This review is transcluded from Talk:Lumberjack Band/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:49, 11 April 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 22:39, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Feel free to disagree with anything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:07, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• The redirect Go! You Packers! Go! is used throughout this article but the actual article is called Go! You Packers Go!.
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• Image licensing looks good.
• The lead says Lombardi "renamed them to "Green Bay Packers Band" but I don't see that in the body. The body says ""The Green Bay Packer Band"
  • Reworded a bit and made the naming consistent. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:08, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "traced it roots" → "traced its roots"
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "who would play in the parking lot" should that be "whom" since the plural "small groups" precedes it?
  • Changed to "that". « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "As part of the Band's revival" Maybe a word other than "revival" should be used here. I don't see where it was disbanded yet.
  • Changed to "reinvigoration". The source uses the word "rebirth". « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:08, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "In 1938, the Packers took over control of the Band, formalizing its membership and performances. A year later, Wilner Burke was named as the band director, a role he would hold until 1982.[9] The Packers wanted to make the atmosphere at games more lively and engaging.[8]" → switch the second and third sentences around so the Burke stuff is together and Packers stuff is together "In 1938, the Packers took over control of the Band, formalizing its membership and performances. The Packers wanted to make the atmosphere at games more lively and engaging. A year later, Wilner Burke was named as the band director, a role he would hold until 1982.[9][8] Burke played for the Band and the American Legion band in the 1930s"
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:08, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "During this time, local high school musical groups would take part in the Band's performances" → "During this time, local high school musical groups took part in the Band's performances"
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "In the 1961, " remove the
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "played swing and marching music," swing music is already linked above
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• "Jane Sorgel, a majorette" already linked
  • Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:00, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Spot checks

• Link 2 doesn't work?
  • Removed the ref and rewrote/removed material accordingly. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:34, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]
• Ref 4 looks good
• Ref 10 looks good.
• Ref 13 looks good.
• Ref 23 looks good.

Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 22:38, 3 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]

WikiOriginal-9, all done. Thanks! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:34, 4 July 2025 (UTC)[reply]