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Nominator: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:25, 7 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:29, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:29, 8 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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• General comment: there are some instance of repetition, that aren't too bad, but you could consider rewording. Examples include "where" in the first and second sentences of the "Early life and college" section, "new" in the in the third to last and second to last sentences in the last paragraph of the "Early life and college" section, "followed that up" in the same sentence in the first paragraph in the "Green Bay Packers" section, etc.
• the 1985 NFL draft, and signed with the Cleveland Browns, who moved him back to running back. I would use "but" instead of "and" here
• You can link to Change of pace running back
• He played for two seasons with the Packers, and left football after not being signed after the 1990 season. --> He played two seasons for the Packers before leaving football after not being signed prior to the 1991 season.
• Since his birthdate is in the lead, it should be in the body (i.e. Fontenot was born on September 12, 1963, in Beaumont, Texas...)
• Link freshman, sophomore, Junior (education year), and Senior (education)
• Byner and Mack, and ahead of rookie draft pick Tim Manoa. I would replace the second "and" with "but"
• In back-to-back games in October, he had a two-touchdown performance it's not clear here whether you are talking about Fullwood or Fontenot
• still unhappy, and was missing team meetings and practices., the comma isn't needed here
• References:
  • All sources appear to be reliable for what is being cited and are consistently formatted.
  • Spot checks: 3, 7, 8, 12, 19, 24, 27, 31, 34, 37 all check out

Nice work Wizardman, please ping me when everything is wrapped up. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:07, 9 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! Will get that handled tomorrow. Wizardman 01:56, 10 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Issues now fixed, thanks again! Wizardman 02:06, 11 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:40, 11 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]