Talk:Drive (SZA song)

GA review

Passed. Arconning (talk) 14:07, 25 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: PSA (talk · contribs) 14:14, 3 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 06:10, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Love your articles, gotta pick up another GAN. :) Arconning (talk) 06:10, 21 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@PSA Short comments as well, nice article. :) Arconning (talk) 08:12, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Arconning hello, and thank you for your generous compliments. I appreciate your suggestions as well and have responded to each one Elias 🦗🐜 [Chat, they chattin', they chat] 13:04, 23 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Prose and MoS

Lead and infobox

  • No issues here.

Background

  • No issues here.

Music and lyrics

  • I feel like "her ex-boyfriends still want her back." would be a bit informal, could this be worded more formally?
    • Rewritten

Release

  • Are there mentions of previous release dates that could be included?
    • No
  • Second mention of Mackenzie Cummings-Grady should probably just use his last name.
    • You're right

Music video and the rest

  • "Throughout the video, the character drives an SUV on an empty road at night, lip syncing the lyrics", possibly expand more than just "character", possibly "his character?" then specify that he was lip syncing to the song itself.
    • Done both
  • Where are the credits sourced from? This could probably be sourced to the liner notes, if there are any.
    • Lana physicals don't ship until spring so I've added a source to Tidal in the meantime

Media

  • Cover is on a fair use license and is relevant to the article. All good.

Refs

  • Earwig's okay.
  • Ref check: 1, 4, 7, 10, 13, 18, 22, 27, 40. All good.

Misc

  • No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information regarding the topic, neutral.
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