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The lead sentence must be concise and as clear as possible. Recently there have been repeated attempts to add the word 'analyzing' to the opening sentence. The addition clutters up the opening with wording that is redundant both in terms of what is already in the opening sentence and will the explicit mention of analysis in paragraph two. Its addition is not an improvement to the article, thus I have reverted. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 16:06, 30 September 2024 (UTC) |
The lead sentence must be concise and as clear as possible. Recently there have been repeated attempts to add the word 'analyzing' to the opening sentence. The addition clutters up the opening with wording that is redundant both in terms of what is already in the opening sentence and will the explicit mention of analysis in paragraph two. Its addition is not an improvement to the article, thus I have reverted. [[User:MrOllie|MrOllie]] ([[User talk:MrOllie|talk]]) 16:06, 30 September 2024 (UTC) |
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:Prioritizing the correct meaning. This meaning is not correct. If we don't add analytics, we've lost the meaning of bookkeeping to the audience. The most important difference between bookkeeping and sensitivity is this.Bookkeeping is the first part of the accounting process, so the work of a bookkeeper and accountant often overlaps. Bookkeeping focuses on recording and organising financial data, while accounting is the interpretation and presentation of that data. We need to make clear the difference between them. [[User:Wikinegarr|Wikinegarr]] ([[User talk:Wikinegarr|talk]]) 21:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC) |
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Lead sentence
The lead sentence must be concise and as clear as possible. Recently there have been repeated attempts to add the word 'analyzing' to the opening sentence. The addition clutters up the opening with wording that is redundant both in terms of what is already in the opening sentence and will the explicit mention of analysis in paragraph two. Its addition is not an improvement to the article, thus I have reverted. MrOllie (talk) 16:06, 30 September 2024 (UTC)
- Prioritizing the correct meaning. This meaning is not correct. If we don't add analytics, we've lost the meaning of bookkeeping to the audience. The most important difference between bookkeeping and sensitivity is this.Bookkeeping is the first part of the accounting process, so the work of a bookkeeper and accountant often overlaps. Bookkeeping focuses on recording and organising financial data, while accounting is the interpretation and presentation of that data. We need to make clear the difference between them. Wikinegarr (talk) 21:08, 30 September 2024 (UTC)