Talk:Christine Hakim
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on September 10, 2011. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Teguh Karya had to fight for Christine Hakim's right to act in Cinta Pertama (First Love) after his producer said her breasts were too small? | |||||||||||||
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Photograph
Need to replace her picture with a larger preferably free use/public domain photo and upload it to wikimedia:commons
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Christine Hakim/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk · contribs) 22:49, 3 November 2011 (UTC) I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: none found.
Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 22:51, 3 November 2011 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
One of these films was Eros Djarot's 1988 film Tjoet Nja' Dhien, in which Hakim was cast as Cut Nyak Dhien, an Acehnese guerilla leader, which won the 1989 Cannes Film Festival award for Best International Film, being screened in Le Semaine de Critique. would be better split into smaller sentences as the subject becomes confused.Hakim later described the role as a "huge honour" and "very challenging"; she also credits the role for answering her questions on her identity. confusion of tense.In producing the film, she chose young director Garin Nugroho for his talent and took the leading role. ungrammatical.Aside from acting, Hakim is also a documentary filmmaker. . ungrammaticalShe has also begun producing a documentary on the Dayak people of Kalimantan When, be specific.The prose could do with a copy-edit throughout to improve the flow.
- a (prose):
- I've done a copyedit. Hopefully it is up to par now. Crisco 1492 (talk)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- Done Crisco 1492 (talk)
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- reasonable coverage
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- NPOV
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Stable
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Two images used, but the Julia Roberts image at an awards ceremony does not add any thing to the article.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Gone. Crisco 1492 (talk)
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed. Jezhotwells (talk) 23:28, 3 November 2011 (UTC)
- OK, I think it passes muser now, happy to list as a good article. Congratulations! Jezhotwells (talk) 02:10, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Thanks a lot! Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:53, 4 November 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the review. I will start working on the issues you have spotted. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:30, 3 November 2011 (UTC)
Article quality
Since it has been awhile since the last assessment, I have had another look at the current version and noticed the following:
- The "Awards" and "Filmography" sections have "unsourced" banners from 2022.
- The "Biography" section has numerous paragraphs, and should probably be broken up with level 3 headings.
- The lead does not have more recent information and events in it.
Should this article go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 18:02, 28 February 2025 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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- Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:11, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
The "Awards" and "Filmography" sections have "unsourced" banners from 2022. The "Biography" section has numerous paragraphs, and should probably be broken up with level 3 headings. The lead does not have post-2011 information and events in it. Z1720 (talk) 22:55, 27 March 2025 (UTC)
- Delist Concerns remain. Z1720 (talk) 00:41, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
- For the record, I've nuked the unsourced sections and split up the bio section, although this is probably a breadth fail now and the other issues have not been resolved. charlotte 👸♥ 03:44, 29 April 2025 (UTC)
