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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 23:02, 5 March 2025 (UTC)

Shefa Salem

Created by Lajmmoore (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 121 past nominations.

Lajmmoore (talk) 17:05, 16 February 2025 (UTC).

Interesting young artist, on fine sources, foreign sources accepted AGF. I am not happy yet with the hooks; - perhaps a fusion of facts from both might work. I'd be much more interested in the oldest flute found in Lybia than some reading in a journal, for example. Wishes for a hook: say Libyan somewhere (like the original), say somehow that she is a woman, such as "her painting". Give some idea of when this plays, such as a year. - I fixed the redirect in ALT1. - Please put new suggestions below. For the article: the wording in lead and prose should not be exactly the same, and that wording is quite close to the sources. Better rephrase both, differently. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:22, 25 February 2025 (UTC)
  • ALT2 ...that cave art, indigenous dance and an ancient flute inspired Libyan artist Shefa Salem in her work? www.middleeastmonitor.com/20211123-i-am-libya-24-year-old-artist-shefa-salem-re-imagines-libyan-history/ Lajmmoore (talk) 14:19, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
    • I think I've edited what you specified Gerda Arendt Lajmmoore (talk) 14:29, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
      thank you. You may want to check if we have articles to link to such as Archeology in Libya or that flute, but for DYK, it's fine. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:36, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
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