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Nominator: Dan Leonard (talk · contribs) 15:52, 14 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Pbritti (talk · contribs) 20:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, this is Pbritti! I'm a Coloradan who's lived in Virginia for a few years, but Wawa, Sheetz, and Pennsylvania are all things I'm quite familiar with! I'll provide an in-depth review soon. Please feel welcome to reply wherever you like below or on ping me on my talk page. Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 20:35, 22 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, getting started on the review.

• Sourcing looks to come exclusively from RSs. Will compare citations to content of the sources, but they are all the right thing to see in this sort of article.
• Some material in the lead are not in the body of the article and aren't sourced. We don't have cited statements about locations many aspects of the rivalry itself. I'll list those in a later comment.
• Sheetz stores are mostly located This sentence in the lead is unreferenced and has no supporting statement in the main text.
• Sheetz and Wawa have historically limited their operations to their respective regions What are these regions?
• same intersection in Phoenixville in southeastern Pennsylvania What is this example pulled out into its own sentence?
• The Spectator described Sheetz as having a "cultural hegemony" Please instead credit the author of the piece.
• Philadelphia magazine called a "cult-like customer devotion" Please instead credit the author of the piece.
• Broadly speaking, I worry that the article is not comprehensive. For example, there is no mention of a documentary on the subject.

I will do a source-to-text comparison next. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:00, 27 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]