Talk:Rice polyculture
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Nominator: Chiswick Chap (talk · contribs) 19:58, 19 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Z. Patterson (talk · contribs) 21:44, 7 July 2025 (UTC)
I will be reviewing the article. Z. Patterson (talk) 21:44, 7 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap:
- My observations follow.
- There appear to be no copyright violations.
- The article appears to be written well.
- The article appears to be stable.
- The article appears to be verifiable. I checked the sources I could access, and the article appears to agree with them.
- The article appears to be broad for its coverage, despite its length.
- The article is well-illustrated.
- I have some points to address.
- For the sentence that starts with "Pairings such as rice and fish or rice and ducks form a mutualistic relationship", I see that the cited source mentions fish, but not ducks. Are you able to find a source that mentions ducks for the part of the paragraph this sentence is in? I see that this source mentions ducks, but I was not sure if you figured this source would suffice for mentioning ducks.
- Nayak, P.K.; Nayak, A.K.; Panda, B.B.; Lal, B.; Gautam, P.; Poonam, A.; Shahid, M.; Tripathi, R.; Kumar, U.; Mohapatra, S.D.; Jambhulkar, N.N. (2018). "Ecological mechanism and diversity in rice based integrated farming system". Ecological Indicators. 91: 359–375. Bibcode:2018EcInd..91..359N. doi:10.1016/j.ecolind.2018.04.025. S2CID 90610992.
- Added the ref. It analyses the benefits of systems with ducks.
- For the sentence that starts with "Pairings such as rice and fish or rice and ducks form a mutualistic relationship", I see that the cited source mentions fish, but not ducks. Are you able to find a source that mentions ducks for the part of the paragraph this sentence is in? I see that this source mentions ducks, but I was not sure if you figured this source would suffice for mentioning ducks.
- In the table, I see the sentence, "Surface must be even; water depth must suit ducks; young ducks best as they don't nibble rice leaf tips." Perhaps we could expand the contraction and change "nibble" to "bite".
- Expanded and edited.
- In the table, I see, "Chinese mitten crab, from 1980s The crabs feed on zooplankton." I think we could add a semicolon or a full stop to "1980s".
- Done.
- I suggest changing instances of "while" to "as".
- This isn't an improvement in British English.
- If you make the changes, I plan to pass the article as a good article.
- Z. Patterson (talk) 22:58, 7 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap: I placed the review on hold. I will give you seven days to address the issues. Z. Patterson (talk) 00:05, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap: I passed this article as a good article. I commend your work. Z. Patterson (talk) 10:46, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap: I placed the review on hold. I will give you seven days to address the issues. Z. Patterson (talk) 00:05, 8 July 2025 (UTC)