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:* {{cite journal |vauthors=McIntyre RS, Rosenblat JD, Nemeroff CB, et al |title=Synthesizing the Evidence for Ketamine and Esketamine in Treatment-Resistant Depression: An International Expert Opinion on the Available Evidence and Implementation |journal=Am J Psychiatry |volume=178 |issue=5 |pages=383–399 |date=May 2021 |pmid=33726522 |doi=10.1176/appi.ajp.2020.20081251 }} |
:* {{cite journal |vauthors=McIntyre RS, Rosenblat JD, Nemeroff CB, et al |title=Synthesizing the Evidence for Ketamine and Esketamine in Treatment-Resistant Depression: An International Expert Opinion on the Available Evidence and Implementation |journal=Am J Psychiatry |volume=178 |issue=5 |pages=383–399 |date=May 2021 |pmid=33726522 |doi=10.1176/appi.ajp.2020.20081251 }} |
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: Considering the ethical implications, it would be wise to first propose text based on those sources here on talk. {{pb}} If you are unfamiliar with how to find more recent reviews, there is a template at the top of this talk page ({{t1|Reliable sources for medical articles}}) which helps. [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2008-06-30/Dispatches|This is a bit dated]], but is also helpful. You can also format your citations to match the [[WP:CITEVAR|citation style]] of this article by using [https://citation-template-filling.toolforge.org/cgi-bin/index.cgi?ddb=&type=pubmed_id&id=33726522 this tool]. [[User:SandyGeorgia|'''Sandy'''<span style="color: green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 04:39, 28 February 2022 (UTC) |
: Considering the ethical implications, it would be wise to first propose text based on those sources here on talk. {{pb}} If you are unfamiliar with how to find more recent reviews, there is a template at the top of this talk page ({{t1|Reliable sources for medical articles}}) which helps. [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2008-06-30/Dispatches|This is a bit dated]], but is also helpful. You can also format your citations to match the [[WP:CITEVAR|citation style]] of this article by using [https://citation-template-filling.toolforge.org/cgi-bin/index.cgi?ddb=&type=pubmed_id&id=33726522 this tool]. [[User:SandyGeorgia|'''Sandy'''<span style="color: green;">Georgia</span>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 04:39, 28 February 2022 (UTC) |
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::After graduating from university and losing my student access to a lot of databases, I sort of defaulted to [https://scholar.google.com/ Google Scholar] for general research, and to [https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov PubMed] for medical searches, although I relied on the former to find the articles on ketamine. Thank you for the sources, template, and tool. [[User:Cosmic Latte|Cosmic Latte]] ([[User talk:Cosmic Latte|talk]]) 05:14, 28 February 2022 (UTC) |
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Student editing
User:Shalor (Wiki Ed) and User:Ian (Wiki Ed), this Featured article has been tagged by four different student editing courses. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:26, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- Oopsie, never mind; I see the issue was only the recent bot edits, that made old courses appear to be current because of the date the bot ran. Nothing to see here; sorry for the ping. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:01, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- I appreciate the ping. Four courses tagging this at once would be bad. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:36, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
Multiple issues
@Casliber and Cosmic Latte: multiple problems have been introduced in recent edits:
- DSM-5 etc are acronyms, not books; they should not be italicized. Since removing all of those italics will require considerable work, I hope Cosmic Latte will do it.
- Long ref names are unhelpful on refs that aren't reused; they just clog up the text.
- There is no reason to add new text that is cited to very old sources; if the text is still relevant, more recent reviews will have covered it.
- Some UNDUE text and sources not suitable for a Featured article are being added, samples: [1] [2]
I haven't checked everything, but this is enough to mean more scrutiny is needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:30, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- I responded on SandyGeorgia's user talk before I noticed her post here. Anyway, for the record, this is what I said: "Hi, I see that you removed my sentence about Aaron Beck from major depressive disorder, calling it "undue and poorly sourced". I would argue that Beck's contribution to the understanding of MDD is certainly due somewhere in the article, considering that Beck is regarded as the father of the most prominent treatment for it (cognitive behavioral therapy). I'm wondering if you felt that doesn't quite belong in the "Cause" section, though? That Beck's cognitive triad may be more effect than cause, more of a description than an explanation? I'm open to disagreement and/or compromise, but I would argue that it does indeed belong in that section, due to the cognitive-behavioral premise that cognition precedes emotion. I agree with you, though, that the source I borrowed from the cognitive-triad article is not the best, especially for a former featured article, so would you be open to the re-inclusion of the material if attributed to a more reliable source? Again, I would argue that Beck, as the father of CBT, holds more due weight than perhaps anyone else in this article." Cosmic Latte (talk) 02:53, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- This is a featured article, and the source provided for Beck's triad would not be adequate even if the article was not featured. If the content belongs here, it should be cited to a WP:MEDRS source, and one that is recent and high quality, as this is a featured article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:55, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- I've removed the italics, and I'll look for a featured article-worthy source for Beck. Cosmic Latte (talk) 03:07, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- (groan) ...ok, looking soon Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:56, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- Cas, if you are up for the work, I am willing to help make sure this is still at FA standards, but I can't do that alone, and would rather submit it to FAR unless there is a sustained commitment to restoration. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 16:40, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- (groan) ...ok, looking soon Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:56, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- I've removed the italics, and I'll look for a featured article-worthy source for Beck. Cosmic Latte (talk) 03:07, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- This is a featured article, and the source provided for Beck's triad would not be adequate even if the article was not featured. If the content belongs here, it should be cited to a WP:MEDRS source, and one that is recent and high quality, as this is a featured article. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:55, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
- I responded on SandyGeorgia's user talk before I noticed her post here. Anyway, for the record, this is what I said: "Hi, I see that you removed my sentence about Aaron Beck from major depressive disorder, calling it "undue and poorly sourced". I would argue that Beck's contribution to the understanding of MDD is certainly due somewhere in the article, considering that Beck is regarded as the father of the most prominent treatment for it (cognitive behavioral therapy). I'm wondering if you felt that doesn't quite belong in the "Cause" section, though? That Beck's cognitive triad may be more effect than cause, more of a description than an explanation? I'm open to disagreement and/or compromise, but I would argue that it does indeed belong in that section, due to the cognitive-behavioral premise that cognition precedes emotion. I agree with you, though, that the source I borrowed from the cognitive-triad article is not the best, especially for a former featured article, so would you be open to the re-inclusion of the material if attributed to a more reliable source? Again, I would argue that Beck, as the father of CBT, holds more due weight than perhaps anyone else in this article." Cosmic Latte (talk) 02:53, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
I have restored an older version here, removing the very old non-MEDRS sources used; if there is a link between creativity and depression, I am not finding it in MEDRS sources. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:19, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
Special populations
WP:MEDORDER suggests separate sections at the bottom for special populations, such as geriatrics or pregnancy or children. At Tourette syndrome, I found it more useful to work Pregnancy in to the Management section. Whatever is decided here, the article is currently inconsistent in its treatment of special populations. Pregnancy and children are spread throughout (my preference), while the elderly are in a separate section at the bottom. I suspect that happened because it was all added by one editor (and cited to one less than FA-standard source, now old).[3]
Do we want to merge the elderly content in to the body of the article, in the appropriate sections, or move all info relative to pregnancy and children to separate sections, as is done with elderly ? I am indifferent, but the article should be consistent. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:08, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
Ketamine
If nobody objects, I'm thinking about adding a line or two about ketamine treatment for MDD to the "Other medications and supplements" subsection of "Management". I've got no less than three MEDRS sources (here, here, and--with its finding of a "large and statistically significant effect of ketamine on depressive symptoms"--here) saying that ketamine is effective at treating MDD specifically, as opposed to BPD. Any thoughts? Cosmic Latte (talk) 04:06, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
- Are you familiar with WP:MEDDATE? It is not only generally useful, but Featured article must use the highest quality and most recent sources. How are you going about finding such old sources? The three you propose are seven to eight years old, when there is PLENTY of new material. Here, for example, are three more recent MEDRS-compliant sources:
- Corriger A, Pickering G (2019). "Ketamine and depression: a narrative review". Drug Des Devel Ther. 13: 3051–3067. doi:10.2147/DDDT.S221437. PMC 6717708. PMID 31695324.
{{cite journal}}: CS1 maint: unflagged free DOI (link) - Singh I, Morgan C, Curran V, Nutt D, Schlag A, McShane R (May 2017). "Ketamine treatment for depression: opportunities for clinical innovation and ethical foresight". Lancet Psychiatry. 4 (5): 419–426. doi:10.1016/S2215-0366(17)30102-5. PMID 28395988.
- McIntyre RS, Rosenblat JD, Nemeroff CB, et al. (May 2021). "Synthesizing the Evidence for Ketamine and Esketamine in Treatment-Resistant Depression: An International Expert Opinion on the Available Evidence and Implementation". Am J Psychiatry. 178 (5): 383–399. doi:10.1176/appi.ajp.2020.20081251. PMID 33726522.
- Corriger A, Pickering G (2019). "Ketamine and depression: a narrative review". Drug Des Devel Ther. 13: 3051–3067. doi:10.2147/DDDT.S221437. PMC 6717708. PMID 31695324.
- Considering the ethical implications, it would be wise to first propose text based on those sources here on talk. If you are unfamiliar with how to find more recent reviews, there is a template at the top of this talk page ({{Reliable sources for medical articles}}) which helps. This is a bit dated, but is also helpful. You can also format your citations to match the citation style of this article by using this tool. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 04:39, 28 February 2022 (UTC)
- After graduating from university and losing my student access to a lot of databases, I sort of defaulted to Google Scholar for general research, and to PubMed for medical searches, although I relied on the former to find the articles on ketamine. Thank you for the sources, template, and tool. Cosmic Latte (talk) 05:14, 28 February 2022 (UTC)