Talk:Rice polyculture

GA review

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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 19:58, 19 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Z. Patterson (talk · contribs) 21:44, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing the article. Z. Patterson (talk) 21:44, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Chiswick Chap:
My observations follow.
  • There appear to be no copyright violations.
  • The article appears to be written well.
  • The article appears to be stable.
  • The article appears to be verifiable. I checked the sources I could access, and the article appears to agree with them.
  • The article appears to be broad for its coverage, despite its length.
  • The article is well-illustrated.
I have some points to address.
  • Added the ref. It analyses the benefits of systems with ducks.
  • In the table, I see the sentence, "Surface must be even; water depth must suit ducks; young ducks best as they don't nibble rice leaf tips." Perhaps we could expand the contraction and change "nibble" to "bite".
  • Expanded and edited.
  • In the table, I see, "Chinese mitten crab, from 1980s The crabs feed on zooplankton." I think we could add a semicolon or a full stop to "1980s".
  • Done.
  • I suggest changing instances of "while" to "as".
  • This isn't an improvement in British English.
If you make the changes, I plan to pass the article as a good article.
Z. Patterson (talk) 22:58, 7 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Chiswick Chap: I placed the review on hold. I will give you seven days to address the issues. Z. Patterson (talk) 00:05, 8 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Chiswick Chap: I passed this article as a good article. I commend your work. Z. Patterson (talk) 10:46, 8 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]