Talk:Marcellina (Gnostic)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 07:07, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:07, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

  • No DAB links checkY
  • No dead links checkY
  • No missing citations checkY

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • She, like other Carpocratians, believed that the soul must follow the path to redemption, possibly going through many incarnations. suggest:
    She, like other Carpocratians, believed that the soul must follow the path to redemption, which may require many incarnations to do.
  • @Katolophyromai: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 08:03, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]