GA review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:51, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 20:51, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 01:31, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 01:31, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

  • track and field and basketball at the school you can just delete "at the school" as this is implied
    • Done.
  • He won more letters in football I have never thought of letters as something you "win", is there a better way to phrase this?
    • I have seen that wording used a decent amount (e.g. [1]), but I changed it to "received" a letter.
  • The last paragraph of the "Early life" section, every sentence starts with "He..." Could you find a way to rephrase one or two sentences to break that up a bit?
    • Merged a sentence.
  • two years,[19] and began comma isn't needed and you can push the ref to the end of the sentence, if you desire
    • Done.
  • References: all are consistently formatted and appropriate for what is being cited
    • Ref #2 and #16 need access-dates
      • Done.
    • Spot checks: #2, 6, 7, 10, 13, 17, 20, and 25 all check out

That's all I got, nice work BeanieFan11! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:31, 24 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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