Talk:2021 Western North America heat wave

Western North America is more precise and preferable in the title

Western North America is more precise and preferable in the title

Some more sources missed in the article

I've got no time adding it now, but I hope other editors will make use of these: [1], [2], [3], [4], [5], [6], [7] ([8]), [9], [10], [11] Szmenderowiecki (talk) 18:45, 7 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

And more (some not peer-reviewed): [12], [13], [14] [15] (summary), [16], [17], [18] Szmenderowiecki (talk) 15:47, 16 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Damage estimate?

I saw on the NCEI billion dollar page that there was $8.9 billion due to heat waves. It credits it to the whole year but only mentions 229 deaths, the same as here. So should we cite this damage total? 108.170.65.170 (talk) 00:53, 8 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The NOAA treats it as a single event, and since this heatwave was the one that essentially caused the vast majority of the damages, the figure can and should be used for the heatwave. I've gone ahead and added the damage estimate. LightandDark2000 🌀 (talk) 11:33, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Good article nomination (?)

Starting Larger Edits for Concision

Glanced at this article again and noticed it has an "excessive citations" flag, which seems appropriate since we're over 300. It looks like people have mostly added minor amounts of new info, without checking if it's overlapping with old citations. I started to clean things up but I didn't want to make extensive edits suddenly and unilaterally.

My plan is to begin by removing the long lists of citations after certain statements that definitely don't need them, probably starting in the heat records section.Louisvaught (talk) 00:52, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Just finished the edits to get rid of the excessive citations. The article could probably use further editing, if someone can find singular citations for a lot of these lists of fatalities/heat records that would remove potentially dozens of almost-overlapping sources.
In addition, it seems to me like the article has many lists of things - such as local heat records - that are incomplete lists and don't add substantial info to the article, but require many citations. I'm of the feeling they could probably be removed, but I've already done pretty bold edits to this page so I left off at this point. Louisvaught (talk) 17:10, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]