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Nominator: FuzzyMagma (talk · contribs) 17:19, 11 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TheNuggeteer (talk · contribs) 06:14, 1 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

This article looks interesting. Comments will probably be made over the weekend. Thanks, 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 06:14, 1 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "Kigab was known for being a "showman"." Please expand this lone sentence. Y

• fixed/merged FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:21, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "Al-Ghaba district," remove comma.

  amended FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:30, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 10:26, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "inTangasy [ar]" please add a space between.

  amended FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:30, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 10:26, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "percussionist and choir" should it be choir member?

  corrected FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 10:26, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "But he was a swimmer from a young age." Does 'but' need to be there?

  removed FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 10:27, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "and was the first member of the swimming team in the club." please clarify. This seems confusing.

  removed FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 10:29, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• "Kigab claimed crossing the Channel" this sentence seems grammatically incorrect.

  fixed FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y

• "on WPMSF ranking" make this plural.

  fixed FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y

• "fter coming 13 (out of 14) on 10 July race" what does '10 July race' mean?

  fixed FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y

• "he did not finish the Traversée Internationale du lac Memphrémagog in Quebec" does this need to be included?

  I think it needed, just to be consistent FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y

• Merge the lone sentence.

  done FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:46, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

  Y

• "crossed the Saginas Lake in 15 hours 3 time, and participating" this transition does not look correct. Y

  fixed FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:20, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Merge small last paragraph. Y

  done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:07, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Merge two last paragraphs. Y

• these are two different topic, death and citizenship FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:18, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• More about his death; many people would have a reaction, right? Y

• a small mention from the Transitional Sovereignty Council. I include it FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:18, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Same newspaper in source 1 and 45. Y

• merged FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Same source in source 36 and 38. Y

• merged FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Same source in source 40 and 42. Y

• merged FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• I think you need to make the archive the main link in source 2. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Source 4 doesn't mention the spouse. Y

• it does. this is his son. go to section personal at the endFuzzyMagma (talk) 08:49, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Is it only me or is there something wrong in source 5? Y

• A pdf should open for you FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• For source 7, add the newspaper. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Add the newspaper for source 9. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• For source 10, make the archived link primary. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Source 11 doesn't mention the facts stated.
• Source 14 is an unreliable source. Y

• Why? it is an interview with Sara Gadalla Gubara FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• For Source 16, add the website. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• For Source 21, make the archived link the main one. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Source 25 is unreliable. Y

• Why?it is an interview on Omdurman TV. There is nothing wrong with using primary sources for straight facts (see WP:PRIMARYCARE and I have already started the sentence clarifying that this Kigab claim. FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Source 27 (Blogspot) is not reliable.

• removed FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• There is still another one in the current source 16.

• Add the date for source 28. Y

• done FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Source 30 isn't correct. Y

• 30 is for " then-president of the National Transitional Council" sentence only, which is not mentioned in the pargraph source. I have moved the source closer FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Something is wrong with source 36. Y

• yes, the link stopped working, and found a better link FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Kigab isn't mentioned in source 37. Y

• correct. I must admit this sentence I took from 1996 Sudanese general election and I should have fact checked it. I removed the sentence FuzzyMagma (talk) 19:05, 11 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 10:27, 4 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@FuzzyMagma: Updates? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 12:17, 5 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@TheNuggeteer give me until the weekend to have a look. FuzzyMagma (talk) 07:40, 6 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@FuzzyMagma: It has been nearly a week since my review. You still have not done any edits. Are you still going to tackle this article? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 05:47, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I am, sorry I understand your frusturation but I am just dealing with some stuff but will tackle this soon. Thank you for taking the time to review the article. FuzzyMagma (talk) 07:28, 10 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed the remaining issues. Passing. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 (My "blotter") 04:16, 12 August 2025 (UTC)[reply]