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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 18:26, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
Hi! I will review this article due to the ongoing GAN backlog. --Vacant0 (talk) 18:26, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
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Comments
General
- In the infobox, the {{small}} template should be removed per MOS:SMALL.
- Unused parameters can be removed too.
- In the "Films" section, an apostrophe at the end of the should be removed.
- Also, "severely disfigured man" can be unlinked since Jason has been already linked above.
- Link hatchet.
- Link protagonist.
- Rest of the prose is alright.
- The article is neutral and stable. It also acts in accordance with the manual of style.
- I don't have any recommendations for the lede, it covers the article pretty well.
- An optional change: you could change the quote boxes to the {{quote box}} template, that can be seen on Alice (Friday the 13th) for example.
Images
- Images are alright and properly licensed.
Sources
- Sources in the infobox are not needed since the information has been already covered by references in the main part of the article.
- All of the sources are reliable.
- I've checked the sources that are available, copyvio is unlikely.
@The Baudelaire Fortune: I'm putting this on hold until these minor issues get fixed. --Vacant0 (talk) 19:46, 3 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Vacant0 I have addressed the issues. The Baudelaire Fortune (talk) 18:23, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
- Promoted. --Vacant0 (talk) 21:42, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
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