GA review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 01:30, 21 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Gil Skeate/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 02:03, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 18:19, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:19, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

  • Any reason that you removed "Washington" from Aberdeen in the lead?
  • helped them be considered the second-best team in the state in his senior year, 1920 --> helped them become one of the best teams in the state during his senior, in 1920.
    • Changed.
  • Skeate began attending Gonzaga University and played for the Gonzaga Bulldogs football team in 1921 --> Skeate began attending Gonzaga University and played for their football team in 1921
    • Changed.
  • What was his "big moment"?
  • that actually served in a war --> I would just delete "actually"
    • Done.
  • References: all appear reliable to what is being cited and are consistently formatted
    • Ref 1: I would update the access-date to match when you most recently accessed the site
      • Done.
    • Spot checks: 2, 3, 6, 7, 8, 13, and 15 all look good

Nice work BeanieFan11. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:03, 20 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Did you know nomination

  • ... that Gil Skeate went from working at a lumber camp to playing in the NFL?
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 307 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:11, 27 February 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done yet
Overall: Waiting on the QPQ. Perhaps the ALT0 hook could mention that he was called up to the Packers while at a lumber camp for added spice? SounderBruce 06:38, 28 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Allikas: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Gil_Skeate
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