Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Thilsebatti were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Thilsebatti (talk) 10:30, 1 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Substantiator! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Thilsebatti (talk) 10:30, 1 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Consider resubmitting to see what a new reviewer will think. David notMD (talk) 12:30, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @David notMD I have resubmitted. Thank you for your valuable contribution and guidance. Substantiator (talk) 11:35, 14 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I recommend you delete the last paragraph in Leadership and influence, as it is not in a neutral point of view (WP:NPOV) and not referenced. Wikipedia's "voice" is supposed to be neutral. Any laudatory content has to be attributed to a valid reference. David notMD (talk) 12:49, 14 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Taabii was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Tsitsi Masiyiwa and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Taabii (talk) 16:54, 14 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

See my Comment at the draft. David notMD (talk) 22:29, 14 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]