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I'd like to get people's first reactions on that draft article.
! First of all, the title. I like the wording of "Accounting for sustainability". I've tested it with people and it seems to be an attractive way to introduce the project.
The original objective here is more to propose an introduction than a deep-dive into the nuances and subtilities of C.A.R.E.
On this subject, I do not plan to go into the distinction between phase 1A and phase 1B. That would bring much confusion and people might wonder why we do not have 2 phases here
! Many sections have been inspired by the trainings and the corresponding slides but cannot be referenced accordingly in wikipedia!
Some sentences are too long, and the wording somewhat heavy. Happy to hear or read any proposition to make things a bit lighter.
I did find 2 (slightly different) definitions of capital according to CARE. I took the one on the Cerces website (https://www.cerces.org/care) which is much easier to get than the one used during the trainings (source de préoccupation, ontologie formalisable, existence d'une possibilité de régénération).
! I have tried to sort out a proper English version of the terminology for the classification of sustainability-related activities: please check the table in Methodology/Phase 3 and the wording I used.
Happy to get your comments on both form and content.
