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Hi Kriti,
You have done a good job of identifying the weaknesses with your article, but near the end of your comment you start to introduce some bias. A better way to talk about it would be to say, you want to add a section to the article that explores current debates as to the appropriateness and fairness of the reservations system.
I would recommend editing what you have written so far to change the last part to more neutral language. After all, Wikipedia requires neutrality.
Prof M Johnson (talk) 03:42, 20 September 2011 (UTC)
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