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:::In fact, that clarification ([[Assault Rifle#Etymology]]) belongs near the top, so readers don't spend extra time reading through the wrong article. Per [[WP:BRD]], we should probably revert it being [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Assault_rifle&diff=814569381&oldid=814511892 moved to the end] pending discussion here. --[[User:A D Monroe III|A&#8239;D&#8239;Monroe&#8239;III]]<sup>([[User talk:A D Monroe III#top|talk]])</sup> 17:56, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
:::In fact, that clarification ([[Assault Rifle#Etymology]]) belongs near the top, so readers don't spend extra time reading through the wrong article. Per [[WP:BRD]], we should probably revert it being [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Assault_rifle&diff=814569381&oldid=814511892 moved to the end] pending discussion here. --[[User:A D Monroe III|A&#8239;D&#8239;Monroe&#8239;III]]<sup>([[User talk:A D Monroe III#top|talk]])</sup> 17:56, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
:::[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Assault_rifle&diff=814910562&oldid=814569381 Reverted] to put Etymology back to top, per normal for WP articles, per above. --[[User:A D Monroe III|A&#8239;D&#8239;Monroe&#8239;III]]<sup>([[User talk:A D Monroe III#top|talk]])</sup> 17:17, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
:::[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Assault_rifle&diff=814910562&oldid=814569381 Reverted] to put Etymology back to top, per normal for WP articles, per above. --[[User:A D Monroe III|A&#8239;D&#8239;Monroe&#8239;III]]<sup>([[User talk:A D Monroe III#top|talk]])</sup> 17:17, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
::::The section wasn't titled etymology before, and it's the etymology of a totally different term. Putting it at the top would require combining it with the "Characteristics" section since that actually defines the term "assault rifle" rather than the term "assault weapon." Otherwise it's starting the article out talking about something else entirely for four paragraphs: it'd be like starting an article on dogs by defining at length what a cat is. [[User:Bones Jones|Bones Jones]] ([[User talk:Bones Jones|talk]]) 02:17, 30 December 2017 (UTC)

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RS qualification of a submitted masters thesis

I think we need to delete a reference that is frequently cited. The ref in question is a masters thesis. Our guideline for identifying reliable sources discusses works of WP:SCHOLARSHIP and that section includes a restriction that "Masters dissertations and theses are considered reliable only if they can be shown to have had significant scholarly influence." In the article version linked in this sentence, the masters thesis in question is reference 63. To quote our text this reference is

"A thesis presented to the Faculty of the US Army Command and General Staff College in partial fulfillment of the requirements for the degree MASTER OF MILITARY ART AND SCIENCE, Military History. Fort Leavenworth, Kansas 2006"

It was not for a PhD, but a masters. It isn't clear just what sort of "publication" this thesis has enjoyed. At present we have not been shown evidence that the thesis received any notice in subsequent scholarly works. Unless I'm missing something it does not pass our content guideline test as an RS and should therefore be deleted. I thought I'd start here to invite comment, before asking for outside opinion at the RSN. Anybody? NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 01:10, 12 October 2017 (UTC) Input from anyone welcome, and specific ping to @RAF910: NewsAndEventsGuy ([[User talk:NewsAndEventsGuy-- 01:30, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Keep We don't care if it was published, we care if it was reviewed. As a review of the organizational culture and the M16 procurement within the US military, written by a student at their own staff college, I consider it highly relevant.
Also, if we're going to start being s--RAF910 (talk) 17:40, 9 December 2017 (UTC)niffy about sources, then I'd look at the coffee table books and the NRA gung ho before this one. Andy Dingley (talk) 10:02, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I agree we should look at all the sources. This one was recently in play. You might consider it "highly relevant", but our content guideline does not mention your name or opinion. Rather a masters thesis must be "shown to have had significant scholarly influence". Instead of arguing opinions whether an exception should be made, lets instead rely on the more objective measure already required by the content guideline... has this thesis been cited anywhere else? NewsAndEventsGuy (talk) 10:56, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Keep, but it does not necessarily fulfill the sourcing requirement for any challenged material Wp:RS describes a requirement for a source to fulfill wp:ver for material which is challenged or likely to be challenged. I don't see anywhere that it is a requirement for the presence of per se of the source in Wikipedia. So, when not being depended on for fulfilling wp:ver on challenged material, IMHO presence of the source becomes a matter of editorial discretion. IMO a good guide for the latter is expertise and objectivity with regard to the subject, and at first glance this looks good in that respect. North8000 (talk) 04:55, 20 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Battle rifles and the AK-47

The section "Battle rifles" does not clearly state what a battle rifle is; that should be fixed. Also, isn't the AK-47 a battle rifle, because of its .30 caliber round? AA Quantum (talk) 02:06, 21 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Assault Weapon section

The primary subject of this article is Assault rifles. Assault Weapons is at best a subordinate subject matter. We probably shouldn't even mention Assault Weapons in this article (with the exception of the hat-note and a see also link). I recommend that we remove the section altogether in order to remove any possible confusion or ambiguity. Please comment below...

Um, no. The "possible confusion or ambiguity" already exists, regardless of what WP does. If we don't explain it, we can actually make it worse, besides simply being less informative. There's zero benefit to remove it, and some harm. --A D Monroe III(talk) 17:50, 9 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
In fact, that clarification (Assault Rifle#Etymology) belongs near the top, so readers don't spend extra time reading through the wrong article. Per WP:BRD, we should probably revert it being moved to the end pending discussion here. --A D Monroe III(talk) 17:56, 9 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Reverted to put Etymology back to top, per normal for WP articles, per above. --A D Monroe III(talk) 17:17, 11 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
The section wasn't titled etymology before, and it's the etymology of a totally different term. Putting it at the top would require combining it with the "Characteristics" section since that actually defines the term "assault rifle" rather than the term "assault weapon." Otherwise it's starting the article out talking about something else entirely for four paragraphs: it'd be like starting an article on dogs by defining at length what a cat is. Bones Jones (talk) 02:17, 30 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]