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Nominator: Jonathan Deamer (talk · contribs) 21:12, 16 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 02:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have a go at reviewing this over the next few days. Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 02:20, 23 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

A bit early in the review, but I'll leave it there for a bit for you to expand using the available sourcing before I continue. Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 11:31, 27 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• which the publisher describes as "a radical new take on the artists' manifesto". cut.
• Have you got any information on what he did in the band?
• Listing many examples of coverage reads as promotional and excessive, "he received media attention" is sufficient.
• With an article this short, you really need to scrape sources for content (à la last months Signpost). For instance, Roadhouse took several months to produce, it came out of having rented a studio without prior direction, it is done in the medium of pen and ink etc.
• I can't tell what the Curtis Brown source is intending to verify, it may be usurped. Try to track down archived copies.

• I think Ganjei's satirical animated comedy Taste of Your Own Food, about dating in supermarkets is a bit WP:CLOP, "Taste Of Your Own Food, a satirical comedy drawn and animated by Ganjei which sees him explore the world of dating in supermarkets." The words are simply rearranged, and misses the fact that Ganjei was the one who did the animating.

Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 11:31, 27 March 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to take this out of GAN as it's been two weeks and my comments haven't been able to be actioned. I appreciate that you're on vacation. Have a go at addressing the points when available, and then if you'd like you can ping me and I can pick up the review again. Rollinginhisgrave (talk | contributions) 17:01, 10 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]