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GA Review
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- This review is transcluded from Talk:More than Life (Machine Gun Kelly song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Locust member (talk · contribs) 23:48, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Medxvo (talk · contribs) 23:49, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
- "sixth studio album Mainstream Sellout in March 2022" - "sixth studio album, Mainstream Sellout, in March 2022"
Done
- "June 24 2022" - "June 24, 2022"
Done
- "the deluxe edition of his 2021 All Dogs Go to Heaven extended play (EP)" - "the deluxe edition of his 2021 extended play, All Dogs Go to Heaven"
Done
- extended play can be wikilinked
Done
- Are there any critical comments that can be added?
- When I was creating this article I was unfortunately unable to find any critical analysis on the song. Since this was released on a deluxe edition and the deluxe did not receive reviews, there were no comments I could use from reviews of the album; pretty much all sources I found were just announcing that this song was being released. I did find that Anthony Fantano included it in his "Worst Tracks of the Week", but given his questionable reliability and the fact this is not a formal review, I'm not sure it would conform to WP:FANTANO.
- That makes sense, it also wouldn't be good to include just one negative review. Medxvo (talk) 15:42, 26 January 2025 (UTC)
- When I was creating this article I was unfortunately unable to find any critical analysis on the song. Since this was released on a deluxe edition and the deluxe did not receive reviews, there were no comments I could use from reviews of the album; pretty much all sources I found were just announcing that this song was being released. I did find that Anthony Fantano included it in his "Worst Tracks of the Week", but given his questionable reliability and the fact this is not a formal review, I'm not sure it would conform to WP:FANTANO.
- Chart positions can probably be added in the prose (and perhaps also in the lead?)
Done
- This source can be used instead of the New York Post source; WP:NYPOST
Done, thanks for this.
Spotchecks from this revision:
- Ref 2 - OK
- Ref 4(a) - OK
- Ref 4(c) - OK
- Ref 5(c) - OK
- Ref 5(e) - OK
- Ref 6(b) - OK
- Ref 8 - OK
- Ref 10(b) - OK
- Ref 12(b) - OK
- Ref 15 - OK
- Ref 17 - OK
I think that's all, this is a really well-written article. @Locust member: I'll put this On hold for now. I also have GANs for "No Body, No Crime" and "After Midnight", I would greatly appreciate your thoughts if you're interested in any of them :)) Medxvo (talk) 23:49, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for the quick review, Medxvo! I addressed everything. I will definitely take a look at one of your nominations sometime soon :)) Locust member (talk) 15:23, 26 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you!! Everything looks good to me now, passing :)) Medxvo (talk) 15:42, 26 January 2025 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Did you know nomination
- ... that for the song "More than Life", Glaive's verse "was so good that (Machine Gun Kelly) had to change his verse"?
- Source: NME
Improved to Good Article status by Locust member (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.
Locust member (talk) 21:17, 26 January 2025 (UTC).
Article seems more than ready for DYK, but the hook prbably shouldn't be passing off Glaive's own opinion as fact. I would simply work the quote ("It was so good that he had to change his verse...") into the hook. Let me know when that's done! Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 17:02, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Kingoflettuce: How does it look now? Sorry it took a few days.
- @Kingoflettuce: ?
- Hey there, real sorry I missed the ping somehow. All looks good now (modified the hook slightly) in terms of length and newness (improvement to GA) at the time of nomination, hookiness, well-citedness. QPQ done. Cheers! KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 07:17, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
- @Kingoflettuce: Please add an icon to indicate whether this is approved or not.--Launchballer 13:06, 3 March 2025 (UTC)
- Hey there, real sorry I missed the ping somehow. All looks good now (modified the hook slightly) in terms of length and newness (improvement to GA) at the time of nomination, hookiness, well-citedness. QPQ done. Cheers! KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 07:17, 24 February 2025 (UTC)
- @Kingoflettuce: ?
- @Kingoflettuce: How does it look now? Sorry it took a few days.