Talk:Niu Sale

GA review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:38, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:01, 15 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:39, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]


I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:39, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Comments

  • MOS:HYPOCORISM consider whether the first sentence needs to include "Niu"
  • He started playing flag football when he was nine.[3] He grew up in Carson, California.[2] recommend combining to avoid to very short sentences.
  • Sale lettered for the Missouri Tigers of the University of Missouri in 1990 as a safety. I feel like this sentence needs to include some context that he transferred to Missouri.
  • Overall in 1990, --> In 1990,
  • He was ruled academically ineligible again in 1991 when was he ruled ineligible? You noted he didn't qualify academically, but is this the same as being ruled ineligible for a school you are currently attending?
  • played both offense and defense you could link this phrase to two-way player
  • Should Ken Sale be red linked?
  • References:
    • Formatting: Ref 1 and 26, the titles should be lower cased
    • Reliability: all appear reliable for what is being cited
    • Spot checks: 2, 5, 8, 12, 15, 22, 25

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:42, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I believe I addressed everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:51, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
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