Logical (song)

Olivia Rodrigo performing on a crescent moon prop on the Guts World Tour in 2024
Olivia Rodrigo performing on a crescent moon prop on the Guts World Tour in 2024
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NØ 05:13, 15 February 2025 (UTC).

  • Olivia Rodrigo is a popular artist at the moment, but I really don't see how either hook as currently written (especially ALT1) is interesting to a broad/non-specialist audience. ALT0 might be more promising if it gets a trimming or rewrite. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 04:06, 19 February 2025 (UTC)
I have added ALT2, Narutolovehinata5.--NØ 13:48, 19 February 2025 (UTC)
The new wording is okay-ish, but now that I think about it, I wonder if an alternative hook that isn't reliant on unfamiliar names would be a better option. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:39, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
You can have a look at ALT3 in case that's preferable.--NØ 13:56, 23 February 2025 (UTC)
  • Requesting a review.--NØ 07:12, 26 February 2025 (UTC)
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