Talk:Food House

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@Onel5969: thanks for reviewing. May I ask specifically how the sources or lead could be improved? Averageuntitleduser (talk) 11:06, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Sure. As far as the lead, it should be a brief summary of the article. Yours reads like it should be a paragraph in the history section. YouTube, Twitter, and commercial sites (e.g. Redbull) are not truly reliable sources. They can be used, but only in certain circumstances. Onel5969 TT me 11:42, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. I've tried to remove less important details from the lead. I am not the best at leads though, so if you think you could improve it, I would appreciate that.
I think the sourcing is okay. Twitter and Instagram are used only as primary sources to verify Fraxiom and Gupi's pronouns. Apple Music is used only twice to verify release dates. This all seems to follow WP:PRIMARY. Red Bull is highlighted green per WP:VG/RS and Eli Enis has written for tons of music publications. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 16:43, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review

Passed. Locust member (talk) 13:39, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Food House/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Averageuntitleduser (talk · contribs) 01:46, 28 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Locust member (talk · contribs) 23:20, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Hey, I'll start reviewing this anytime soon! :-) Locust member (talk) 23:20, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I hope you'll find it entertaining. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 23:34, 14 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Spot-check Based on this revision

  • [2] The two met in August 2017 in Orlando, Florida, during a rave that Fraxiom performed for. By the end of the month, Gupi began their first semester at Berklee College of Music in Boston, closer to where Fraxiom lived. They spent more time together and became close friends. They did not initially collaborate on music; Gupi felt self-conscious about producing hyperpop around roommates. However, the two did DJ together at parties at MAGFest in Washington, D.C.
  • [2] and [6] Initially, Gupi sent a version of None without "Thos Moser" to Dylan Brady of 100 gecs, anticipating that he would release the album on his record label Dog Show Records, a subsidiary of Diplo's Mad Decent. Brady enjoyed the album, and later "Thos Moser", and agreed.
  • [5] The success of "Thos Moser" motivated Fraxiom and Gupi to create an album together, as did the COVID-19 pandemic.
  • [10] and [11] Pitchfork and KTLA retrospectively described it as a holy text within the genre.
  • [5] Food House was inspired by pop music by the Black Eyed Peas, Far East Movement, and Kesha that the duo considered fun and timeless, as well as later music by Drain Gang, PC Music, 100 gecs, and on SoundCloud. The album is sonically varied. Matt Moen of Paper compared it to "mainlining cringe comps and bass-boosted TikToks all while listening to every top 10 pop hit between the years of 2010 and 2013 at the same time." According to Moen, the lyrics contain a "staggering" amount of skits and pop culture references. In one track, Siri confirms that Ronald Reagan is still dead, and in another, Fraxiom discusses baby food before Gupi screams at her to "just sing real shit".

@Averageuntitleduser: Awesome job here! This article seems comprehensive and I am glad to say I know all about Food House now. Tag me once you got everything handled :-) (also, the Uber Eats thing would make a great DYK) Locust member (talk) 02:37, 15 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Locust member: the review is appreciated! Replies above. I also thought the Uber Eats detail was funny, so expect to see it on the main page soon. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 04:35, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good! Sorry I may have misunderstood some of the guidelines; regardless, will  Pass this now! Locust member (talk) 13:38, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 17:30, 5 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  • Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by Averageuntitleduser (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

Averageuntitleduser (talk) 14:02, 18 April 2025 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Looks good. Nice work. No QPQ required as the nominator has under five nominations. @Averageuntitleduser: The original hook is fine, though, reading the article, this struck me as a potential option as well: ALT1 ... that music by Food House has been described as "3OH!3, SpongeBob SquarePants, Nicki Minaj, metal, and original Twitter put into a musical blender by the Joker"? Let me know if you like that or if we should just go with the original hook. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:30, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: Thanks. I like both but slightly prefer the alt1 hook you suggested, which is more punchy. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 20:48, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
OK, given that I suggested it, I think we'll need another user to approve that one. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:50, 18 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Approve ALT1. That is an awful lot of blue links though, so would recommend removing the one for "Twitter". Cielquiparle (talk) 08:11, 25 May 2025 (UTC)[reply]


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