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My edits were categorized as vandalism - someone else should delete the extraordinarily poorly written segment beginning right after the discussion of the filming location. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/216.243.131.59|216.243.131.59]] ([[User talk:216.243.131.59|talk]]) 03:24, 4 April 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
My edits were categorized as vandalism - someone else should delete the extraordinarily poorly written segment beginning right after the discussion of the filming location. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/216.243.131.59|216.243.131.59]] ([[User talk:216.243.131.59|talk]]) 03:24, 4 April 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

:Agreed, it clearly reads as written by someone who does not write English as their primary (secondary or even...) language.

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The "professional driver" wrecked the car or...

"Jay let the guy drive the car, but he was involved in an accident which wrecked the car". Now the casual reader would think Jay wrecked the car. 89.100.139.240 01:34, 25 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Missing windscreen

"The missing windscreen can be seen when the Lamborghini overtakes the black Ferrari on an uphill shot." How do you see a missing screen? The thing about something missing is that it is not there (anymore) and thus cannot be seen. 89.100.139.240 01:35, 25 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Answer: Easy to spot if there is a windscreen in the car due to the reflection of light on the glass due to its raked angle (more so on a supercar).Watch the video and you'll see it. The fact that they are being blown around all over the place inside the cabin is also the obvious give away (too much for just the window being out) —Preceding unsigned comment added by 90.206.11.118 (talk) 19:25, 10 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Poor grammar

My edits were categorized as vandalism - someone else should delete the extraordinarily poorly written segment beginning right after the discussion of the filming location. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.243.131.59 (talk) 03:24, 4 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed, it clearly reads as written by someone who does not write English as their primary (secondary or even...) language.
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