GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:15, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ray Jennison/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 20:35, 8 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 19:32, 9 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:32, 9 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

  • Regarding the first sentence, you need to clarify that American is his nationality. I think you do this on your other bios.
  • Sentence 3 and sentence 4 of the lead both start with "He later", can you switch one up?
  • I would just summarize "in Paris, France, and London, England." as "in Europe." in the lead.
  • last name to "Jennison." I believe the quotation mark goes inside the period on this type of quote.
  • Jennison played for South Dakota State's you add SDSU is the previous sentence, recommend using it here instead of spelling out the full school name again
  • "huskiest linemen,", same as above, I think the quote goes inside the comma
  • Green Bay Packers of the National Football League you can just use "NFL" here
  • He later remarried to Mary Garnett Jennison -> He was later remarried to Mary Garnett Jennison
  • References:
    • Add access-dates to Ref 4, 18 and 25
    • Ref 16 is missing the |via=Newspapers.com
    • References are consistently formatter and reliable for what is being cited
    • Spot checks: 3, 4, 7, 8, 15, 16, 23, 24, and 25 all checked out

Nice work BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:53, 10 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 12:45, 9 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Jennison, c. 1929
Jennison, c. 1929
  • ... that NFL player Ray Jennison (pictured) legally changed his last name from "Jenison" because "people were always misspelling it"?
Improved to Good Article status by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 299 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 18:37, 17 February 2025 (UTC).[reply]


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