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This review is transcluded from Talk:Active-class cruiser/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will finish this within two hours. JAGUAR  18:11, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

• I'd mention in the infobox image caption that the Active is in dazzle camouflage. Looked too snazzy for Royal Navy standards...
• "The Active-class cruiser was a trio of scout cruisers" - needs plural
• "As scout cruisers, the ships were only lightly protected to maximize their speed" - maximise
• "thick on the slope and .5 inches (13 mm)" - is the full stop meant to be there?
• "(the 3rd and and 1st Destroyer Flotillas (DF)" - duplication
• No dead links
• No dab links

Founds some minor prose errors, but once they're all done this should be good to go. JAGUAR  21:19, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

All done with these ships, but others to come if you've gotten bored!--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:25, 14 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, this is good to go now. Looking forward to it! Keep them coming in, and I'll keep reviewing them. JAGUAR  12:45, 15 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]