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Nominator: Volcanoguy (talk · contribs) 02:41, 20 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:34, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Some minor grammar tweaks. Just take a look (it's been 5 months) if you see anything else. Ping me when done; it's basically ready. Sammi Brie (she/her · t · c) 21:50, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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• best preserved hyphenate

  Done. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Pillow Ridge, about 5 km (3.1 mi) south of Eve Cone, extends add appositive as indicated for legibility

  Done. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• It includes not only the Mount Edziza area, but also the Spectrum Range to the south Remove unneeded comma

  Done. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Eve Cone is a monogenetic cinder cone which are simple Comma after "cone"

  Done. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• they can remain active from days to years, but are fed by a relatively small amount of magma. Remove comma (WP:CINS)

  Done. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Loosely aggregated volcanic ejecta such as bombs, cinders and ash covers should be "cover" if "ejecta" is a plural word

  Yes, changed. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• to the northeastern end of Buckley Lake, where it meets Add indicated comma. There's a lot of sentence here with no punctuation. This should also be done in the last sentence of the next paragraph.

  Done. Volcanoguy 23:04, 22 June 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewed: 6, 8, 16, 23, 29, 31

No issues, including in Earwig.

The two images of the cone are appropriately licensed CC. The false-color map is PD-USGov. Alt text is supplied.