Talk:The Originals season 1

Grammer of Summary of Episode 1

The grammer of the summary of episode "Always and Forever" is horrible. I tried reading it but it is full of mistakes. Unfortunately I don't remember the episode well enough to fix it without possibly introducing factual errors.

e.g.: "As he arrives their first to find the witch killed who called Klaus back Jane Anne Deveraux." -> Is that "their" first find or should it be "they're" first to find?
e.g.: "banned in New Orleans Marcel Gerard" should be "by Marcel Gerard", I think
e.g.: "and they tells him"
e.g.: "and then he bites one of his vampire" should be "vampires"
e.g.: "... and to allow them to cremate her instead that Klaus would give his blood ..." should be a new sentence after "instead", not sure though what really happened in that episode and what is meant with "instead", doesn't make sence to me really

There are also several sentences that really should be split up in more sentences.
Someone who knows the episode better should fix this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:44:200:6539:3837:B8F7:1072:F22 (talk) 05:03, 6 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]