AfC notification: Draft:Monolithic active pixel sensor has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Monolithic active pixel sensor. Thanks! Rambley (talk) 10:19, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks @Rambley:, implemented! Please let me know if you have any further suggestions. MiljenkoSuljic (talk) 15:24, 6 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Would you be able to provide sources for the first paragraph in the "History" section? Rambley (talk) 09:14, 12 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Rambley Done - cited references already existing in the article, and added a new one for a good measure. :) MiljenkoSuljic (talk) 09:45, 12 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Monolithic active pixel sensor has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Monolithic active pixel sensor. Thanks! Ldm1954 (talk) 15:44, 12 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
@Ldm1954 Thanks! I have sourced the paragraphs. There are already links to Active-pixel sensor, Hybrid pixel detector, and Charge-coupled device. Other similar detectors that I am aware of (HV-CMOS) do not have a Wiki page. Is that what you meant? MiljenkoSuljic (talk) 16:30, 12 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
I am not an expert in the area, just thinking what a high-school student or undergraduate would want to know about the topic. As an encyclopedia we don't write "how-to" articles, but we do want to outline the key facts/information and point readers to where to find more. Since you asked for advice my suggestion is more towards how to write a good article (B-class or higher), versus a standard entry. (The next stage up, a Good article requires some work and attention to detail, and can be frustrating for you as an editor.) Ldm1954 (talk) 16:48, 12 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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