely to create articles on individual exhibitions. -Lopifalko (talk) 07:08, 21 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: checking back—any further comments? czar 13:44, 7 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • @Czar: Not sure if my comment about finding information about their artistic style in reviews was addressed: I would expect an article about an artist to have a section that describes their artistic style. Z1720 (talk) 01:29, 13 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, I believe the article and the review does not meet the quality standards outlined in WP:GAN/I and should be reassessed.

Here are some points I think need fixing. Sorry in advance if this ends up being too long.

1. Plot/Arrowverse sections

I don't think the plot section follows the guidelines (MOS:FILMPLOT).

It's almost 700 words, and some parts are too detailed, with "scene-by-scene breakdowns." It also talks about the characters' actions and events in a way that feels more like telling a story than giving a summary.

For the Arrowverse, I don't think it needs its own section. It could be mentioned in the opening paragraph of the plot summary that the movie is set on Earth-12, and then a note could be added maybe something like "Billions of years ago, on Earth-12 the Guardians of the Universe used the green essence of willpower to create an intergalactic police force called the Green Lantern Corps." [a]

  1. ^ The Arrowverse crossover event "Crisis on Infinite Earths" establishes that the 2011 film version of Green Lantern takes place on the world of Earth-12.

2. Music section

  • It's not that significant on its own; it should be a subsection under the production section. (MOS:FILMMUSIC)
    • Done by Lililolol.

3. Release section

  • I think the "Marketing" subsection should be the main section. Under it, the "Theatrical" and "Home Media" subsections should be merged into a single subsection titled "Release".
  • The other subsections, Animation, Comics, Roller Coaster, and Video Game, should be placed under their own section titled "Related Media." This makes more sense imo.
  • The Roller Coaster subsection has an unsourced paragraph. Either add sources or remove it.

4. Reception section

  • The Box Office subsection has an unsourced paragraph.
  • Many industry analysts felt that Green Lantern failed to perform to expectations. This should be expanded to include who made this statement, when it was said, and the reasons behind it.
  • Some publications listed the losses for the studio as high as $75 million could be better worded idk.
  • In the Critical Response section, more reviews should be added (check Rotten Tomatoes for missing reviews). Also, following WP:RECEPTION. Yes, it's not a guideline, but I'm sure it will improve the quality.
  • For Accolades, add another table for refs, also the Reelz Channel ref is broken.

5. Future/In popular culture sections

  • Maybe it's just me, but I think it could flow better similar to the "Cancelled DC Extended Universe Reboot" subsection. The other subsections might work better if they followed the same tone.
  • "Future" section could be re-titled to "Follow-up" or "Cancelled Projects." Idk, it just makes more sense than calling it "Future."

6. References

7. Infobox

8. Lead section

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Lililolol (talk • contribs) 03:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Lililolol, can you not relocate references, fix CS1 errors, rename headers, merge sections, or remove unnecessary detail? Even if you can't add citations, you can do the other stuff, right? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:04, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @AirshipJungleman29 I can, but I am not interested enough to do so :) Lililolol (talk) 17:56, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Interested enough to start a GAR, and list out a series of easily-fixable things, but not interested enough to actually improve an encyclopedia article Lililolol? Alright then. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 18:44, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@AirshipJungleman29 i know its weried lol Lililolol (talk) 19:23, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Lililolol It's your choice. But personally I think if you have the dedication to point out all these flaws, you can fix atleast some of them (Be Bold). Not doing so feels a bit rude in my eyes. All Tomorrows No Yesterdays (talk) 09:36, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Well I changed my mind. I personally think that a lot of editors refuse editing for practical reasons, whether it be lack of expertise, or just lack of interest. I think that's find reflecting back. I personally never really liked to copyedit. All Tomorrows No Yesterdays (talk) 09:58, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@All Tomorrows No Yesterdays No im not trying to be rude, sorry if I sound like that!. Omg really sorry, tho, I did the merging a while back :) Lililolol (talk) 18:55, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I won't have the time until at least the middle of next week, but I can try and work on this. Sgubaldo (talk) 15:58, 8 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Slow progress, but have started. Sgubaldo (talk) 01:51, 16 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Some more done. Trudging along when I have the time and will. Sgubaldo (talk) 00:14, 22 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Have very little time for WP this week and this isn't a particularly exciting article. Popping this message in to say I'll continue after this weekend. Sgubaldo (talk) 18:09, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There are some uncited statements in the article, including entire sections. The lead does not summarise all major aspects of the article. Z1720 (talk) 23:28, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article came about after being excised from the (large) parent article. Been ages since I looked at it - will do so at some point this week. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 00:51, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Casliber do you still intend to work on this article? No worries if not. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:17, 13 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. A few bits and pieces (citing or removing the Cambodia section, also pondering about what to do with the Folktales section at bottom) and rejigging the lead Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 11:09, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Casliber, follow up poke, just checking you're still interested. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:35, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yes. Will do over weekend. I have commented out unreferenced section as I suspect it will require more snooping than I am prepared to do currently - I'll make a note on the talk page for later. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:20, 31 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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There is lots of uncited text in the article, including entire paragraphs. A large part of the article is a list of what is in their collections, which I think can be spun out and some highlights written in a couple paragraphs of prose. Z1720 (talk) 22:45, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unless absolutely necessary for length reasons, I'd certainly disagree with spinning off the collection highlights, which are surely the main interest of the article. What's the readable prose length? Gutting an article like that is by itself an argument for removing GA status. Otherwise it's just a very big library with mostly the same printed books as other very big libraries. It's in the nature of the BL that "a couple paragraphs of prose" (sic) is nowhere near enough, and that short coverage would badly unbalance the article. You are completely ignoring the strong rejection of this suggestion in October (article talk) and just ploughing on with your personal view regardless, despite no one else supporting it. Why are you not showing the early part of the GA review, with all this? Johnbod (talk) 22:54, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Johnbod: I think the "Periodicals and philatelic collections" section does an excellent job showcasing how the library's collection can be written as prose, instead of as a list. Discussion did take place on the article's talk page after I brought up my concerns there. My review in the introductions of this GAR concerns my issues with today's article version: the list of collections is included in my concerns and can be addressed by other editors below. Uncited text throughout the article would also have to be resolved before I recommend this article "keep" its GA status. Z1720 (talk) 23:36, 26 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, "Discussion did take place on the article's talk page after I brought up my concerns there", at Talk:British_Library#GA_concerns. Two editors (I was one) stated their disagreement with you on the point of splitting-off the list; that was it. Johnbod (talk) 01:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps a different problem, but I'm not a fan of the organisation here: loads of L2 headers, no real hierarchy or sense of coherency. For instance, we have an L2 header for the recent cyberattack (incidentally, the info here is now out of date, as things are back up and running), which is preceded by a few other sections that could loosely be termed "history"... except that we've then got "Using the library's reading rooms" slapped into the middle. The uncited text is a bigger problem, but I wouldn't pass this under 1b at the moment even if everything were cited. UndercoverClassicist T·C 18:42, 27 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I nearly fell off my chair when I saw UC's comment "I'm not a fan of the organisation" until I realised this referred to the text of the article rather than to the BL itself. The organisation of the text doesn't greatly bother me at GA level, but having thirteen "citation needed" tags – all of them justified – decidedly does. I'm uneasy about the "Highlights of the collection" section, too. I'm with Johnbod rather than Z1720 on the continued presence of the list, but it contains well over 300 statements, fewer than 60 of which have their own citations. If the vague phrase at the head of the list "Highlights, some of which were selected by the British Library, include ..." purportedly covers all the others (and I doubt it) this needs to be explicit in every case. It would, in my view, take an enormous, not to say unreasonable, amount of effort to bring the citations in this article up to scratch. If anyone is willing to undertake that I take my hat off to him/her, but as things stand I think there is a strong prima facie case for removing the GA status. – Tim riley talk 09:21, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Afterthought: I see the editor who promoted the article to GA in 2011 was me, but it was then only 2,217 words long and adequately cited. It has since grown to more than 12,000 words including the lists and that's where the lack of citations has crept in. Tim riley talk 09:29, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Work is being done on the text citations, by SchroCat and others. The majority of the manuscript "highlights" have their own articles, & I'm dubious about the necessity of doing the tedious work of bringing over the links there to the list. The list could be somewhat reduced, in the case of MS perhaps to only those with articles. Johnbod (talk) 16:35, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for that Johnbod. I'll suspend judgement until SchroCat has finished his work on the text. Tim riley talk 17:38, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for rearranging, UC. That makes a lot more sense now.
    The whole Highlights section is a barrel of OR, based on what people think looks interesting. There is no supporting citations that say each of the pieces is a highlight (there’s a citation at the start of the list (ref 106) to a BL page that lists just fifteen pieces, which is considerably less than the extensive lists. - SchroCat (talk) 19:41, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"Here are just 15 of our treasures, chosen to show the range of our unique collections...." I don't think this claims to show anything like all highlights, but concentrates on diversity. No doubt they have produced many such lists at times, for different purposes. Several of these ones are not in our list - at least two are printed books. Johnbod (talk) 20:07, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Personally, I'd be in favour of spinning out an article on Collections of the British Library (especially as some sub-collections already seem to have their own article) and using that as a means to drastically reduce the volume of this parent article, but I'm not sure that would be a make-or-break matter for me as far as retaining GA status is concerned. UndercoverClassicist T·C 20:39, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If the list is going to stay, it would probably need a whole bunch of citations. I think it would be easier and more beneficial for this article to follow UC's suggestion above to spin out this section of the article. Z1720 (talk) 23:43, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
So you keep saying. I repeat, I don't think it can be GA if that is done. Is it in fact necessary "to drastically reduce the volume of this parent article"? Yes, several parts of the collection have their own articles, mainly those that arrived from previously-existing collections. I don't really see how that affects the list in this article. Unless you know that something is in the rather haphazard group called Royal manuscripts, British Library, you won't be able to find it. I accept "highlights" may not be the right word. Johnbod (talk) 00:44, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think a 'Collections' page would certainly be beneficial (after all, we have dedicated pages for things like the Philatelic Collections and the Cotton library, so why not) The Collections section on this page would then be whittled down to something more manageable and useful - and something that can be properly sourced, rather than the OR collection of 'Things that look interesting from a long time ago', which is what makes up the list at the moment. Trying to wade through the Maps, music, manuscripts and literature section is like being mugged by a gang of particularly aggressive blue links. - SchroCat (talk) 08:32, 28 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Missing citations

I've covered most of the citation needed tags, but there are four left. There's no info on the BL website (it's still a skeleton version because of the hacking problem), and the archive site isn't clear on these points. Some of the connections may not be valid any more and I've taken out some bits which are definitely out of date, but I've left those four in place as I can't confirm or deny if the BL is still actively involved. (TRILT, for example, has been renamed and the new website (https://learningonscreen.ac.uk/) makes no reference to the BL, nor does anyone from the BL sit on the executive committee, but I can't find anything that says the BL was previously connected, but no longer is). I suspect (pure guesswork) that some of the services may be suspended—or at least access to the services is suspended—while the IT problems are being sorted, but the skeleton site doesn't make it clear what's happening. - SchroCat (talk) 12:11, 29 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Some of these may help:
  • I found this chapter (preprint of the text here) which goes into some detail on the BL's web archiving system, and makes the comparison with the BNF (though doesn't explicitly say that the process is based on that of the BNF): some perhaps-useful posts from the BL blog here, here (with outlinks to reports from UK papers) and here, the last of which confirms that the process was ongoing into mid 2023.
  • On radio archiving, we have this BL blog. I know blogs aren't generally good sources, but here I think we have an exception to report the barest facts of what an institution announced it was doing. This BBC page suggests that Redux was practically dead by 2022.
  • There's some material in this report for JISC about the BL's role in archiving/allowing access to BBC materials. Again, not the world's best source, but the author is an academic and the company seems like a reputable enough quasi-academic institution.
  • This thesis talks a lot about BBC archiving, but doesn't mention the BL except at arm's length (e.g. specific senior people from the BL being involved in discussions). It does have a 2008 web page on the history of BBC redux in the biblio, but frustratingly the link is dead and not available on Internet Archive.
  • The section we currently have on the BL's digital resources is cribbed largely from this BL blog post from 2012. It says that the BL collaborated with the BBC on BBC Pilot, and recorded the stuff on Broadcast News, but doesn't take any credit for TRILT. In fact, looking at what's written there, it sounds much more like the BL simply bought a licence to use TRILT (like many schools do), which I wouldn't say is really notable (they probably have a JSTOR subscription as well, but we don't need to mention that in their article).
UndercoverClassicist T·C 09:34, 1 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Declarations

  • Delist While there have been improvements on Dec 28 and 29, works seems to have stalled since then. An editor has not indicated that they are willing to address the issues in "Highlights of the collections", either by providing citations or spinning out the article. Z1720 (talk) 16:34, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    My impression is that SchroCat has "volunteered" to take a look at it, but was trying to establish whether consensus existed here to do so? Again, my impression is that it has been established, so it would be good to hear from Schro whether he's willing/able to move forward. As before, I'm happy to help out with some axe-work. UndercoverClassicist T·C 16:38, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
  • If SchroCat or any other editor indicates below that they are willing to conduct this work, I am happy to strike my declaration above. If we are unsure of the consensus on what to do with the Collections section, perhaps we should ping the GA coordinators to if there is consensus (and if so, what action is there consensus for) or if more discussion is needed. Z1720 (talk) 16:50, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
This seems rather impatient, especially over the holiday period. I presume that your grandly-titled "declaration" has no more weight than that of any other editor. As I've said above, if the "highlights" was too much reduced, that would lead me to "declare" for a delist. I don't think that citations for items with linked articles are essential, and given the BL's well known difficulties with the website, more time should be allowed. Johnbod (talk) 17:32, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think that citations for items with linked articles are essential: under WP:GACR, they are: criterion 2b has All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). No exception is made for content cited in a different article. UndercoverClassicist T·C 09:23, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Striking the delist: conversation has restarted concerning improvements. Z1720 (talk) 16:15, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I think there may be a consensus, but as I've !voted, I wouldn't feel comfortable calling it. Maybe to get more eyes/comments on the point, a neutrally worded comment could be left on a few projects or a centralised venue (I really don't think we need to go down the route of a full-blown RfC, but Johnbod is right in saying that a bit more time, given Christmas and the BL's website problems, wouldn't go amiss).
I think we could strike a balance in getting some of the more notable pieces sourced to publications (such as this), the BL's archived site etc, while reducing the ridiculously long lists to something more manageable. The 'Collections' Clarification: 'Highlights of the collection' section is over 7,800 words at the moment - about 88,425 bytes (without images!) - which makes it larger than 4874 of our 6072 featured articles - that's way too long for an unsourced section. We reduce individual BL collections down to a paragraph or two while having separate articles about them, so there is (in my not very humble opinion) no reason we can't do the same sort of thing here - but it has to strike the right balance between slimming down some of the 'less treasured' pieces, and still showing a good selection of what is there. Let's get more people involved to get a firmer consensus, though, as a first step. - SchroCat (talk) 19:18, 11 January 2025 (UTC) Clarification on the section name added. SchroCat (talk) 16:41, 12 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I also feel like there is a consensus, but I'm also involved. @GAR coordinators: Can one of you determine if there is consensus to take an action for the "Collection" section, and if so what that consensus is? Z1720 (talk) 22:15, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Commenting purely on the "Collections", I think the actual "Collections" section is a good length and appropriate for the article, but that the "Highlights of the collection" section is overly long. I think that section would be better served as being its article, linked in the "Collections" section; I have no opposition to buffing out the "collections" section to better summarize some of the content being moved, but I think the current giant list itself is unwieldy in a non-list article, and should be moved to its own list article. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:24, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

In my reading of the above, it seems like there is a consensus to spin out "Highlights of the collection" and have prose that summarises that information. Is anyone interested in conducting this spin out? Z1720 (talk) 01:02, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Delist Work on the article has stalled. It has been two weeks since the last comment in this GAR, and over two weeks since the last edit to the article. It looks like no one is interested in conducting the WP:SPINOUT (that I see consensus for above) to fulfil the concise requirement listed in WP:GA? 1a. If the information was to stay in the article, the necessary citations have not been added. Unless someone is willing to get started with these edits, I think it is time to conclude this GAR. Z1720 (talk) 14:30, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
    It has stalled because I'm not seeing any closure on the discussion about the collections. I'd rather there was a more formal close than one of the involved parties deciding to act in the same way as they !voted. There is no rush on closing this process and it's doesn't need to be done to a timetable. - SchroCat (talk) 14:37, 30 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I have spun off the "highlights" list into a separate page. There remains the matters of how it should be summarised, the remaining uncited material, and whether the 3,700-word article is sufficiently "broad in coverage" for one of the world's largest libraries. @Z1720, SchroCat, Iazyges, UndercoverClassicist, Tim riley, and Johnbod: anyone interested in attending to these issues? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:24, 6 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

It's probably a little on the short side, but not too far off the Library of Congress, and the long, nearly unreadable list of items was more of a distraction than a benefit. We need to work some of those details back in, but only in a limited and controlled manner. At least with the main list gone, it focuses attention on what remains. - SchroCat (talk) 13:45, 6 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for doing this AJ29. I agree with SchroCat that some of the details should come back into the article, but hopefully as prose and not a giant list. Items that are frequently highlighted in reliable sources are probably the best items to consider adding back into the article first. I also think some items in the collection can be described in the "Exhibitions" section: that section is quite small and might be due for an expansion (although I do not know how much of the British Library's collection is exhibited, and do not live in Britain to find out for myself.) Z1720 (talk) 14:05, 6 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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