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Hi Mathmo, we seem to be overlapping a bit in our edits about Gaines stating she was struck twice versus content stating she "was assaulted", e.g. [1], but with reference to WP:RSP, sources such as the Reason commentary, The Daily Telegraph and WP:NEWSWEEK are not the best possible sources available, so it seems best, per WP:NPOV, including WP:WIKIVOICE, to use the best-sourced content we currently have available, which seems to be based on Gaines' statements at this time. Thank you, Beccaynr (talk) 01:02, 9 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources says The Daily Telegraph is listed as a good source, which is why I added it. I used Newsweek, but see it's listed as disputed, so I'm not trying add it back when removed. The Telegraph (aka The Daily Telegraph) made an explicit statement of fact about the assault, and about being forced to be barricaded in a room. The current wording implies that it was just the police putting her in the room (not the protesters). But, if you read the body of the article Anti-Lia Thomas activist whisked away by police amid protest at San Francisco State by SFGate, you'll see it says "In one video, protesters can be seen discussing conditions under which they’d let Gaines leave.". So, the SF Gate article, despite being critical of Gaines politically, actually confirms that she was forced to be in the room. It goes further than the Telegraph, by making clearer that it was the protesters keeping her there. This is a widely witnessed, filmed, and covered event. We shouldn't just be implying that it was just Gaines making a claim, as the current wording does. We should state the facts, as reported by reliable sources. It's also worth noting, that while not all sources confirm all the facts as facts, I don't see any reliable source refuting the claim of facts of The Telegraph. So, I think the version that said "According to The Telegraph, Gaines was physically assaulted and forced to barricade herself inside a room." was absolutely correct. --Rob (talk) 05:06, 9 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Per the WP:WIKIVOICE section of WP:NPOV policy, we need to avoid "avoid stating opinions as facts", so attributing a factual statement to a source, i.e. The Telegraph (as if it is an opinion) does not appear appropriate according to this policy.

Also, The Telegraph is identified as potentially biased in its WP:RSP entry (and seems to potentially have some bias based on some of the article itself, including but not limited to its broad assertion that a physical assault occured when other news outlets have been more circumspect based on available evidence and police statements), so its use as opinion for a vague factual statement does not seem appropriate per the reliable sources section guideline that discusses NPOV policy, especially because there are more neutral reliable sources available to support neutral content now, which is that Gaines has made statements about her experience. This is also recent news, and we can wait for further credible information to develop - investigations are pending, and in the meantime, we need to be careful to avoid our own original research or synthesis from a video.

I also do not see how SFGATE is "critical of Gaines politically" in its news report of what happened - the report describes Gaines as "an activist against trans women in women’s sports" and states she has "gone on a public crusade against Thomas" - as this article develops with sources already included, those descriptions probably will become more clear, but the descriptions do not seem particularly politically critical.

WP:WIKIVOICE also encourages us to "Prefer nonjudgmental language", so using language that is closer to what Gaines and reliable sources said happened, instead of "physically assaulted" and "forced to barricade herself" seems more encyclopedic. There is a chain of events that has been documented by news outlets; Gaines spoke, and then protesters entered; Gaines moved to a classroom with protection from police; afterwards, Gaines described her experience as including being physically struck twice. I think the words to watch section in NPOV policy is also helpful, because it says to avoid "loaded language", which is what I attempted to do when developing content from sources. Beccaynr (talk) 05:48, 9 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It was uncessary to say "According to The Telegraph", since it was a fact. So, we could just state it (the physical assault, and barricading) as facts without inline attribution. But, giving an inline attribution isn't harmful. Stating reliably sourced fact isn't judgmental. The Telegraph came to its conclusion based on available data of a very public incident. NPOV means we follow reliable sources, it doesn't mean we treat all imagined points of view equally. Now, if there were a reliable source that contradicted The Telegraph, I would say than we would have to be neutral and reflect that there was dispute within reliable sources. But, there is no dispute. The fact that not every source says X doesn't mean X is disputed. Now, if we decide there isn't sufficient reliable sources to say what happened in this instance, then let's just remove the whole incident. All of your suggested wording seems to be an attempt to say nothing. I'm fine, do that, for now. But, please don't be use weaselly wording that leaves things up the reader to interpret however they wish, with a subtle suggestion that nothing happened. Note, my suggestion (leaving incident out) isn't rhetorical, this is a new incident, there's ongoing reporting, and I'm fine with waiting to cover it (we're not news). But, whatever we do, we must not engage in fake neutrality that suggests anything is possible. --Rob (talk) 13:55, 9 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think when it comes to WP:RSP sources, you can use something that is yellow coded to back up a green "reliable" source to reinforce it (You just can't use a sole yellow coded source to make a statement of fact, but more to validate notability), if the claim is quite critical. That is when I think attributing is necessary, when you have a source that wiki doesn't endorse as having a lot of "integrity" therefore you state where the citation come from to let readers make their own assessment of whether or not there is bias. Eruditess (talk) 16:39, 12 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I see there isn't consensus to cover the assault and confinement incident as actual facts (that are reliable sourced). I suggest we simply drop it entirely. From reading comments, the reason for not covering this as established fact, is there's a lack of reliable sources. If that's the case, then you actually need *more* sourcing to cover the dispute of facts. Whenever reliable sources disagree you need to devote greater time/attention (to give proper weight to each position based on reliable sources). In the future, if there's much better sourcing, an active civil case (not just a threat), or a criminal case, that would warrant inclusion. Right now, we're using cowardly/weasely wording, that lets different people read the same text, and take opposite interpretations. An example of lousy writing is: "After the event concluded, protesters arrived. Gaines was escorted by law enforcement officers to shelter in a classroom". Why was she sheltering? Was it raining outside? --Rob (talk) 02:27, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The current text [2] also includes After the event, Gaines said she had been physically struck twice by a person during the protest. From my view, there are basic facts available from reliable sources, and I made an attempt to include them without editorial bias, per WP:NPOV policy. I think we can also wait for further coverage to help develop the content; my current concern is about the addition of what appears to me to be loaded language contrary to WP:WIKIVOICE. Thank you, Beccaynr (talk) 02:55, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think we have a sourcing problem for her claim purely as a claim. The question is whether it is WP:DUE coverage worthy of inclusion? The difficulty with covering such things is that we have no way of knowing whether they will ever go anywhere and there is a risk of leaving it dangling forever. Waiting for further coverage is reasonable so long as we are prepared for the possibility that there may well not be any. My, very tentative, thought is that it should remain in the article pending clarification later if there is an actual investigation ongoing but if it has already come to nothing then it might be better to remove it. That said, I don't feel strongly that it should be removed even if that is the case.

I don't read much into the "sheltering" thing either way. It could imply that she was sheltering from a real or imagined threat of violence or merely that she was sheltering from having to face her critics. That's not Wikipedia being unnecessarily ambiguous, that's just an intrinsic ambiguity of the situation/coverage which we currently can't resolve without getting into WP:OR. FWIW, I doubt the cops had any definite opinions about this. They probably just thought "It's getting a bit noisy here. Lets keep her inside to quieten things down." DanielRigal (talk) 11:33, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There are no policies stating wikipedia editors can't do WP:OR, it simply states we aren't able to editorialize based on our research. After having listened to the video it certainly sounds like she was being unlawfully detained. Never the less, we can't and shouldn't bring this into the article until there are sufficient sources can be reliably cited. I'd like to update the prose from said to alleged, assuming the lawsuit she has now threatened is filed.[3] Kcmastrpc (talk) 12:53, 13 April 2023 (UTC) Kcmastrpc (talk) 12:53, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I don't know how likely that is but, if it actually happens, then I agree that "alleged" would make sense. DanielRigal (talk) 13:05, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The attention garnered by national media from this event is part of the reason this article exists in the first place (among a couple of other notable events). The event was noted even at page creation and the situation is continuing to evolve. I see no reason to exclude it. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:07, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

(edit conflict) replying to [4] WP:ONUS states, The responsibility for achieving consensus for inclusion is on those seeking to include disputed content. Also, the WP:PRIMARYSOURCE section of WP:OR includes "Do not analyze, evaluate, interpret, or synthesize material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so." So it sounds like we agree that we can't review a primary source such as a video and then conduct our own analysis or interpretation, e.g. whether an unlawful detainer happened.

MOS:ALLEGED includes, Words such as supposed, apparent, alleged, and purported can imply that a given point is inaccurate, although alleged and accused are appropriate when wrongdoing is asserted but undetermined, such as with people awaiting or undergoing a criminal trial; when these are used, ensure that the source of the accusation is clear. I went with what seems to be the more neutral MOS:SAID under the current circumstances (e.g. the MOS includes Said, stated, described, wrote, commented, and according to are almost always neutral and accurate. Extra care is needed with more loaded terms.) And we will need a better source than a Fox News talk show (the Yahoo link) per WP:RSP. Beccaynr (talk) 13:19, 13 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Just skimmed this section but I made an independent addition on the SFSU article and I avoided Newsweek and the Telegraph. Perhaps my edit there could help the tone on this one/could be harmonized between the articles. SmolBrane (talk) 14:48, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I know many eyes are on this page at the moment, so we should try our best to be precise and stick as closely to reliable sources. Thanks to @Maddy from Celeste for correcting the problematic language regarding this. I've looked at the RS and it seems in Wikivoice we should be saying Transgender Atheletes instead. I am not sure of Riley's views, but it could presumably be true that she may additionally oppose inclusion of Trans Men in Women's sports.

Most sources quote her directly when explaining her views, however, the following sources do explicitly mention Transgender Athletes, and not Transgender Women. [5], [6]. With regards to the first source note that the title indicates the event was in regards to Transgender Women in Women's sports, however specifically regarding Riley it says Transgender Athletes.

It may be the case that there are other sources which report differently, in which case we should add them. Theheezy (talk) 06:46, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This is a challenging article with a limited number of reliable sources to work with; note the WP:RSP entry for WP:NEWSWEEK. We should also probably consider MOS:GENDERID, and how Wikipedia is not a WP:SOAPBOX. The recent event in the news was titled "Saving Women's Sports with Riley Gaines" [7], and Gaines has previously referred to trans women as e.g. "biological male" [8] - she appears to be opposed to people she believes are 'biologically male' [9], not trans men, in Women's sports. In my review of sources, I have not yet seen anything to suggest her campaigning is more than against the inclusion of trans women in the women's division of sports. Beccaynr (talk) 09:25, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think the one saving grace here is that the article is small and hence it is possible to avoid it spiralling out of control. I think Beccaynr is right on both points. We need to keep obfuscatory transphobic jargon out of the article as far as possible. If we absolutely have to use it in a quotation then that should be contextualised so that our readers can know what it means. Any attempt to add it in Wikipedia's voice should be reverted on sight and warnings issued as appropriate. As regards trans men, I think the part of the anti-trans movement that focuses on women's sport as a wedge issue has either completely forgotten or, more likely, is pretending to have forgotten that trans men and non-binary people even exist. As soon as the conversation is expanded to include them their whole line falls apart. DanielRigal (talk) 10:13, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks to you both for the clarification. I agree, given this evidence the current wording is the right wording. I do want to note I was not suggesting that we should quote her. I don't think there is any value in that. I was making sure that if we are stating her views in wikivoice, we are confident that these are indeed her views. Theheezy (talk) 16:31, 10 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Can we state this in the article? Not the greatest source but https://nypost.com/2023/06/02/riley-gaines-backing-desantis-over-trump-in-2024/ PalmScrost (talk) 21:41, 5 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That linked article doesn't seem to use the word "conservative" once. The "nypost" is listed as unreliable at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources. We've already listed her support for conservative political figures (Trump,Walker,Paul) and organizations (Turning Point). Our readers can figure out on their own she's probably a conservative/right-winger/Republican. When a reliable source says so, then we can say it explicitly. It's a pretty uncontroversial fact she's conservative (in they eyes of supporters and foes), but we still need at least one reliable source to say so explicitly, before we say so explicitly. --Rob (talk) 06:16, 6 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Given the preponderance of her associations, how about describing her as aligned with conservative politics? PalmScrost (talk) 13:04, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Beccaynr Could you explain this revert? https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Riley_Gaines&diff=prev&oldid=1161237260 PalmScrost (talk) 13:06, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I believe it was based on the lack of attribution, I restored the content and modified it to comply with RS/P policy. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:09, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Okay why does it require attribution though? Is the news section of National Post not considered reliable? PalmScrost (talk) 13:11, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

WP:NATIONALREVIEW doesn't ambiguate between news articles and opinion pieces for the purpose of attribution. This conversation probably belongs on RS/N if it's going to go any further. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:14, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Oh I misremembered the magazine name. Okay. PalmScrost (talk) 13:16, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, and on my first review of the National Review source, I was thinking of the WP:RSOPINION guideline based on the content of the source, not just WP:RS/P - e.g. Some sources may be considered reliable for statements as to their author's opinion, but not for statements asserted as fact. But it has been restored and adjusted now, so I think this has been addressed.

As to the Washington Examiner source [10], this is clearly an opinion piece, so it is within WP:RSOPINION, and from my view, currently seems undue, particularly as to what may be an WP:EXTRAORDINARY opinion based on other available sources. There is a June 15, 2023 news article by the Washington Post titled Inside a conservative confab for young women, where feminism is a lie with a brief mention of Gaines attending the Turning Point USA Young Women's Leadership Summit, (beginning with "No wonder Riley Gaines was a star here.") and noting the reaction of one "high-schooler" and "Gaines posed for a group photo with roughly a dozen fans on Sunday afternoon."

Overall, I think it can be difficult with small articles that are essentially composed of reporting on discrete events to determine whether and when to include various details, but if further coverage develops, and particularly independent and reliable secondary coverage, about her attendance at events, then I think it will seem more due to include. Beccaynr (talk) 13:51, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I also agree with the other edit Beccaynr made, that appears to be UNDUE promo. Did anything significant happen at this event? I don't see the need for Wikipedia to serve as this persons resume. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:10, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Well, my intent here is mainly to document her conservative leanings which is rather obvious, but reliable sources are hard to come by. I think a encyclopedia should summarize her leanings. PalmScrost (talk) 13:12, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I believe that is already conveyed and doesn't need more weight added to it, imho. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:12, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I mean as a summary in the lead of the article. PalmScrost (talk) PalmScrost (talk) 13:14, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

In that case, no matter how many conservative events she attends until such time her personal political views are espoused through secondary sources we should not label her in wikivoice (anywhere, including the lead). That could be considered WP:SYNTHESIS or WP:OR. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:18, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with Kcmastrpc - for now, it does not appear that we have the independent, reliable, and secondary sources to do more than 'show, not tell' in WP:WIKIVOICE, but this could change as further sources develop. Beccaynr (talk) 14:05, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That makes sense for a claim that "she's a conservative", but how about describing her as aligned with conservative politics in the lead? The Chloe Cole article already does this by describing her as having appeared with conservative politicians and in the media. PalmScrost (talk) PalmScrost (talk) 18:37, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The Chloe Cole article is much more substantially developed and there are three sources cited as support for the She has appeared with conservative politicians and in the media, supporting and advocating for such bans line in the lead. I am not particularly familiar with the development of the Cole article, but from my view, for this article, it appears we currently have a collection of reporting about Gaines that is mostly limited to reporting about discrete events, and do not yet have the kind of secondary coverage, or particularly extensive coverage, that can support an expansion of the lead at this time. Beccaynr (talk) 19:05, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The lead should mention her anti-trans political activism and alignment with conservatives. Presently it does not do that. PalmScrost (talk) 02:31, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Beccaynr (talk) 03:07, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I think this edit isn't a summary, its just a duplication. If you're going to list each individual political endorsement in the lede, then why not list each competition in the lede as well. Let's just copy the entire body to the lede, and we'll cover everything. Saying "Gaines has campaigned against the inclusion of trans women in the women's division of sports.[period]" is an adequate summary given the current content of the article. It can be improved if/when there's a reliable source that concisely defines her broader political identity (e.g. classifies her as a conservative, republican, or whatever). This is short article. It's entire length is less than many lede sections. So, it's ok if the lede is short. --Rob (talk) 06:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That sounds good to me, and I have made the adjustment. Thank you, Beccaynr (talk) 12:19, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you both of you. "Gaines has campaigned against" This, however, reads like she has campaigned in the past but has stopped doing so. Maybe it should read "Gaines campaigs against". PalmScrost (talk) PalmScrost (talk) 22:46, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Beccaynr, thanks for the fix. PalmScrost, I understand, but also don't like implying she's doing something right now, as the article should be "timeless" when possible. Perhaps we could say "After retiring from competitive swimming, Gaines began campaigning against...." It makes it clearer it's the most current thing she's done, but doesn't explicitly say she has doign it right now, but doesn't suggest she isn't. Note, before making the change, we'd need a citation explicitly confirming the "after retiring" part, which I can look for (I'm sure I've seen), if we agree on text. --Rob (talk) 09:34, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds fine by me. PalmScrost (talk) 22:31, 10 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Rob, regarding your "implying she's doing something right now" the article body already says that Gaines campaigns against the inclusion anyway, no implying required. A cursory look at her Twitter should make it obvious to anyone that she's actively campaigning. I suggest we change the lead to match the use of present tense in the article body. PalmScrost (talk) 01:35, 13 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I reviewed various references in the article, and we do not seem to have secondary sources describing Gaines as an active campaigner - we seem to instead have discrete reports of various activities and statements, so it seems as if it would be WP:SYNTH (and potentially WP:PROMO) for us to state in WP:WIKIVOICE what the sources have not. So I have adjusted the language in the article body in a way I think better reflects the available sources and helps avoid original research. The article can always be updated as more independent, reliable, secondary sourcing becomes available, but for now, based on the limited coverage available, a conservative approach seems warranted according to our core content policies. Beccaynr (talk) 02:10, 13 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

https://www.mediamatters.org/fox-news/over-year-after-her-last-race-against-lia-thomas-riley-gaines-has-built-media-career-trans

Gaines aligns herself with anti-trans rhetoric and politics just for example. PalmScrost (talk) 20:04, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:MEDIAMATTERS, this shouldn't be presented in wikivoice without attribution, and shouldn't be the lead of that section given the partisan bias present in that source. Further, linking transphobia is problematic because no RS have labeled Gaines views verbatim as transphobic (because they're not). Kcmastrpc (talk) 21:23, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Anti-trans and transphobic are the same thing here. Views that are against trans people (anti-trans) necessarily constitute discrimination against transgender people [11]. -- Maddy from Celeste (WAVEDASH) 22:20, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

From my view, including anti-trans as a wikilink seemed appropriate based on the content of the Media Matters source (now attributed and focused more clearly on what Gaines is observed to have said) as well as the contents of the transphobia article. It is of course important to be cautious per MOS:LABEL, but now that the originally-added article content has been edited, moved, and attributed, the wikilink seems appropriate to include. Beccaynr (talk) 22:45, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As no one else has weighed in on this issue I'll step down off this hill. Thanks for giving this time and space to gather feedback. Kcmastrpc (talk) 13:19, 21 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As background, there has been fairly substantial discussion at Talk:Lia Thomas, including about the application of WP:BLP policy, which relates to statements made by Gaines about Thomas, as well as statements made by Gaines about her own teammates. I mention this because from my view, there appears to be a general agreement about a need to exercise caution, and I would add for this article, it appears similar considerations apply.

I think generally it seems WP:DUE enough to note when Gaines receives notice in independent, reliable, and secondary sources for a public advocacy event, but likely WP:UNDUE when there is minimal coverage to add what sounds like a negative statement directed at Thomas by Gaines, and particularly a direct quote. I think we have generally been doing this for previous events such as participation in lobbying, campaign advertisements, etc; the summary content reflects the weight of available coverage, which helps avoid creating promotional content.

BLP policy also seems to encourage us to find an alternative to direct quotes from Gaines that seem to disparage or otherwise make accusations against Thomas. BLP policy includes in its introduction, "it is not Wikipedia's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives; the possibility of harm to living subjects must always be considered when exercising editorial judgment," and the policy tells us to "Be very firm about the use of high-quality sources."

I think there may be an encyclopedic way to add further content, but I also think we should consider the independence, reliability, and weight of available sources and how to present information with the biographies of living persons policy in mind, and proceed cautiously, e.g. as noted in the 21 March 2023 close of a discussion at the Lia Thomas article Talk page, "Editors wishing to include the information should attempt to gain consensus on the wording and sourcing on the talk page before introducing it to the article, as it is clear such information is contentious and likely to be removed without prior consensus to include, per WP:BLP." Thank you, Beccaynr (talk) 22:46, 26 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

So, the difficulty here is Gaines' notability came primarily out of her interaction and criticism of Lia Thomas. If Lia Thomas didn't exist, wasn't trans, didn't compete with Gaines, or Gaines didn't criticize Thomas, there probably would not be an article about Gaines. I hope editors who are familar with NCAA swimming can expand that part of the article. Over time, her broader political activism might have less focus on Thomas. But, like it, or not, this article is tied to Thomas. We only name Thomas four times, in three sentences, and only once in the wikivoice. Given that Thomas is the primary source of Gaines current fame, that suggests we're not overweighting it. It's easy to limit Gaines in the Thomas article, but not easy to limit Thomas in the Gaines article. But, if there's something specific your getting at (that I missed), I'm happy to correct. --Rob (talk) 05:42, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I should have specified that I was opening a section in response to recent edits [12], [13]. Based on past discussions at Talk:Lia Thomas, I think we should take care with how content about Thomas is incorporated here. Beccaynr (talk) 06:14, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with the general thrust of your comment. But this is an article on Riley Gaines and I fail to see how clearly stating her claimed experience of "trauma" causes "the possibility of harm to [Lia Thomas]" in particular. Gaines supposedly experiencing trauma tells something about her, and nothing about Thomas.

The way the Gaines' senate hearing is worded in current version does not really tell anything new. shared her "own personal experience competing with trans swimmer Lia Thomas and having to share the same dressing room.". I mean, that's information-less. What experience is it that she shared? One would think sharing that in her own Wikipedia article would be WP:DUE.

To minimize any perceived harm, however, we can certainly supplant this claim of "trauma" with a counter viewpoint. After all most women in sports are not bothered by the inclusion of transwomen.

PalmScrost (talk) 15:32, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Gaines' recent statement was directed at Thomas, and there has been extensive discussion at Talk:Lia Thomas about similar statements made by Gaines. Overall, available coverage of Gaines appears to be limited, so we do not appear to have a lot of sources to work with according to WP:NPOV policy. Also, one of the core polices is What Wikipedia is not, which includes WP:NOTSCANDAL, e.g. content about living people are required to meet an especially high standard, as they may otherwise be libellous or infringe the subjects' right to privacy. So it does not appear feasible to balance this contentious material about a living person with sourcing related to popular opinion about sports generally. Beccaynr (talk) 02:20, 28 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I added a maintenance template because from my view, based on the amount and depth of coverage available, recent edits that rearrange content from a chronological narrative into small groups of somewhat-similar activities, [14], [15], seems promotional - most of the sources relate to discrete events, so it seems appropriate according to WP:NPOV policy to follow the sources and summarize a chronology in the Political activism section for now. Thank you, Beccaynr (talk) 22:39, 27 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Huh? What are you talking about? How is re-ordering of content promotional? Where is the promotion? The version before my two edits[16] was chronological (except the first sentence), but it wasn't really formatted in a way that one would make it obvious that's what your doing. But, feel free to go back to chronological. I was making an effort to group things more logically, with a mind to eventually develop appropriate sub-sections. Keeping content organized in related matter, also makes it easier (in my mind) to manage appropriate balance of different types of content. But, I'm not married to any particular orgnization, and am happy to colloborate to get better organization. If you want to put it in chronological order, than please just go ahead and do that. I'd like to see some sort of rational structure (e.g. how we break things into paragraphs). I was WP:BOLD to change it, and you can be bold, and change it to something better. --Rob (talk) 04:23, 28 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I decided to just revert the last two changes I made. Your claim of of promotion is so incomprehensible, I don't want to waste time discussing it, leaving such a rediculous tag on the article. It's a short article, so the exact order of stuff isn't hugely important. In future, consider just proposing desired changes, and/or just make needed changes yourself. No need for a tag in this case, but if you absolutely must put a tag, use something at least remotely relevant like {{Chronological}}, since nobody reading {{Advert}} could possibly tell what the problem is. --Rob (talk) 04:39, 28 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Rob, I am sorry that I placed the tag when I should have just proposed changes on the talk page. You are correct that this would have been a more constructive and appropriate approach, and I will be more mindful of this in the future. My view at the time was essentially that this is a short article, and to the extent there is secondary context, this seems to be two sources (SFGATE and MMFA), which discuss Gaines in the context of the past year. For now, grouping by category of activity seems like a CV instead of a biography, because we don't seem to have the sourcing to support subsections. So I apologize again about the advert template - it was not necessary to encourage discussion or edits, and I am sorry it was counterproductive. Beccaynr (talk) 05:31, 28 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for saying that. I'd like to now work on improving formatting the chronological information. The main anomaly is our use of the April 2023 SFGATE article in the opening sentence of the section, but we switch back to 2022 in the same first paragraph. The SFGATE article is about SFSU visit, which we mention later on in the section, using different sources. It would make sense to have all those together. Perhaps a good rule (if we do chronological order) is to break the paragraph for each separate event (even if that leaves one-sentence paragraphs). Otherwise, we seem to be just arbitrarily making paragraphs. --Rob (talk) 04:39, 29 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the feedback, Rob. I just made several edits to the article that I think reflect your comments - I had initially thought the April 2023 SFGATE source provided a useful transition from Gaines' swimming career to her political advocacy/activism, but I agree it can create a bit of whiplash for the reader, so I moved it down in the chronology. I also separated events and made an adjustment to a sentence where the source doesn't offer specific dates (about the Walker ads and Trump rally), and restored the edit you made to remove what appears to be an unnecessary attribution to the National Review.

I also don't think this article is generally so contentious that we should discuss most edits in advance, and I think we can rely on WP:BRD as needed for things like this. As an exception to that usual practice, as noted in the Talk section above, I think it would be helpful to discuss in advance how to handle contentious claims about a living person, particularly claims that have already been subject to extensive discussion. Thanks again, Beccaynr (talk) 14:34, 30 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@X-Editor and Beccaynr: I removed the text following text from the article in this edit:

House Speaker Kevin McCarthy called the incident "an appalling attack on free speech on a college campus".^[1] PEN America called the incident a "disaster.", adding that "Physical intimidation or violence is never an acceptable response to speech, no matter how hateful or controversial that speech may be".^[1]

As I indicated in my edit summary, my primary concern was undue weight—to me, it seemed inappropriate to include the preceding text while excluding the following text:

After the SFSU event, SFGATE wrote that Gaines "rose to prominence as an activist last year after tying for fifth place with trans swimmer Lia Thomas," and "has since gone on a public crusade against Thomas."^[2]

In June 2023, Media Matters published an analysis of Gaines' 29 appearances on Fox News between April 2022 and the end of May 2023, with a focus on the frequency and type of anti-trans talking points made by Gaines.^[3] According to Media Matters, more than half of Gaines' appearances on Fox News since April 2022 had occurred during April and May 2023.^[3]

Now that Beccaynr has restored the text that X-Editor removed, I'm wondering whether it would be appropriate to restore X-Editor's addition. I don't have a strong opinion either way, but I think it's worth discussing here. — SamX [talk · contribs] 18:59, 9 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'm fine with keeping the SFGATE and Media Matters text if it means restoring the reactions text. X-Editor (talk) 19:01, 9 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]