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'Advertisement' Concern
I noticed that Zodon left a mark with a concern that this entry is written too much like an advertisement. I would like some feedback from Zodon and other editors on that point and specifically how the entry can be modified to address that concern. DAG KDG (talk) 10:31, 9 September 2010 (UTC)
- I removed a few of the items that concerned me. Some of the information here seemed a little too informal (e.g. history, etc.). What sort of information you can get from 3rd party sources about the company might be a good guide to help with what sort of information to include. 3rd party references also help establish notability.
- Since you said you were new to Wikipedia, you might want to take a look at at some of the featured article grade articles about companies to get a feel for what sort of things to include, style, etc. I will take a look at the article again and try to give more specific feedback when I have a chance. Zodon (talk) 20:59, 9 September 2010 (UTC)
Non neutral?
I also felt that this, at times, read like an advertisement. Some cleanup would be useful.
→I tried to help with that a bit, as well as updating some of the information (Opower was recently purchased by Oracle, for instance). Benji2012 (talk) 17:48, 11 March 2017 (UTC)Benji2012