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Happy editing! AntiDionysius (talk) 14:55, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ChrysGalley was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

 The comment the reviewer left was:

With so many YouTube and internal sourcing this isn't sourced by the usual standards. Moreover under WP:SIRS we need much better sourcing than this, most companies won't make it, and that includes this one.

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ChrysGalley (talk) 15:45, 22 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrysGalley i guess that's understandable. I wasn't able to find more RS so i'm going to abandon the draft, but if you have the time i would appreciate feedback on the article's style, since this is the first article i've written. no worries if not :) ^{themoon@talk:~$} 21:33, 22 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, and I think at the moment that is realistic. You can keep the draft live by making a change to the draft every few months. After 6 months with zero changes it may get deleted. Take a personal back up just in case. After all if the Wall Street Journal rings up tomorrow then you are in business, and they do have a newspaper to fill. Also consider whether this may head to a story about Bernard. This is covered by Wikipedia:Notability (people) and there are say 3 press or radio stories in enough depth then the article won't need to be changed much.

As for the style, it's mostly OK to good, the only two sections which aren't very encyclopedic are the first paragraph under Founding - not many encyclopedias will use the word passionated (!). And similar the first paragraph under Later Ventures - the job offers is promotional since actually it didn't happen. The rest is pretty much OK, so by all means consider writing another article in the mean time, perhaps on something that is easier to pass the notability hurdles. If you are getting specialist science / rocket magazines then you may well spot something interesting worthy of an article. ChrysGalley (talk) 21:54, 22 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

many thanks for your time and pointers :) ^{themoon@talk:~$} 22:09, 22 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Themoonisacheese! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ChrysGalley (talk) 15:45, 22 October 2025 (UTC)[reply]