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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 12:25, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take another.

Lead

• "..having won the event's Qualification Race the.." qualification race probably doesn't need to be capitalised here.
  •  Done MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Entry list

• The flag thing again.
  • Have removed the entire entry list as I have done in the other Macau Grand Prix good article. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Report

• "The 202 Macau Grand Prix.." Typo! 2012.
  • Ah, need to slow down while writing so I see mistakes such as this. Fixed. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "..ahead of three of Nasr's Carlin teammates Félix da Costa.." Could do with a semi-colon between teammates and Felix.
  •  Done MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "..both of which being 30 minutes." "were" might be better than "being".
  • Changed. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• "Following them were harAbt.." Typo.
  •  Done MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
• I'm not convinced it is necessary to list the entire grid during the prose of this section (in each of the the qualifying, the qualifying race and the main race sections.)
• "..Mandarin; alas, the pole-sitter regained his lead.." Alas definitely doesn't seem the right word to use here, it seems to apply an editorial voice, rather than an WP:NPOV.
  • removed the last section of the text. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Classification

• Tables would benefit from being sortable.
  •  Done MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

References

• Referencing looks good, spot checks don't reveal any issues. Harrias ^talk 12:25, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Harrias: I have addressed all of the queries except for reducing the list of the starting grid and the finishing order in the prose. MWright96 (talk) 18:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Harrias: Update: have reduced the starting grid in the prose to include only the first twenty qualifiers. MWright96 (talk) 18:43, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
    • Thanks, that's good enough for me to make this Good. Harrias ^talk 19:04, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]